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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 14)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:19pm | IP Logged
Another different, yet lovely scenario for ShaNak.....Superb update VattyClap......
 
But the way you discribed Shaan meeting Shayeri made me queezyOuch....I can't read on if you show Shaan falling for her....SorryEmbarrassed......
 
Edit : On sceond thoughts....That's unfair of meEmbarrassed.....Write your story Vatty.....Just tell me when ShaNak are safeBig smile......I will then read all the updates together....


Edited by The_May_Rose - 24 March 2011 at 4:22pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 7:04pm | IP Logged
Lovely! I so adore this concept, the whole symbolism with the title and the fact that they have known each other since childhood...I think your writing makes the characterization and the plot so interesting..the words are truly fluid here as they flow with such smoothness that it completely captures my attention...Can't wait to read more of this amazingness....
My personal fav was the part where Shaan makes the connection through Khanak's bangles and the cute little detail of not liking rain on Khanak's part as well as "Shaan, your Khanak"...so good! Keep it up...
-imane


Edited by imane568 - 24 March 2011 at 7:11pm

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
twinoooooooooooHugHugHugHugHugHug beautiful update loveed itHeart awesomeeeeeeHeart

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
OOOOOOOOOOOOOoh!! Ahh! Lovely Vats!!
 
Wow, embers rekindled for sure!! Anticipating a lot of hot stuff in the near future!!LOL
 
Love, Simi

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Posted: 25 March 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
first of all tell me it was 3rd chap or 4th chap?????????

lovely update vatty!!!!!!!!!!
had to read the earlier updates to remember the story.........
but nw its fixed in my brain......... jarasa boards ke liye jagah khali karna tha n waise bhi u were nt updating so studies tuk dat place...........

ok just kidding............
this part was awesome.............loved it..........
nw plz regularly update kar............
when u updating nxt part????????

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Thanks for all the likes and comments :D

helps me write better :D

updating soon :D

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Edited by vatsalya - 29 October 2011 at 2:02pm

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Hey!!!!

Fantastic update yaar!!!!!!!!!!

Just loved it ... haaye!!! Kya pyar hain .... itnon barson baad bhi they are so emotionally attached.

I loved it...Please update the next part soon.

~Cheers,
Dish


PS: Am I the first to respond? too good hain na ... dekho kitni despo hoon main FF ke liye

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