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*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) (Page 12)

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Wowwwww... vatty... shall reply after getting myself up-to-date.. WinkSmile chupi rustom nikli tum!!Big smile

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Hi vatty(can i call u that) thanks for updating.............
loved the update awesome & wonderful.....................Thumbs Up
finally they met & don't want to leave each other..............lovely.................

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Yup angel, you can call me that aaram se :P

thanks for liking it Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Vatty..great update DearThumbs Up..updated after long break but update beautifully..loved it
Finaly shaan and khanak  meet each other...awesome and wonderful ...
Pl.update next part soon ..eagrly waiting for shanak marraige and after that their SREmbarrassedROFL
ROFLROFLROFLv

Edited by Deepali88 - 24 March 2011 at 8:44am

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:43am | IP Logged
OMG Vattie!
That was so awesome!!!
Seriously you are a great writer!

Love all the characterization you have given, subtly slipping in tid-bits of info during the flow of the story.I like getting to know your ShaNak this way!
Okay so when I read the part where Shayeri reminded Shaan of Khanak I thought that maybe Shayeri is related to them somehow...
Waise if you were planning to make it a love triangle of any sort abhi ke abhi abandon ker do idea!

Love their meeting!How they reacted with abandon initially, back to where they had left but how they gradually realized and grew conscious.VERY realistic!

Love the last line-'the dying embers had been rekindled!'

For someone so young, you write really well.
Chalo now start working on the next update!



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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vatsalya

Yup angel, you can call me that aaram se :P

thanks for liking it Embarrassed
don't thanks me i remeber ur FF because i loved it & i told u yesterday to update it..........& u did it today ...........i am very happy........................
pls update soon this time & don't forget to update it...........LOL

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
ha... Vatty very nice part...
 
But i didn like Shaan finding Shayeri attractive... or whatever..
 
And ur " tensed " Khanak was bang on when she said..Shaan.. your khanak...rather than holding herself back for some unknown reason..
 
Abbey no triangle...huh....

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
nyc one....
there will be a flashback rite??...waitin for it!

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