*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) - Page 12

Hey!!!!

Fantastic update yaar!!!!!!!!!!

Just loved it ... haaye!!! Kya pyar hain .... itnon barson baad bhi they are so emotionally attached.

I loved it...Please update the next part soon.

~Cheers,
Dish

PS: Am I the first to respond? too good hain na ... dekho kitni despo hoon main FF ke liye

Wow !! What a flow......itni smooth writing !!! it went on and finished too quickly !!
Aagey likho jaldi !!!

I loved - "Family is not about blood....." loved absolutely !!
another one - when Shaan smartly hugs her and plants a kiss in front of aunty....lol... !!

Well written !!!
Edited by -Manita- - 13 years ago

LOL.......Hahaha....Shaan is such a super Nautanki !!

twinooo me in lovee with ur writing❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ loveeed it❤️

hei vatty,
u updated only after reading the post (ruk ruk na..) right..else u wud test our patience..really v started forgetting the story.but thanks for getting back to it..too good of u in that..

will come back to comment*edited*

nautanki shaan is simply superb.shaan said that he is taking khanak out..oh god..already they r planning to bring them together..bechare..aunty aur sheyari ko patha nahi tha ki ye dono acting kar rahe hein as if they met just this morning..however sweet update..hereafter dont take long gaps..continue soon..
Edited by RB81 - 13 years ago

hey vatty 

loved the update Vatty! keep it up!👍🏼

Omg  Vatty..you updated it😲..thanks a Lot dear😃
will be comes after a Short Break  and then give comments😉

@vatty sweet heart sorry for the late reply thanx for the pm..

Loved this part😊just like i love u😊

wow brilliant update pls continue soon