*Dying Embers* Pg 26 Chapter 8 :) - Page 11

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Arre I had the triangle in mind....that story became tragic to the point that Shaan left everything and went back to New Jersey🤣

So I scrapped the idea!

Manita bows.....................* Sashtaang Dandvat Pranaam*....🤣...............

Thanks Vatty....................thanks a lot for scrapping the triangle..........will remian indebted forever 🤣...

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Manita bows.....................* Sashtaang Dandvat Pranaam*....🤣...............

Thanks Vatty....................thanks a lot for scrapping the triangle..........will remian indebted forever 🤣...

wowhowhoo.. Vatty... Went through Part 1 and 2...

Another different, yet lovely scenario for ShaNak.....Superb update Vatty👏...... Edited by The_May_Rose - 13 years ago

Lovely! I so adore this concept, the whole symbolism with the title and the fact that they have known each other since childhood...I think your writing makes the characterization and the plot so interesting..the words are truly fluid here as they flow with such smoothness that it completely captures my attention...Can't wait to read more of this amazingness....
My personal fav was the part where Shaan makes the connection through Khanak's bangles and the cute little detail of not liking rain on Khanak's part as well as "Shaan, your Khanak"...so good! Keep it up...
-imane
Edited by imane568 - 13 years ago

twinooooooooooo🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 beautiful update loveed it❤️ awesomeeeeee❤️

OOOOOOOOOOOOOoh!! Ahh! Lovely Vats!!

first of all tell me it was 3rd chap or 4th chap?????????

Thanks for all the likes and comments :D

Edited by vatsalya - 12 years ago