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"ACTION ACTION"- Funny Maneet OneShot | Page1-4

tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
Hi buddies,
some of you know me as the writer of "Promise and Pyar" FF. now i'm back with an oneshot.

those who have read Promise and Pyar know what "ACTION" means. for others,lemme tell that FF,according to Maaneet, ACTION means 'x' rated things. this hilarious OS is based on that ACTION concept.

i'll update this OS in small parts in this thread.



i've some problem in sending PM to all.sorry for that.

link to my FF Promise and Pyar is
Now this FF is being continued by our dear Mina(Mirinalini)

Edited by tonyahk - 29 January 2011 at 2:26am

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Part 1

in 'Promise and Pyar' maaneet got married 3 months ago and they only know what ACTION this OS is based on that.

it's 9.30 p.m.
maaneet and dadi are watching TV.
Maan is browsing through the channels and comes across 'StarOne' channel & GHSP is going on.he wants to watch news and when he is about change the channel....
G:(shouts)ji rukhiye
M:(by tht time he has changed the channel)kya hua geet?
G:maan,go 2 StarOne
G:i want 2 watch tht serial
M:which serial?
G: Geet Hui Sabse Parayi
M:no geet.i want to watch News
G:(snatches d remote from him and turns to StarOne)

Edited by tonyahk - 26 January 2011 at 2:25pm

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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:56pm | IP Logged
Part 2
M:geet, gimme d remote. i want to watch news. it's important.
D(dadi):(is silently watching maaneet's fight over the remote)
G:no maan i won't give the remote
G:dekhiyena maan. Lord Ram is wearing shirt in this serial. he is looking very nice with that shirt
M:geet, ye Lord Ram nai hai. Gurmeet hai Gurmeet.
G:it doesn't matter who is he?now all my concerns are about his shirt i'm really very happy to see him with shirt
D:(teases)geet beta, he will strip his shirt at any time. so be careful
G:(says innocently)ji dadima
M:geet gimme d remote
G:no maan,....

Edited by tonyahk - 26 January 2011 at 2:41pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Part 3

G:no maan,it is very rare to see Lord Ram with lemme watch. moreover you are a big fan of Gurmeet hena?
M:(lost his patience,snatches d remote from her and turns to a news channel)
G:maan remote deejiye. dekhiyena dadima.
D:(smiles)geet beta,we can watch the repeat telecast of GHSP. now lets watch news
G:(disappointed&says feebly)ji dadima
M:([email protected])
G:(selftalk)dust danav. mein bhi dekthi you are going to watch news.

all three start to watch news silently

News Reader: hi good evening. this is Akshay with the late night edition of news bulletin....

Edited by tonyahk - 26 January 2011 at 2:56pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
tonyaaaaaa  .....  

my buddy is back!!!             yipppeeeeee  PartyDancing

cant wait for Action Action   LOL .. am already getting excited

btw is your interview over ?




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tonyahk Goldie

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
Hi Sana,

happy to see you dear.

my interview preparations are fine. now i'm waiting for my written exam results. after that only i'll come to know about my interview date.

meanwhile, i thought to post this OS. Hope you would like it.

lets see what geet is going to do to your Maan Ring Khurana.

143 dear


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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Part 4
G:(remebers ACTION Akshay,decides to tease maan&she says loudly) wow. Akshay aur late night edition? kya bath hain?
Maan and dadi confused
NR(News Reader): in the capital city,people are protesting against the inaction of authorities
M&D r shocked
M:kya hua geet?
G:people are protesting against inACTION? chee chee babaji! ye kaise log hai?
M:(understands what 'inACTION' geet is talking about and he whispers in her ear)geet,ye woh ACTION nai hai
D:(doesn't know what geet is talking about &dadi starts to explain)geet beta,what is wrong in protesting against inaction?

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