hi friends this is my very first attempt to write a scene ever
I am not a writer but got inspired by all the wonderful writers here and I wanted to just write something romantic mre like Anmol's thought and Ragini feeling him close . Let me know if you like it.
Ragini has very attractive blouses .. and its impossible for her dear husband not to notice it.
Ok I donno what I am saying but to cut things short this is one scene which came in my mind..
Ragini who is dressing up to go out is just finished wearing her saree ,
but forgot to put the dori of her blouse since she got distracted
seeing some clothes lying on the bed and the towle thrown on the bed.
Finishing those errands and putting back the towel on the stand she goes back to the dresser.
back at the dresser she started applying some eye liner and make up and
Anmol walks in looking at his beautiful wife who looks soo divine and
stunning in the Burgundy saree and her hair left loose on one side.
walks in and her sight catches his attention, but he goes straight to
the console table and places his bag there and slowly truns around
thinking that she has left,but she was still sitting and doing her touch
ups, he could'nt stop
himself from glances at his beauiful wife.
He keeps and looking at her and she has'nt noticed him since she is a little uncomfortable dressing up when he is around but
clears his throat so that she knows he has come inside and Ragini puts
her bindi on and stand up and is a little uneasy since she was looking
at herself in the mirror and she spots him looking at her Smile
She looks at him and says "You are back pretty early!!"
Anmol looks at her and he cannot take his eyes of her beautiful face
" Well..I finised my meetings early and so.., how about you are you
going out somewhere , talking a few more steps towards her direction..
Ragini looking around for her mobile on the dressing table
since she just had it before she got distracted with the errands "
Actually I have to attend a kitty party at a friends house, I wasn't
interested but she insisted...!!"
her not so happy to go tells her" I am glad you are going out to socialize since you keep yourself so secluded at home..!!"
Ragini looks at Anmol and smiles" Thanks Anmol now that you have also mentioned then I will surly go"
turns around moving her hair to the side which had fallen back to
finally pick her mobile up when Anmol notices something hanging out of
her blouse and her bare skin is showing.
He keeps looking at her
beauty and is engrossed on the beauty of his wife and suddenly gets back
to his senses thinking should he tell her that the dori is not tied but
he takes the courage and tells her" Ra ragini your blouse .. !!"
" a sudden discomfort ran through her mind.. How could I be so
careless...I should have first tied my blouse ki doori before starting
my make up.. What can I do now how can i ask him to leave all of a sudden
.. So many things were tuning in her mind..
Ragini turns around
and looks at Anmol who looks away as he is still mesmerized by what he
saw and ragini turns around and moves her hair to the left side and
tries to tie her doori by looking in the mirror and reaching the two
strings to tie..
She is struggling and
Anmol who doesn't want to see what she is trying to do slowly starts moving away .
Ragini is still struggling and Anmol feels I may be doing wrong but since no one is around shall I go and help her or not..
He keeps thinking walking close and never realizes he is closeness as she is pretty much resting against him.
feels his closeness and suddenly stops and she is facing the mirror .
Anmol's hands are trembling but he composes himself and feels I am her
husband and I am just helping her out and he picks the two strings of
the doori and ties the first knot..
.He pulls it a little tight then realize maybe its too tight and is afraid to loosen it but the material is flexible and looses according
to her back length
Ragini feels the touch of his
fingers on her bare back and she feels the chill down her spine and
looks at Anmol through the mirror. He looks into her eyes as if telling
her I hope its OK since no one is around I thought of helping you.
Then he makes loops like bunny ears with the strings again and ties it to the first knot.
his fingers he continues to feel the back of her neck , Ragini still
standing in front of the mirror feelings his hands making its way to her
neck line and walking his way to her ears...
She couldn't match his
gaze even through the mirror and she closed her eyes to feel his fingers
travel along her right earlobe to trace the right side of
her face back and forth to finally tracing her beautiful partly bare
His touch gave her shivers and he could sense it , and his
breath was making her heart breath faster as he slowly and gently placed
a kiss on her nape and softly whispered "Ragini you look beautiful "
and brushed his face against her face.
Her eyes are still closed trying to sink
just what happened.. He kissed her in the most passionate way and she drowned in those sensitive touches by Anmol.
Slowly opening her eyes she looks at him through the mirror and then turns around and looks at him again..
Ragini in a deep soft tone says " Thanks!!"
who is still positioning his fingers trying to finish his job keeps
looking at her intensely and all he could hear is Thanks Thanks ringing
in his ears ..
Then last Thanks brought him back to his senses...
Anmol smiles and says " Your welcome"
He steals a last glance on her before she walks out of the door and he runs his fingers through his hair , telling him self..
What was I actually doing to her.. I must be totally a gonner
Hope you liked my attempted to show some romance...