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peacefulblossom

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

The names Bahar....

I dont understand why my parents called me that too...its a mystery LOL

you brought lot of happiness and smile to your parents, thats why they named u "bahar" I feel...just as u r doing in the forum, spreading happiness and smiles..

Beautiful name...God Bless u

Awww thank you Embarrassed

Thats a sweet way of interpreting my name Smile

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by starz4me

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

6. Behind HL you see a tall male figure...with tight trousers and tight white shirt...and pointy hair....But his face is covered with a mask....

7." No one mess around with my...... family "(whispering the family part.) shouts the new person

8. Nivi...Viren...Dadi... stare at the 'hero'....Wondering who the person is and why he is saving them....

Rest to continue...

EPISODE freeze... to tired to write anymore....Bani feel free to continue.

P.s we need an entry music for the masked super hero...

back ground song

"andheri raaton mein...sun san rahon par...Shahenshah..." LOL

How would you continue the story?

I'm trying to work out how to insert pictures into the forum? Any idea? Or do I need to upload it else where and place the link here?

Sorry to interrupt but readng ur point 6......the entry of a mystery person......made me think of Sid..........tight trousers n tight white shirt......

(it is Sid Wink

) shuuuuush its a mystery atm LOL

Want to add anything about how the story should proceed?

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

Originally posted by starz4me

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

6. Behind HL you see a tall male figure...with tight trousers and tight white shirt...and pointy hair....But his face is covered with a mask....

7." No one mess around with my...... family "(whispering the family part.) shouts the new person

8. Nivi...Viren...Dadi... stare at the 'hero'....Wondering who the person is and why he is saving them....

Rest to continue...

EPISODE freeze... to tired to write anymore....Bani feel free to continue.

P.s we need an entry music for the masked super hero...

Sorry to interrupt but readng ur point 6......the entry of a mystery person......made me think of Sid..........tight trousers n tight white shirt......

(it is Sid Wink

) shuuuuush its a mystery atm LOL

Want to add anything about how the story should proceed?

For that i have to read all 7 pages first................hmmpphhh..........lot of work........

I'm just kidding............I'll love to...........but let me get to know what r u 2 guys upto with ur story.

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:14pm | IP Logged

@ Sonal,

we are keeping that secret...we will make a blast once the masked man is unmasked...

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged

[QUOTE=starz4me

For that i have to read all 7 pages first................hmmpphhh..........lot of work........

I'm just kidding............I'll love to...........but let me get to know what r u 2 guys upto with ur story.

[/QUOTE]

pls do...we both are literally falling at others feet to contribute something funny...we are acting like the Indian politicians, begging for votes,(in our case a funny trcak)

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 5:24am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

Originally posted by starz4me

For that i have to read all 7 pages first................hmmpphhh..........lot of work........

I'm just kidding............I'll love to...........but let me get to know what r u 2 guys upto with ur story.

pls do...we both are literally falling at others feet to contribute something funny...we are acting like the Indian politicians, begging for votes,(in our case a funny trcak)

They all seem to be running away from us LOL

My computer crashed and died yesterday Confused

Edited by peacefulblossom - 01 February 2011 at 5:25am

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Chand Chupa Badal Mein..Kahaani Superhero Ka...

The story so far...

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

1. Viren is not happy with Nivi's performance, that she is taking long time to point fingers at Sid in public. He thinks of someone else.

2. Who else than Divya, who already is a selfish giant and jealous.

3. He comes and says "Bhabi I saw u and bhaiya in park, facing each other, I was at your back side, you were wearing the same sweater (courtesy, recycling sweaters for all actors). I could see Sid's face, not yours.

4. Divya gets all curious and jealous and almost sure, its Nivi, who went with Sid to park.

5. She runs to her mom HL.

6. HL tells her that Sid is innocent and Nivi "uske upar dor e daal rahee hain" and in mind, she thinks, this is the right time to finsh off Nivi and Viren, so that Sid and Divya can live in peace , she gives her "bhayankar eye expressions".

7. HL hires some goons, stealing money from Pratap. By the time, Pratap had arranged this money for repaying for his amma's operation.

8. Money missing from home, as HL stole that for hiring goons. Keshav is blamed for stealing money,

9. HL by trick calls Nivi and Viren in the park, and says she has some info about Sid. Nivi shocked, Viren curious.

10. Both lans up in park, where goons are waiting.

11, Goons start beating Viren and abusing Nivi...

more will follow...

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

12. What HL didn't know what Viren was action filled...and these goons were nothing for him

13. HL gets annoyed and does something shocking

14. She takes scarf off and ties it around her waist

15. Ready for action....no one knew that she was a black belt in karate before getting married

rest to follow.....

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

EPISODE Freeze:

tomorrow's promo

HL applying martial arts, beating goons left and right ! Nivi surprised and eyes getting bigger, she does not know whether to laugh or cry...Viren does not know where to hide from this "lady DON".

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

16. Nivi looks up at HL in shock....no way will she start fighting

17. But to her astonishment HL does a flying kick on one of the goons in frustration (can you actually imagine this )

18. Viren stops and stare....unable to believe his eyes...

19. Nivi's eyes grows bigger and bigger in shock...as HL beats goons left right and centre.

20. "Wait till I finish these useless goons off and then I'm coming for you Viren"...screams HL

21. Viren as a shock of his life...Starts to look for a place to hide...seeing HL doing karate moves..(."Aren't I supose to be the hero here? I'm going to get killed, Run away Viren...I can plot later" Viren talks to himself in his head.)

22. One of the goons bang a bottle on his head, when he was trying to hide himself and busy talking in his head.

23. Nivi screams "DADI"

24. We hear some music....(Bani your turn to find the right music here)

25. You see Dadi with her scarf warped around her forehead...ready for action...

Rest to follow...

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

Song... Aaya aaya toofan

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

1. it seems Dadi has training in kung-fu, that no one was aware of.

2. Dadi coming in her kung-fu style and HL still in karate mode, flyimg and hitting the goons.

3. Dadi telling Nivi and Viren " fikar not, jab tak teri dadai zinda hain, kuch nahin hoga meri chhui-mui or damad ko" Nivi, tu baas Viren to dekh, usko zaida chot to nahin aayee. main to HL ki kahabar leti hoon.

4. Viren after getting attacked by the goon, is scratching his head, Nivi comes for help, Viren thinks and says to himself "accha hua, buddhi dadi aa gayee...aab ladne do inn do aurot ko..main mazaa lutta hoon".

5. Dadi hits HL, HL shakes and falls down, gets up with more determination, and flies and hits Dadi on her chest, dadi shouts Nivi...falls down.

6. Nivi with tearful eyes, shouts DADI...and is about to run towards Dadi.

7. Viren says "where r u going, pls dont leave me"..

8. Nivedita stil runs towards her dadi, who is gasping.

9. Viren is alone, HL turns towards Viren and says "tera kya hoga kaliya"...

10. Viren says "chachi maine aap ka namak khaaya/"/

11. HL SAYS "KAB?

12. Viren says, when I went before marriage to meet Divya bhabi and you fed me paratha and curry, that had namak/salt in that?

14. HL said "pehle namak kahaya...aab maar kha bacchu".

rest to follow..

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

1. HL grabs Viren by the neck ready for the killer move...

2. Viren pleading for his life...

3. Nivi is too busy caring for Dadi

4. "Nivi my chhui-mui, I am sorry I couldn't protect you, I must be getting old, I give you permission to release you hidden powers to protect your husband "

5. Nivi stands up...to release her hidden powers when suddenly....HL drops down and lets go of Viren

6. Behind HL you see a tall male figure...with tight trousers and tight white shirt...and pointy hair....But his face is covered with a mask....

7." No one mess around with my...... family "(whispering the family part.) shouts the new person

8. Nivi...Viren...Dadi... stare at the 'hero'....Wondering who the person is and why he is saving them....

Rest to continue...

EPISODE freeze...

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

back ground song

"andheri raaton mein...sun san rahon par...Shahenshah..."

Edited by peacefulblossom - 01 February 2011 at 6:08am

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Chand Chupa Badal Mein ... Kahaani Revenge Ka..

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

Little Viren sweet innocent little boy in dreamland with his books.... in comes little Sid... Mr popular...lots of friends and perfect results....Viren walks around Sid for attention...but never gets it...Sids too busy that he forgets he has a cousin...In comes DS....annoyed with Viren for being a weakling....drags him to boarding school...
Viren gets heartbroken and starts hating everyone especially Sid for not saving him...starts to plot revenge...CC loses her head in grief of her son's departure and starts brain washing JW to kill Bhuban because she believs because of him having a perfect son was why Viren was taken away...and she turns all money greedy...JW gets so annoyed with his wife's moaning he turns to take revenge...Bhuban murdered and gone...Sid still too busy being popular to care to see that his family is plotting against him...
Many years later.... to the present Viren plotting...
Viren's head full with revenge...Nivi's head full of love and in dreamland...Sid too protective of family to see anything else...Divya's full of jealousy...set out to find out if Viren is truly a perfect husband...goes and tells her mum......and they get a shock of their life's when they find out Viren's truth...Divya does a mini dance with happiness that Viren isn't a good husband...her mum starts plotting how to get rid of Viren...
Nivi getting annoyed with Sid's stalking...she gets a bunch of goons to scary him to death...Viren gets happy and starts relaxing...in comes Divya's mum with her own set of goons and attacks Viren...Viren gets all heroic and starts beating them up...By coincidence Sids appears to help Viren...the goons after Sid follow him there...and start beating both Viren and Sid up...
Divya panics and tells the first person she sees about the fight....it happens to be CC....CC loses it again thinking someone is trying to kill Viren and calls in her own goons to go help Viren and calls her husband... Vandana hears CC telling the goons to kill her son and how CC and JW killed her husband...Vandana loses it and calls in another set of goons....
CC + JW and Vandana gets to the fight and tells the goons to attack but forgets to tell them who to attack...so the goons starts attacking everyone including Sid and Viren... in comes YS to the set...with all this confusion she decides to become the referee...starts shouting and commanding...
Nivi hears all this and takes it upon herself to finish Sid once and for all...gets her gun out and sets off to the flight...Divya sees Nivi with the gun and plotting to kill Sid...she goes and finds a gun...heads to the fight...
Mean while Yash hears everything...tells grandma...grandma in shock...tells DS...DS in shock manages to walk to the staircase but loses his leg power there and falls and dies....grandma in shock and has a heart attack...dead.
At the fight...Divya screams that everything was Virens fault and tries shooting Nivi...but accidently shoots herself...dead...Sid hears everything and tried to attack Viren...Nivi sees this and kills Sid...too busy trying to kill Sid to hear what Divya said....Vandana sceam and slaps Nivi and tells her the truth...Nivi dies on the spot out of guilt...
CC gets frustrated with her husband for not doing anything...pushes him away...car comes and kills him...CC and Vandana pick up both the guns...and kill eachother...YS dies with thrust for talking too much...
Only one left...Viren...happy that his revenge is complete and all the useless family are gone... Happily gets on his bike to ride off.... The bike starts losing control...
BANG!!!
DEAD!
Bike and Viren fall down into the khai...
Keshav behind him with a gun....
"Good bye Soods! Now we can live peacefully at last!" Keshav
Camera moves to a tree far behind....you see Lalji Kaka's face...with a small smile...

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

Divya's father...the poor guy...been bullied by this wife all his life...turns up to the fight...but far too late...everyones dead...then he sees his wife on the floor...breathing her last...(Been beaten up by the goons by accident)....runs to her...and finds out that Divya is dead....His wife dies....he is all set for revenge...then he remembers how his wifes been controlling him all his life...then signs in relief that shes gone...then gets anger his alone...but too scared to do anything...goes off to see his son and plan....

Originally posted by Omshanti1111

Laljikaka and Nandu might take over the Sood empire...and revealed that Nandu is Lalji kaka's illegitimate son. And both were planning and scheming and "poora safaya kar diya" soods or sharmas ka...

and the background music will be "yeh zindagi hain ek jua..kabhi jeet kabhi haar"...

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

No one left to take care of the house so Nandu is in charge...takes over the Soods name and has a make over...

Keshav gets annoyed that the Soods family name remains....so decides to get Yash involved...tells him to earn more money then the Soods family...so they can be more powerful...Yash wanting to be the perfect son...takes advantage of his new friend and becomes....the next big gangster...

Unfortunately Nandu's new look doesnt attract female viewer, (even though he gets a girlfriend) and Yash....doesnt have the charm....and the viewers want Kinshuk and Neha pair back.

So the CV decides to have a 20 year leap...

20 years later....

A normal looking young man walks out of the train station...(not showing his face under a hat)...asking a local person where the Soods house is....Getting the directions he turns to walk...

Walking down the road....gets shocked with a motor bike zooming pass and splashing water all over him...He shouts Oi and moves his hat... Under the hat you see Kinshuk's face...

The motor bike stop....Off the bike....a female gets off...with modern clothes (gangster type clothes with leather)...Takes off her helmet... And you see Neha's face....

(Kinshuk is back.... some how Viren had a illegitimate son at boarding school... and the new neha is Yash's daughter , Now Neha is rich and Kinshuk is looking for his identity)

The new Kinshuk is called Viren... because his mum loved Viren so much she called her son after him...and New Neha is called Nivi...because Yash loved his sister lots)

Originally posted by peacefulblossom

Nivi...looks at Viren with a strange expression....this commoner stopped me? ...and gives Viren attitude...Viren gets anger and starts shouting back....few minutes of verbal abuse later...they get so wind up that they start slapping eachother....

When both cheeks are too hurtful to slap anymore...they stop and stare...both decide its too much and head their own way.... KANK style move away.... Nivi thinks to herself actually he wasn't bad looking maybe I should make him my slave.....

(best why to start a unconventional love story)
Rest to follow...

Rest to follow

Edited by peacefulblossom - 01 February 2011 at 11:09am

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