Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Omshanti1111
Originally posted by peacefulblossom
Originally posted by peacefulblossom
Originally posted by Omshanti1111EPISODE Freeze:
HL applying martial arts, beating goons left and right ! Nivi surprised and eyes getting bigger, she does not know whether to laugh or cry...Viren does not know where to hide from this "lady DON".
16. Nivi looks up at HL in shock....no way will she start fighting
17. But to her astonishment HL does a flying kick on one of the goons in frustration (can you actually imagine this
18. Viren stops and stare....unable to believe his eyes...
19. Nivi's eyes grows bigger and bigger in shock...as HL beats goons left right and centre.
20. "Wait till I finish these useless goons off and then I'm coming for you Viren"...screams HL
21. Viren as a shock of his life...Starts to look for a place to hide...seeing HL doing karate moves..(."Aren't I supose to be the hero here? I'm going to get killed, Run away Viren...I can plot later" Viren talks to himself in his head.)
22. One of the goons bang a bottle on his head, when he was trying to hide himself and busy talking in his head.
23. Nivi screams "DADI"
24. We hear some music....(Bani your turn to find the right music here)
25. You see Dadi with her scarf warped around her forehead...ready for action...
Rest to follow...
Song... Aaya aaya toofan
1. it seems Dadi has training in kung-fu, that no one was aware of.
2. Dadi coming in her kung-fu style and HL still in karate mode, flyimg and hitting the goons.
3. Dadi telling Nivi and Viren " fikar not, jab tak teri dadai zinda hain, kuch nahin hoga meri chhui-mui or damad ko" Nivi, tu baas Viren to dekh, usko zaida chot to nahin aayee. main to HL ki kahabar leti hoon.
4. Viren after getting attacked by the goon, is scratching his head, Nivi comes for help, Viren thinks and says to himself "accha hua, buddhi dadi aa gayee...aab ladne do inn do aurot ko..main mazaa lutta hoon".
5. Dadi hits HL, HL shakes and falls down, gets up with more determination, and flies and hits Dadi on her chest, dadi shouts Nivi...falls down.
6. Nivi with tearful eyes, shouts DADI...and is about to run towards Dadi.
7. Viren says "where r u going, pls dont leave me"..
8. Nivedita stil runs towards her dadi, who is gasping.
9. Viren is alone, HL turns towards Viren and says "tera kya hoga kaliya"...
10. Viren says "chachi maine aap ka namak khaaya/"/
11. HL SAYS "KAB?
12. Viren says, when I went before marriage to meet Divya bhabi and you fed me paratha and curry, that had namak/salt in that?
14. HL said "pehle namak kahaya...aab maar kha bacchu".
rest to follow..
This took me effort to read with all the hindi words... and me saying it in my strange accent hahaha...couldn't understand myself
1. HL grabs Viren by the neck ready for the killer move...
2. Viren pleading for his life...
3. Nivi is too busy caring for Dadi
4. "Nivi my chhui-mui, I am sorry I couldn't protect you, I must be getting old, I give you permission to release you hidden powers to protect your husband "
5. Nivi stands up...to release her hidden powers when suddenly....HL drops down and lets go of Viren
6. Behind HL you see a tall male figure...with tight trousers and tight white shirt...and pointy hair....But his face is covered with a mask....
7." No one mess around with my...... family "(whispering the family part.) shouts the new person
8. Nivi...Viren...Dadi... stare at the 'hero'....Wondering who the person is and why he is saving them....
Rest to continue...
EPISODE freeze... to tired to write anymore....Bani feel free to continue.
P.s we need an entry music for the masked super hero...
Edited by peacefulblossom - 28 January 2011 at 4:33pm