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Originally posted by: Omshanti1111

Pratap is Divya'sfather...

BTW, When everyone dies, as per your story, then Laljikaka and Nandu might take over the Sood empire😆...and revealed that Nandu is Lalji kaka's illegitimate son. And both were planning and scheming and "poora safaya kar diya" soods or sharmas ka...🤣


and the background music will be "yeh zindagi hain ek jua..kabhi jeet kabhi haar"...😆

Originally posted by: peacefulblossom

LOL!

😆

Btw...just to confirm...who's Nandu and Lalji kaka? Sorry new to the show so not sure about the minor characters

Ahh yes forgot about Divya's father...the poor guy...been bullied by this wife all his life...turns up to the fight...but far too late...everyones dead...then he sees his wife on the floor...breathing her last...(Been beaten up by the goons by accident)....runs to her...and finds out that Divya is dead....His wife dies....he is all set for revenge...then he remembers how his wifes been  controlling him all his life...then signs in relief that shes gone...then gets anger his alone...but too scared to do anything...goes off to see his son and plan....

Originally posted by: Omshanti1111

😆 Nandu is the servant with a typical hair style, Viren cracks jokes with him...
and Lalji kaka is the caretaker of the cars and take care of DS.


and what will happen to Yash? may be he turns a gangster with his new found friend...😆

Originally posted by: Omshanti1111

Hehehe.... I'll let you continue the story for now....😉 Time for bed...its 3:40 am here haha..

I'll wake up and see where you left the story...and continue the love story 😆

Too bad no one else decide to join... haha ahh well us two will be fine hahaha

Since not much mystery left in the real show lets make our own up 😆 

Edited by peacefulblossom - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Omshanti1111

<font color="#000099">I was thinking, if in your lastscene, instead of Keshav killing Viren...if Lalji kaka cuts a wire from Viren's bike and thereafter Keshav shoots him...that will add more spice. Whether Viren died from the bullet or because of his fall from the bike into the "khai" of shimla, no one will know initially</font> <font color="#000099">and keep some space for the story to develop lat</font>er...😆

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and the promo will be</font>

<font color="#000099">"kya haqeeqat samne ayagi ki kaun racha yeh khel"...one side Lalji kaka's face and another side Nandu's face"🤣</font>

Originally posted by: Omshanti1111

this time, I'll emphasise on HL...I think, among all she is the only one, who has the brain to find out Viren;s truth...

 

it happens so

 

1. Viren is not happy with Nivi's performance, that she is taking long time to point fingers at Sid in public. He thinks of someone else.

2. Who else than Divya, who already is a selfish giant and jealous.

3. He comes and says "Bhabi I saw u and bhaiya in park, facing each other, I was at your back side, you were wearing the same sweater (courtesy, recycling sweaters for all actors). I could see Sid's face, not yours.

4. Divya gets all curious and jealous and almost sure, its Nivi, who went with Sid to park.

5. She runs to her mom HL.

6. HL tells her that Sid is innocent and Nivi "uske upar dor e daal rahee hain" and in mind, she thinks, this is the right time to finsh off Nivi and Viren, so that Sid and Divya can live in peace , she gives her "bhayankar eye expressions".

7. HL hires some goons, stealing money from Pratap. By the time, Pratap had arranged this money for repaying for his amma's operation.

8. Money missing from home, as HL stole that for hiring goons. Keshav is blamed for stealing money,

9. HL by trick calls Nivi and Viren in the park, and says she has some info about Sid. Nivi shocked, Viren curious.

10. Both lans up in park, where goons are waiting.

11, Goons start beating Viren and abusing Nivi...

 

more will follow...