peacefulblossom
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Heya everyone. Since the other thread opened by Omshanti111 turned into a serious conversation I thought I'll start another one
Just using your own creativity to create a storyline but make it extreme. E.g. Everyone out for revenge. Examples bellow.
Come on lets see what kinda stories you guys can come up with.
Everyones out for revenge:


If Divya finds out about Viren truth what would happen:
I mean imagine if she finds out first... she finds outs... rather then talking to her husband and telling him the situation she will go tell her mother. Her mother with get excited in worry...goes and tells Nivi's grandma....grandma has a shock of her life....goes to see Nivi...on the way she gets a heart attack and dies...Nivi's dad loses it and has enough of Soods family...and goes and kills Viren... then he notices that he made he's daughter a widow....and kills himself too. Nivi finds out about everything and dies in depression and guilt of all she did by believing in Viren. At the end Divya is happy that Nivi is out of Sids life and she can live happily with Sid.
Ok I was being a little drastic
there and nothing like that will happen 
I'm off to write my own version of everyone's out for revenge. Been meaning to write it but got busy packing and going out since I'm leaving this city.
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ssoooooooooo guddddd..especially tht 'kamina'.,,,Nivi takin Gun....HM intrvention...YD abusement.....gud CCBians pls read it!!!its really goodThe following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
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ssoooooooooo guddddd..especially tht 'kamina'.,,,Nivi takin Gun....HM intrvention...YD abusement.....gud CCBians pls read it!!!its really good
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Ouch its long...The main parts in purple!
Everyones out for revenge
Little Viren sweet innocent little boy in dreamland with his books.... in comes little Sid... Mr popular...lots of friends and perfect results....Viren walks around Sid for attention...but never gets it...Sids too busy that he forgets he has a cousin...In comes DS....annoyed with Viren for being a weakling....drags him to boarding school...
Viren gets heartbroken and starts hating everyone especially Sid for not saving him...starts to plot revenge...CC loses her head in grief of her son's departure and starts brain washing JW to kill Bhuban because she believs because of him having a perfect son was why Viren was taken away...and she turns all money greedy...JW gets so annoyed with his wife's moaning he turns to take revenge...Bhuban murdered and gone...Sid still too busy being popular to care to see that his family is plotting against him...
Many years later.... to the present Viren plotting...
Viren's head full with revenge...Nivi's head full of love and in dreamland...Sid too protective of family to see anything else...Divya's full of jealousy...set out to find out if Viren is truly a perfect husband...goes and tells her mum......and they get a shock of their life's when they find out Viren's truth...Divya does a mini dance with happiness that Viren isn't a good husband...her mum starts plotting how to get rid of Viren...
Nivi getting annoyed with Sid's stalking...she gets a bunch of goons to scary him to death...Viren gets happy and starts relaxing...in comes Divya's mum with her own set of goons and attacks Viren...Viren gets all heroic and starts beating them up...By coincidence Sids appears to help Viren...the goons after Sid follow him there...and start beating both Viren and Sid up...
Divya panics and tells the first person she sees about the fight....it happens to be CC....CC loses it again thinking someone is trying to kill Viren and calls in her own goons to go help Viren and calls her husband... Vandana hears CC telling the goons to kill her son and how CC and JW killed her husband...Vandana loses it and calls in another set of goons....
CC + JW and Vandana gets to the fight and tells the goons to attack but forgets to tell them who to attack...so the goons starts attacking everyone including Sid and Viren... in comes YS to the set...with all this confusion she decides to become the referee...starts shouting and commanding...
Nivi hears all this and takes it upon herself to finish Sid once and for all...gets her gun out and sets off to the flight...Divya sees Nivi with the gun and plotting to kill Sid...she goes and finds a gun...heads to the fight...
Mean while Yash hears everything...tells grandma...grandma in shock...tells DS...DS in shock manages to walk to the staircase but loses his leg power there and falls and dies....grandma in shock and has a heart attack...dead.
At the fight...Divya screams that everything was Virens fault and tries shooting Nivi...but accidently shoots herself...dead...Sid hears everything and tried to attack Viren...Nivi sees this and kills Sid...too busy trying to kill Sid to hear what Divya said....Vandana sceam and slaps Nivi and tells her the truth...Nivi dies on the spot out of guilt...
CC gets frustrated with her husband for not doing anything...pushes him away...car comes and kills him...CC and Vandana pick up both the guns...and kill eachother...YS dies with thrust for talking too much...
Only one left...Viren...happy that his revenge is complete and all the useless family are gone... Happily gets on his bike to ride off....BANG!!! DEAD! Keshav behind him with a gun....
"Good bye Soods! Now we can live peacefully at last!" Keshav
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