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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:17am | IP Logged
Hello everyone. HugYou might or might not know me. I am Akanksha, 15 year old, from England. I have wrote in many creativity corners && I also have some of my own OS/FFs .. though I have a REALLY bad history of not ever completing my stories. 

My friend & I had this idea. And just so that I don't leave this story mid-way, this is going to be a group FF. Three people will update it - Me, Liz (Elizaa) & Debby (Luv_Wacko). 

This is basically a supernatural + love story, about four people - Anvesha, Yuvraj, Aarav and Natasha. Who and what kind of supernaturals are they - will all be disclosed in the coming chapters. 

For now, here is the first chapter, with the first introduction, and a little insight into his life + hints about the supernatural genre he is gonna be. Comments and criticisms welcome. 'Like' this post to join the PM list. :)

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CHAPTER 1

He blinked. Standing up was hard, it took away all of his strength.  Where was he? He tried to think, but his head throbbed. His stomach churned. And his knees felt dizzy. He looked around. Darkness. Complete darkness. He found himself here every other night, standing here, nearly consumed by the darkness. His head kept paining and even keeping his eyes open was becoming a difficult task. He waited. He knew what was to come. But, this time, he was adamant to know the truth. He wouldn't bulge. He wouldn't lose consciousness.

He braced himself as the now-familiar eyes appeared. Bright red piercing eyes glowed in the black darkness of the forest. He looked around. Cornered. Those red eyes cornered him from every possible direction. No problem, he muttered. I'm not scared. And he wasn't. He had been having these dreams for about 6 months now, ever since he turned 17. In the beginning, these eyes had freaked him out. But, gradually, he got used to it. He got used to the musky era of the forest, the absolute darkness, the stillness.

This was it. He counted to 10, and as usual, one of those creatures gazed up at the moonlit sky, and howled. One of the other things that freaked him out, initially. That howl was definitely the most scariest, and the most threatening voice he had ever heard. He backed up instinctively. Even after these all months, he couldn't get used to that sound.

What happened after was predictable. As soon as the wolf howled, a white blinding light hit him out of nowhere. He gasped. He felt darkness consuming him, all around him. He felt himself giving in to the darkness and ..

He woke up. His heart was pounding, and his face was covered in sweat. He rubbed his forehead and sighed. He wanted to get to the end, he wanted to know the truth, he wanted to know what and who those wolfs were, he wanted to know the meaning of these dreams.  There was so much he wanted to know, but no one to answer.

He ran a hand through his hair. These dreams started the night he turned 17. Only he knew how freaked out he had been in the beginning. He wanted to share it with someone, wanted to confirm that it was only a dream. He never really talked about it with anyone. He knew better than that, he knew he would end up in a mental institute for the rest of his life if he ever admitted that the dream felt more than a dream to him. Everything about the dream was real. The fear, the thrill, the anticipation he felt ' that was real. The greenery around him, the shrubs and herbs ' That were real. The howling, the eyes, the wolfs ' That was real, too.

He looked at the watch. 6 am. Still 3 more hours to go before college. He yawned. He had only been back from London last week. His mom wanted him to persue his college here, and he couldn't refuse her. Mom, he smiled, and clutched the pendant in his hand. He moved to the window, and rested his cheekbone on the window pane for a while, looking up at the stars, looking up at his mom. His hand gripped the pendant tighter, as he picked it up to his lips, and gently kissed it. I miss you.

He moved away, walking towards the bathroom. Tomorrow was a very important day. Tomorrow was the first day of college. This would be the first time he would attend any sort of school in India, he grinned. Girls better be ready, here comes Yuvraj Dev. 



Edited by _Akanksha_ - 06 March 2011 at 3:21pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Luv how U described thhis person In your FF. Its college based which is good.The dreams mean something more right. Can't wait to read more

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by matwamango

Luv how U described thhis person In your FF. Its college based which is good.The dreams mean something more right. Can't wait to read more

Thank you, Matwa! =] You can imagine Yuvi/Aarav as Abhay and Natasha/Ashi as Pia if you want - it's your choice, that is, if you want to get involved better in the story! :) 




Edited by _Akanksha_ - 26 January 2011 at 1:47pm
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged
oye congratulations...nice start....Yuvi india aa raha hai padne k liye...i hope this time tum end likh pao...best of luck....:)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manur

oye congratulations...nice start....Yuvi india aa raha hai padne k liye...i hope this time tum end likh pao...best of luck....:)

Thank you Neha! Hug

Is baar Liz && Debby && tum hogi na inspiration ke liye! Big smile Thanks a lot, again! Smile


Edited by _Akanksha_ - 26 January 2011 at 1:48pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Congratz on ur first ff
loving it
awesome update
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

Congratz on ur first ff
loving it
awesome update
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Thank you! Hug

I am updating the part after this! Yesh, I was ITCHING to write! Big smile


Edited by _Akanksha_ - 26 January 2011 at 2:44pm

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