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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 63)

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...Tongue
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 4 PMing me...dear...Big smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
just ...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
ur   update...Embarrassed
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
n also a  sweet
 
...4 u...Big smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
keep ing dear...Big smile
 
 
 
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P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...Angry
 
 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...ShockedOuchConfused
 
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guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...ConfusedOuch

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...Cryme uncontorled sob.sob..Cry
 
N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics
 
 

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part 15 updatinggg...
no one wants update CryCryCry


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Part 15

 

Geet looked at Piya's papa dear to help her

Maan "Shona dekho papa bhi medicines karahe hai na tho Piya bhi kayegi na "

Piya "Papa mein school jathi hu tho aap bhi school avogayenaa"n slyly smileddd

Maan "Ok Piya hum dono ye medicines nahi kayenge uske baad hum aur bimaar hojayegaye fir Mama roz col nahi jayegi aur humare saath khelegi aur roz raath ko royegi n then hum dono ko hospital lejayegaye n then itna bada bada injection marege. hai na Geet"

Geet "Haan Maan aap dono medicines math lijiye"

Piya "Ok Ok Mama Papa itna drama mat karo me medicines le lethi hu"

n Geet n Maan were looking at Piya n asked

Maan "kisne bola ki hum drama kar rahe hai?"

Piya "Vo Badi Dadi aur Dadi tv mein ek serial dekh rahe the,

uss baby ke Mom Dad bhi apki thara bol rahe the aur Dadi ne bola ka drama kr rahe hai"

Geet "oh tho is liye aap ne hume esa kaha.

N punishment time"

n then Maan n Geet pulled Piya n started tickling her.

 

The whole day Geet made sure Maan and the other family members didn't get to know about her vrat as they would surelyyy make her break the vrat . In the night, as she was feeding Piya and Maan, the door opened with a thud and Maan saw Muskaan entering looking all worried and angry.As she saw Piya head with bandage she went and kissed her all over her face and also was checking that Piya was alright and nothing else was wrong''.

Maan was confused seeing Muskaan reaction but thought maybe she was attached to Piya after staying for 6 months so she was reacting that way

Geet hoped that Muskaan was alright as she knew what Muskaan would be going through seeing Piya in such a state''.

Muskaan "Geet'. kaise hua Piya kaa accident????? Tumne mujhe kuch batha kyun nahii?????" angrily shaking Geet holding her shoulders

Geet "Muskaan meri Baath tho suno mein sab baatha thi hu tumheee''. chalooo yaha Maan aur Piya ko aaram karne doo" n pulled Muskaan towards the terrace as she knew she had a lot to explain to Muskaan

 

Muskaan "Geet '..Tum mujhe apni best friend  bolti hona tho'. kyun chupayiii mujhse yeh baath?????Yeh mera haq haiii Geet ''..Tumne wada kiya tha keee tum mujhse Piya kii koi baath chupavogi nahi????"

 

Geet "Muskaan mera koi irada nahi tha tumse yeh baath chupane kaa'.Lekin tum kitni mushkil se tho Medical camp keliye maanii thiii aur aabhi bhii tumarhiii health thik nahi haiii'.. Isiiliye meine tumkoo nahi baathayaaa"

 

Muskaan "Yeh tho acha hua ke galtii se meine Armaan aur Dr.Kerthiii kii baath sunliii aur mujhe pataa chala ke Piya ka accident hogaya haiii

Warna tho tum sab ne mujhe meri Beti se duur karne kaa plan karliya tha''"

 

Geet  "Muskaan yeh tum kya keh rahi hooo

Mein tho bas Piya ko palne wali Mom huuu Lekin tum tho Piya ko Janam dene wali Maa hooo

Hum Piya aur tumhe alag kyun karengeee

Tumne hiii tho mujhe kaha tha naaa ke Piya ko mein adopt kar sak thi huuu kyun kii jab tum 3 saal comaa mein thiii

Tab mein ne Piya ko sambala tha aur Piya mujhe apniii Mumma samajtiii thiii"

 

Muskaan "Haan mein ne hiii tumhe kaha tha Piya ko adopt karne ke liyeee kyun kii tumne uss tab maa ka pyar diyaaa jab uskoo meri sabse jada zaroorat thiii aur mein nahi thi uss ke pass aur tumne apni dost hona ka faraz adaa kiya tha"

 

Geet "Thooo aab kyun lagtha haiii tumhe ke mein tumee Piya se duur kar rahi huuu????Kyaaa hamariii dostiii ko tum itna hiii samaj payiii hoo???? Kyaaa mera Piya ke liyee pyaar itna swarthy haiii ke mein uss apni Maa se duur rakhungiii???? Kyaaa mein Piya ke pyaar mein itni andii huuu ke apni dost kiii kurbaani aur takleef koo bhul javungiii???? Bollo naa Muskaan tum tho meri sabse achi Best Friend hona '.. Kyaaa esiii hu mein?????

 

Muskaan "Nahiii Geet

Lekin tum bhi tho meri mushkil samjooo jab mein ne apni bachiii ke saar par vo bandage dekhi  mujhe kuch samaj nahi ayaaa bas itna hii yaad raha ke woo mere pyaar' mere Rahul kiii aakriii nishaniii haiii '.. aur mein uss korahiii huuu

Im sorrryyy Geet mein gussseee mein kuch jadaa hii bol gayiii

Im sorrryyy"

 

Geet "Thik haiii sirf ek sharth pe maaf karungiii

Kee tum bhi mujhe maaf kardegi Piya kii accident kii baath chupa ne keliye"

 

Muskaan pulling Geet into a hug "Haan maaf kiyaaa tujeee"

 

Geet "Mein bhiii'''."n started jumping  in the hug

 

And as both came out of the hug and turned to go down they were shocked to see Maan standing at the entrance of the terrace with hands folded and eyes full of questions

Geet was sooo frightened to even look into Maan's eyes and just kept her eyes towards the ground  and next she felt was Maan carrying her towards there room shouting at everyone to call the Doctor and then again everything was blur she could hear voices but it wasn't sooo clear

 

As geet slowly opened her eyes feeling her head very heavy she saw that Nakul gave some juice to Maan  and  Maan filling the spoon and bring near her mouth when she just pressed her lips together as if not going to let anything so into her mouth and that was when Maan realized Geet was awake

 

Maan "Geet apna muu kolooo Doctor ne kaha haiii tum bohat weak hooo aur tumhe kuch khalena chahiyeee'."

Geet "Nahiii Maan pleaseee mujhe kuch nahi khanaa please aap tension maat looo aur soo javooo mujhe bhi needh arahiii haiii"

 

Maan "Mein tension naa luu tumhe pataa bhi haiii ke tum behosh hogayii thi'.. kitni mushkil se sab koo sone bejha haiii aur Piya ko dekhooo needh mein bhi Mumma mummaa bol rahaiii haiii

Aur tum kehti ho ke tension mat looo''"

 

Geet "Yeh kabhi kabhi  yesa hojatha haiii Maan vrat mein tho yeh normal hiii haiii" n bites her tongue for saying the word vrat

 

Maan "Vrat????? Kaisa vrat Geet ??????"

 

Geet "Maan  aapne galth suna hoga  mein ne tensed bolaaa vrat nahiii"

 

Maan "Geet tum yeh bolna chahthi hoke MSK juth bol raha haiii'."

 

Geet "Nahiii Maan mein yesa kuch'''.."

 

Maan "Tho chup chap sach bolo kyaaa vrat bola tumne????"

 

Geet "Maan mein ne manat mangii thi ke agar aap aur Piya thik hojavoge tho mein har tueday Nirjal vrat rakhungiii aur nagee paree Mandir darshan ke liyeee javungiii"

 

Maan "Koi zaroorat nahiii yeh vrat rakhne kiii dekho tumhariii tabiyaat bhi thik nahi haiii"

 

Geet "Maan mein apniii Manat nahi thod sakthiii please Maan mujhe yeh karne dejiyeee pleaseee"

 

Maan "Thik haiii Geet tum karlooo apnii manat puri" n angrilyyy went away from there

 

Precap -

 Maan's anger = Geet's zidd = Family pressure

What to do??????


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Edited by rsroopali - 23 April 2012 at 8:21am

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