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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 55)

Ramhari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 5:17pm | IP Logged
Nice but scary part.
Geet was perfect bahu
Their family was picture perfect.
But it was all spoilt n a min.
The accident was shocking.
Good that Man is out of danger.
But poor piya she was such a sweet kid.
Hope nothing happens to her.
waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Part 14

As soon as Geet reached the hospital she heard the doctor say tht Maan is out of danger but Piya has lost lot of blood n they need AB- as it is nt available in there blood bank.

So all her friends went to get their blood checked n Geet went to see Maan. As she entered Maan was still unconsicious.She remebered the Baba's words and thought of tying it to Maan but then remembered Piya n so she removed her Tavees which was tied for her hapiness n tied it to Maan n then came out as he was unconsicious n she didn't want to trouble him n then she went to get her blood tested.

After some time the doctor told that only Geet's blood matched Piya n soon Geet was taken to give blood to Piya n after 2 hrs of operation n taking out of pieces of glass frm Piya's head they declared that Piya was out of danger.

By this time Maan had regained consiciousness n was discharged.After Piya gained consiciousness Geet tied the tavees n thanked Babaji for saving both Maan n Piya.Soon Piya was discharged n they left for the Khurana Mansion.

Geet made sure that Maan n Piya didn't stress themselves n also made them take their medicines without making faces n made them drink Haldi milk which was vry bitter n they made faces seeing that but thy had to drink it n told them that they are not allowed to go to office or school 2mrw n hv to be in d mansion.Piya was very happy that she can play the whole day but Maan was sulking as he wanted to go to office n he had lost 2day's day at work.That night Geet forced Maan to sleep on the bed instead of the couch.

Next Morning 6am

Geet woke up early as she had to keep her vrath.She freshened up n then checked on Maan n Piya n then went to Mandir n did the aarthi n prepared breakfast for all.Then after some time all were on the breakfast table except Maan n Piya as they were still sleeping n Geet had not woken them up.

After some time Geet took breakfast for Maan n Piya in the Room n then she woke them up n told them to freshen up n then have breakfast. As both freshen up Maan started feeding Piya n when he was about to feed Geet.She stopped him and told that she had already finished her breakfast with others. 

Then she gave both of them medicines n Piya started throwing tantrums that she won't eat her medicines.

Geet looked at Piya's papa dear to help her 
Maan "Shona dekho papa bhi medicines karahe hai na tho Piya bhi kayegina "
Piya "Papa mein school jathi hu tho aap bhi school avogayenaa"n slyly smileddd
Maan "Ok Piya hum dono ye medicines nahi kayenge uske baad hum aur bimaar hojayegaye fir Mama roz col nahi jayegi aur humare saath khelegi aur roz raath ko royegi n then hum dono ko hospital lejayegaye n then itna bada bada injection marege. hai na Geet"
Geet "Haan Maan aap dono medicines math lijiye"
Piya "Ok Ok Mama Papa itna drama mat karo me medicines le lethi hu"
n Geet n Maan were looking at Piya n asked 
Maan "kisne bola ki hum drama kar rahe hai?"
Piya "Vo Badi Dadi aur Dadi tv mein ek serial dekh rahe the,
uss baby ke Mom Dad bhi apki thara bol rahe the aur Dadi ne bola ka drama kr rahe hai"
Geet "oh tho is liye aap ne hume esa kaha.
N punishment time"
n then Maan n Geet pulled Piya n started tickling her.

Piya's truth out

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Edited by rsroopali - 25 June 2011 at 2:55am

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Awesome update::
Awww geet kept to her word and faster for maan and piya
Haha luvd their family time...
Finally piya's truth is gunna be out...
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
loved d update dear it was nice to see ke unhone ek saath kuch time spend kiya
good work
love - piya

Edited by piya- - 25 June 2011 at 3:47am

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
nice update...!!
loved they spend good time together...waiting for the precap now...continue soon

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awsome yaar...loved it 

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