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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 46)

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged

hi

the up is beautifully written
though i dont like manneet but
for u my friend i can read
anyways u have protrayed the character beautifully
plz cont soon and pm me

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superb!
 
loved the bonding between maan and piya!
 
continue soon!

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Part 13

Life has totally changed for the Khurana's n Handa's in the past 3 months.Maan has taken Khurana Construction's to a new level and also takes utter care of his family.Geet has become a very good bahu of the Khurana family,a gud wife for Maan n a good mother for Piya.She takes care of the household works n also attends college.Meanwhile Piya has become the favourite family member of Khurana's n Handa's.She listens to her Badi Dadi's stories,play's with Dadu n luves to hide behind Dadi when Maama runs around the house to make her drink milk n Dadi always saves her frm Maama.Shilpa bua play's maama-baby[my cousins keep on playing this game.its there fav game]with piya n Robbie chachu teaches Piya to play Psp n new new video games.Papa pampers Piya a lot.He fulfills all wishes of Piya.

In the morning Geet wakes up and prepares breakfast.Then she wakes up Robbie and goes to get ready.Till then Maan would finish his morning Tai-Chi practice n then wakes Piya n then gets ready n helps Geet to make his Shona get ready.

Then Geet brings their breakfast to the room n sits down to feed Piya n Maan n Maan feeds Geet n Piya at the same time.Then they leave KM together.First they leave Geet to her college n then Maan leaves Piya to school n then he goes to KC.

          

13 NOV

As their normal routine Maan ,Geet n Piya left KM.Then they left Geet at her college and when they were heading towards Piya's school a small boy suddenly came in front of the car and to save him Maan turned his car n it loses control n hits a tree.The glass breaks n a small pieces goes into Piya's head as she was sitting on Maan's lap n the glass pieces go into Maan's head hands n both were unconcious n bleeding very much.

Geet heard a car crash noise n started to shiver n felt restlessness as she had Hypotension.Samrat n Prithvi who also heard the car crash noise with Geet called Mouli to take Geet with her to the class as they were going to the car crash place to help the hurt person.
As they reached the place they saw Maan n Piya n they called the ambulance n Mouli to bring Geet to the hospital n then called KM to inform abt Maan n Piya's accident.
       
        

At The Hospital

As soon as Maan n Piya were admitted all reached the hospital.

       

After Half An Hour

The doctor declared that Maan was out of danger but Piya had lost lot of blood n they needed AB- as it was not available in the hospital's blood bank n they needed it really fast.

Meanwhile Geet had gone to the temple near the hospital.
Geet "Babaji,please Maan aur Piya ko bacha lena.Agar who dono sahi salamath bach gaye tho mein Nirjal Vrath rakhungi har Mangalwar iss phure Saal ke liye aur mein kal se hi shuru karungi"

n there she met a Baba who told her that everything will be finen gave her a Tavees n tol her to tie to the person for whom she came to pray.Geet took the tavees n went to the hospital.

    

next update 2mrw 
n plzzz pray for shruti dii's son as he is seriously injured n hospitalized.
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Edited by rsroopali - 23 June 2011 at 12:35pm

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part 14 will update 2mrw
n will send pm together 
n plzzz do commenttt




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