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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 44)

rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged

Then DADI asks them why had they come here so GEET tells,


"DADI mei aapke liye ek gift liye hu"


GEET gives the gift to DADI n asks her to open it now itself.

DADI "HAAN beta rukho dekhthi hu..."

As DADI opened the gift wrap she saw it was a beautiful scrapbook made on DADI's life it had her childhood baby pics, her pics with her school n col frnds,her marriage pics,pics with her son n daughter in law,pic of her n DADAJI holding MAAN for the first time n then pics of DADI getting awards n newspaper clippings of her achievements n most importantly the Family picture of the Khurana family frm DADAJI to PIYA's pic which is digitally edited .


Seeing this DADI felt so lucky and had tears in her eyes.

GEET seeing this went n hugged DADI and thank you beta.

"DADI" said PIYA ,"Thanks not only to MAMA but ME n PAPA also.PAPA cut the photos and PIYA put them on the book.

"Thank you, PIYA n MAAN beta.

Then after GEET,MAAN n PIYA went to their room .

DADI saw the photo of DADJI and said "See I told you na that they love me alot  n see ur SAV is really vry Happy here".

As MAAN,GEET n PIYA reached their room GEET took PIYA for changing n MAAN opened his laptop n started working n as PIYA came out he told herto go to sleep as he had some work n kissed her forehead n PIYA went to sleep with GEET n slowly both of them fell asleep.


AT 1 am

MAAN was still busy in his work that he didn't see the time neither PIYA standing in front of him for the last 5 mins n MAAN was sitting in a sleeping position on the couch with the laptop on his lap.

After another 5 mins and MAAN finished his work he saw PIYA standing there.He closed the laptop n kept it aside n took PIYA in his arms n made her sit on his lap.

"Aap tho sogayi thi na shona phir kab uthi" asked MAAN

PIYA answered"Papa busy thab uthi".

"Tho phir kyun mujhe bola nahi shona" asked MAAN

PIYA"Papa busy, PIYA good girl no disturb Papa".

"Shona Papa ko neendh arhihai apko nahi arahi?????" MAAN

PIYA"Shona sleep on Papa here".

MAAN is like ok and sleeps on the couchn PIYA sleeps on his chest hugging him.


AT 3 am

GEET feels thirsty n gets up to drink water bt doesn't find PIya n sees MAAN is sleeping on the couch with a blanket on.

As she didn't find PIYA on the bed she goes to wake up MAAN to search for PIYA.

As she comes near the couch she was relived to see PIYA sleeping on MAAN  n was really happy to see MAAN's n PIYA's bond n she cressing PIYA by sitting near the couch soon fell asleep with her head on MAAN'S hand.

If anyone would have seen them like this thy would think WT A PERFECT FAMILY bt only they knew Destiny's play in their life which made their LIFE IMPERFECT.



MAAN gets to know PIYA'S truth n with it many secrets abt GEET n her frnds are revealed.

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Edited by rsroopali - 05 June 2011 at 1:17pm

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:28pm | IP Logged
nice updateSmile

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Great update! Waiting :)

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
supreb update.
love it

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Sabmeratu. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Lovely update::
Awww the gift was sweet
Pari is so cute,,she didn't want to disturb her papa so she stood ther quietly and waited for his attention
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
awesome upd 

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ruhakhan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
oh dat  was such a nice gift from the trio and all three are sleeping together dats so sweet do update soon

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I read this ff when i was a silent reader!great!i'll keep on reading cause u do a wonderfull work!

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