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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 33)

rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 8:24pm | IP Logged

Part 10


The next morning GEET wakes up early n sees MAAN n PIA sleeping peacefully n with a smile wished tht her every morning she would like 2 wake up seeing this scene.She got ready n made her way 2 the kithen where DADI,MOM n SHILPA were cooking some snakes 2 take with thm to d farmhouse n then went 2 wake her dear naughty devar .After getting ready GEETpulled ROBBIE 2 help packing d things in d picnic basket  told MOM "Now u all rest I n ROBBIE will do d packing n make morning tea for u otherwise u will start having a severe headache" [I dnt understand d logic between tea n headache my mom if she dnt drink tea within 9 in d morning by 11 she will hv severe headache]


MOM "Thanks beta for reminding me n make tea for DAD also .He will start shouting for his tea as he is ready n whr is MAAN he doesn't sleep till this late its already 8.45 n was PIYA comfortable here yesterday nite"


GEET "MOM no probs for d remainder n after making d tea I will go n wake MAAN n PIYA up n dnt worry MOM, PIYA is vry comfortable here especially with MAAN"


MOM was happy to hear this as MAAN n GEET were both happy.


Meanwhile MAAN had woken up n was ready n cming out of d washroom whn he saw PIYA crying .He went to PIYA n hugged her tightly n asked her y she was crying ??????


PIYA "DAD u will nt leave me n go na plzzzzzzz I was soooooo scared tht U n MOM both were nt there"


MAAN consoled her n made her brush her teeth by her small hands n taking her for a bath.


After GEET had made tea for MOM n DAD n left ROBBIE to arranging d food in d basket, went 2 wake up MAAN.


On entering d room GEET burst out laughing seeing wt was happening in d room

MAAN was trying to catch PIYA n get her dressed but PIYA being really fast ran around d room n held MAAN's mobile n threated 2 throw it in water if on picnic he didn't play with her n was busy in his mobile with work.She happily exclaimed "NO WORK ONLY PIYA N DAD PLAY"


So MAAN agreed n held his ears in front of PIYA n said "SORRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYY SHONA, DAD will nt work n only play with PIYA no one else OKKK"


This was whn GEET had entered d room n thn giving MAAN his coffee took d dress frm MAAN n started 2 make PIYA ready. PIYA happily go ready n said GUD MORNING MOM n gave a kiss on both MAAN n GEETS cheeks n asked for her Bournvita milkshake.

GEET took PIYA 2 d kitchen n whr PIYA started playing with ROBBIE n she made d Bournvita milkshake for her princess.


It was 9 n all of their frnds n GEET's parents arrived at d KHURANA MANSION n loaded d 20 seater bus n told gods name n started d bus.


They were sitted like,






 On d left side n






On d right side it was like boys n girls at war

As thy started with ANTHAKSHARI d girls won n by the tie thy reached d farmhouse d war had become worse all of thm fighting like small children n arguing.


As thy got down frm d bus ,MAANwas vry hungry n so were others n he asked his MOMto prepare something nice for thm tht time it flashed to GEET yday events n DAD,MAAN n ROBBIE were supposed 2 make breakfast,soon a idea stuck 2 GEET's mind n she told it 2 all d girls n thy readily agreed.


SHILPA "Today is girls day off frm d kitchen if ur hungry thn plz make ur way 2 the kitchen its on d right side of d living room n help urselves making food"


GEET "Aree SHILPA,this men cannot prepare a morning tea also without getting confused with wt is salt n sugar,wt will thy prepare lunch for themselves.Thank god we had cm prepared n brought food for d girls"she said in a mocking way.


MAAN getting irritated "So ur challenging us GEET???????ur challenging MSK"


GEET "YESSSSSSS n I bet u cnt make food without burning it MR.MSK.If so lets see hw all of u guys r going 2 make lunch nt only for yourselves bt for us also"


As SHILPA knew MAAN knows2 cook continental n ityalian cuisine she wanted asked thm 2 prepare INDIAN cuisine n d boys accepted d challenge 2 satisfy their so called ego evn though thy didn't knw wt is do??????"


GEET cming near MAAN n whispered ALL D BEST n u thought I will nt get to know ur plan as to y u said yes for going 2 d picnic n then MAAN realized tht it was a trap set by d girls n he had fallen for it.






 Buddiessssssssss plzzzzzzzzzz press d like button n even comment will b waitinggggggg

In a bit confused so tell me wt do u want 2 see in d future parttt

N soory for d small updates hv xams going on so




New A Big Hug 4 U Comments

Edited by rsroopali - 15 February 2011 at 8:51pm

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shah10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 8:35pm | IP Logged
awsome update.
rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 8:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shiv-gauri4eva

heyy..ur FF is filled with my favorite jodi's lol
please continue soon
-ArhiLover- Senior Member

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
heyy.. i love your FF.. i just started reading it and its amazing.. please add me to your pm list :)

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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
loved the update................
loving maan's bond with piya..............
all the best with ur exams..............
i wud like to c maan and geet falling in love more of maan pia moments...............

Edited by preethia - 08 March 2011 at 1:52am

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PLKG90 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged

I wanted to be the first, but it's oki..

Nice and fabulous update!

Loves the way to have gathered all the fact lol

Mh, I want Boys to win and they should give girls a punishment..

Plz make that punishment something romantic between Maaneet! 

Thanks for the PM!

plz continue sooN! 

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
superb update
Thx 4 the PM Xx...

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amzu32 IF-Dazzler

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loved the update..

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