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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 25)

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 8:59am | IP Logged
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loved all ur updates amazing and doo continue soon xx

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PART 8

Hearing this GEET got embrassed and she was about to say ROBIE to stop when she saw ARMAAN coming so she went and hugged him and told in her mind "Thank you BABAJI aapne sahi waqt pe ARMAAN bhai ko bhej diya warna ROBIE toh mera band he baja deta"

 

Then she asked ARMAAN "Bhai aap itni subah ya pe koi kaam tha kya?Sab kuch thik toh hai na?"

ARMAAN "Meri jhalli ,tandh rakh ,saas tho le le aur ghar mein sab thik hai .Mein tho tujhe pagfere ki rasam ke liye ghar le janne aaya hu"

 

Then seeing all on d dinning table wishes gud morning 2 all of them.

DADI "aree ARMAAN beta khade kyun ho bheto aur nastha karo humare saath aur aaj ka nastha GEET ne bhanaya hai"

Hearing this ARMAAN "Nahi, DADI mein thik hu ,mujhe nastha nahi karma hai ,mujhe subha subha hospital mein bharti nahi hona hai ".Hearing this SHILPA "Lekin hospital mein kese bharti ho sakte hai bhabhi ke haath ka bana huva kahana khake".

 

So GEET "ARMAAN bhai kuch nahi kahana hai mat kaho bt plzzzzzzzzz ye kheer apki fav hai na tho plzzzzzzz taste karke bathao na kesi bani hai"

 

ARMAAN seeing her pleading face n then seeing d tempting kheer couldn't tell NO.

ARMAAN "GEET,thik hai de mei taste kartha hu par sirf tu kehe rahi thi is liye"

Then GEET smiles n serves him the kheer .ARMAAN "GEET, is baar kheer mein shakhar hi dali hai na ,pichli baar ki tarha namak tho nahi dala.Yaad hai teri uss kheer ko meine pura khaliya tha ,taki koi aur taste na kare aur tera maazak na udaye aur uske next din mujhe hospital mei bharti hona padatha".

 

Hearing this GEET becomes embrassed n all of them start laughing hearing ARMAANS plight.

 

SHILPA "Dekh bhai ARMAAN  ne puri namak wali kheer khali taki bhabhi k koi mazak na uda sake aur ek aap ho meri kheer ki ek bite lekar sari kheer dustbin mein dal di"

 

VEER "Ye kab huva tha beta, aap ne humare liye tho kabhi kheer nahi banai??"

SHILPA "Nahi dad uss din ghar mei koi nahi tha ,aap sab Mumbai gaye the shaadi ki shooping karne aur ghar mein sirf mei aur bhai the"

 

MADHURI "MAAN,koi asa kartha hai kya ,ek tho pheli baar tumari behen ne kheer bani thi aur tumne usse dustbin mei phek diya ."

 

MAAN "Nahi mom ,aap SHILPA se phuche lijiye mei tho sari kheer leli thi aur apne kamre mei jakar kha lithi"

 

SHILPA takes out the mobile n shows a video to GEET n ROBBIE .Seeing the video GEET n ROBBIE  starts laughing like mads n ROBBIE rolls on the floor laughing .

 

Seeing this all r watching the 3 n wondering y r they laughing all of a sudden.

 

Then SHILPA shows the video to all except MAAN  n seeing the video all start laughing.

 

So MAAN pulls SHILPA'S mobile n saw the video whr after taking the 1st bite MAAN finishes the whole water kept in d room in one go n starts pacing around the room making faces n holding his stomach n couldn't stop visiting the washroom every 5 mins.

 

MAAN "Tho mei aur kya kartha itni mirchi dalithi aur vo bhi kheer mein"

 

Everyone stars laughing n making fun of SHILPA except GEET n tells "OK people SILENCE, so it is decided tht after making sooooooo much fun of our cooked food 2mrw breakfast will be made by DAD,ROBBIE n

Hearing this MAAN  tries to interrupt saying "ALL D BEST DAD n  ROBBIE ,prepare a nice breakfast jisse in ladkiyo ka mu hamesha ke liye bhand ho jaye"

 

So hearing this GEET "Hello MR.MAAN SINGH KHURANA apko bhi kal inke saath nasatha bana hai aur hum ladies aaram se uthege aur aaram se nastha karege aur hum menu raat ko decide karke dedenge.

Kal mazaa ayeega hai na SHILPA ,badhe aaye the humara mazak udane n hi 5 eachother."

 

MAAN "Par kal tho mujhe jaldi office jana hai ek important meeting hai so I cant join u all"

ROBBIE "Bhai kal Sunday hai ,Sunday ko office badh hoti hai" n

VEER added "Aur kal koi client meeting bhi nahi hai tho aur kon si meeting hai beta tumari ???"

 

MADHURI "So its decided kal ka nasatha aap thino banayege"

 

SHILPA to have more fun added "Aur haan INDIAN cuisine hi bana hai ITALIAN nahi.samjhe bhai n plzzzzzzzzz make ur special chocolate cake also

I  luv d cake u bake"

 

DADI  to GEET "Beta ja ke tayaar ho jao ARMAAN tabh se tumari wait kar raha hai"

 

GEET goes to get ready n here ARMAAN is feeling sorry for d guys as they have to make breakfast 2mrw n happy tht all of them luvs GEET  n she soooo easily has mixed with them in 1 day tht it luks like she is with this family for many years nw.

 

ARMAAN "Aur haan dadi ,maa ne aap sabko raat ke dinner ke liye invite kiya hai"

DADI "Thik hai beta hum ajayege"

GEET cms down wearing a red n white sari with puff sleeves blouse  n she was luking beautiful .

ROBBIE "WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW" n starts whistling n tells "Hello beautiful will u be my gf n ur luking soooooooo hottttttttt"

Hearing this MAAN shoots a glare at ROBBIE  bt he ignores it n start flirting again

 

GEET "ROBBIE ur also looking sooo handsome n I am ready to be ur gf just dnt tell

MSK as he is my husband"

 

All r happy to see GEET  having fun with ROBBIE n MAAN is irritated .

 

Then GEET n ARMAAN reach HANDA MANSION n GEET is welcomed by her mama n papa n whn ARMAAN tells thm wt happened on d breakfast table they r happy to knw tht their daughter is happy .

 

GEET talks to mama n papa of her sasural n hw they had fun yday n today morning all also tht MAAN is realllllyyyyyy sweet n caring husband.

 

At noon ,GEET is surprised to see her friends here for lunch even SHILPA had come n during lunch GEET tells everyone tht she is joining back d university frm Monday"

All r shocked to hear this bt GEET "Dnt worry guys ,I am ok n even MAAN n our family doesn't have a problem with it"

After hearing this all r soooooo happppppyyyyyyyy to see GEET soooo haaaapppppyyyyyyy.

 

 

PRECAP-

So buddiesssssssssssssssss

Will the guys be able to prepare breakfast ???????????????

 

LUV

ROOPALI n HINAL

 






Edited by rsroopali - 05 February 2011 at 1:10am

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ClapFIRST LOLFIRST LOLFIRSTClap

hope the guys don't mess with the breakfast Evil Smileelse the ladies will have to make it againAngry
 
but I am sure they will create a messROFL
 
kitchen will be a messLOL
 
food will be ridiculous Confused
 
their clothes will be have stains all over themOuch
 
their faces will be a moving menu of what they cookedShocked


Edited by smj1977 - 05 February 2011 at 1:24am

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Lovely update.........................Smile

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very nice update
it was hilarious
do cont soon

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Well guys can cook my bro nd dad quite well but don't know abt maan nd family so lets see.......

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lovely update...

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