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DESTINY [MAANEET FF] Part 16 - Pg 70 (Page 22)

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 8:08am | IP Logged
loved the update
do continue

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 11:09am | IP Logged
nice update...................

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Part 7
Then MAAN and GEET enter the room.MAAN goes to the washroom and changes and comes out and tells to GEET "GEET you settle your things and sleep on the bed.I am going to the study as I have to finish some work."
Then GEET says "I will sleep on the couch you don't worry"
Hearing this MAAN gets angry and says "GEET plz I don't want to fight with you or shout on you so plz change and sleep on the bed"
And he goes to the study to complete his work.
Here in the room GEET changes and then keeps her things and she takes the pillow and sleeps on the couch.After sometime MAAN comes and he sees that GEET was not sleeping on the bed and she was sleeping on the couch.He goes near the couch and was about to wake her up but seeing GEET sleeping peacefully he stared at her for a while and then went to the bed and slept.
Then around mid night MAAN heard someone crying,so he got up and saw that GEET was not sleeping on the couch and he thought that she would have have gone to drink water as the water in their room was finished and then he saw that the washroom door was open and so he went in and saw that GEET was crying.
He went and sat next to her and tried to wipe her tears but she did not stop crying and she said "Why did this have to happen with us MAAN why???"
Then MAAN said "GEET forget what has happened .See we should see the positive side of all this.See we did not get married to them .Imagine if we would have got married to them and then we would have found their truth it would be more painful for us than it is now and you know one thing even I wouldnt have got such a wonderful friend like you if we had got married to them so GEET plz stop crying"
Hearing this words GEET calmed a bit and she kept her head on MAAN'S shoulder and he was saying soothing words to her.After sometime MAAN realized that GEET was not talking at all which was not like her and when he turned he saw that GEET had fallen asleep and so he put his hand on her arms and hugged her and even he fell asleep.
In the next morning GEET woke up to see that she was sleeping keeping her head on MAAN'S chest  and by this even MAAN also wakes up.Seeing GEET'S embrassing look he realizes that he was hugging GEET and so he removed his arm and both of them got up and MAAN said "GEET tum ready ho jao mein workout karke aath hu"
Then MAAN goes to do his TAI CHI and here GEET takes a bath and gets ready applies sindoor and kept  MAAN's clothes on d bed and goes down.
Then she and MADHURI along with SHILPA and DADI go to the mandir and pray.Geet prays to god to give her strength to try to forget DEV and move on in her life with MAAN.
Then she goes to the kitchen and started to prepare breakfast with SHILPA helping her.
Here MAAN had come back to the room after his workout and he saw that GEET had taken out his clothes.He went and took a both and then got ready and wore the clothes which GEET had removed.Then he came down to and took blessings from DADI and they went and sat on the table waiting for the breakfast.
In the meanwhile after preparing breakfast GEET asked MADHURI where was ROBIE as he was the one missing and so MADHURI replied "Shabzade apne kamre mein abhi tak so rahe hoge. Pata nahi kab sudhrega yeh ladka.Beta tum jake usse utta dogi tab tak mein NAKUL ko kehti ho ki sab ko breakfast ke liye bola le"
So GEET told yes and went to ROBIE'S room and knocked.then ROBIE from inside asked "kaun hai??"
So GEET replied "tumhari bhabhi"
Then ROBIE opened the door and said "Good morning bhabhi.Kya bath hai aap itni subah yaha pe???"
Then GEET told "ROBIE tum isse itni subah kehte ho utho aur waqt dekho subah ke sade aath [8:30] baj rahe hai.Aab jaldi se fresh hoke breakfast karne chalo sab tumhara intezar kar rahe hai"
Then GEET went to the breakfast table along with ROBIE and everyone was surprised to see ROBIE so early up in the morning and so DADI teasingly said to ROBIE  "Wah beta bhabhi ko aaye ek din he huya hai aur aap toh unki baath bhi mane lage wah GEET beta aapko maana padega"
So ROBIE said "Nahi meri pyaari DADI mein toh phele bhi aab ki bath maantha tha par aab ne hi bhai ke chakar mein mujhe bul gyi to issliye mein bhabhi ki baath maan raha hu aur MAA bhi SHILPA ke piche hai toh mere bhi piche koi toh hona chaiye na support ke liye issliye"
Then GEET said "Of course mere pyaare devar ko koi bhi nahi sataga aur aaj se woh subah naste pe time pe hi ayega  kyu ROBIE???sahi kaha na meine"
So ROBIE said "Of course mein meri bhabhi ki koi bhi baath tal sakta hu kya? Nahi baba nahi"
Then they all started having breakfast,all were praising GEET'S food and at last the turn came to eat the sweet.Then SHILPA said "Aaj bhabhi ne sab ke liye kheer banaya hai.Aur DADI aapke liye ye alag se sugarfree wali"
Then GEET and SHILPA served kheer to everyone and all praised it. Then ROBIE said "Wah bhabhi aapki haath ki bani hui kheer ka toh koi mukabala he nahi hai issi kheer toh MAA bhi nahi bana sakthi"
Then DADI gave GEET a diamond necklace and said "Beta ya tumhara saghun"
Till then MAAN was simply eating his food and reading the newspaper then suddenly ROBIE asked MAAN "Bhai kheer kaise bani hai?"
So MAAN said while reading his newspaper and without his knowing "Bohut achi hai ji kar raha ke jisne bhi banahe uske haath choom lo"
Then ROBIE smiled wickedly and said "Bhai aap sure ho ki aap uss haath ko choomege jissene yeh kheer bani he ?"
So MAAN thinking that MAA would have made it and said "ha bilkul"
And then he asked "MAA ye kheer aap ne banayi hai kya?"
So MADHURI replied "Nahi beta hume nahi banayi"
Then he turned towards ROBIE who was smiling wickedly asked "Toh ye kheer kisne bani hai ROBIE ?"
So then ROBIE thought of breaking the suspense and said "Bhai you are sure na ?"
So MAAN told "Ya ROBIE Im 100 % sure now tell me"
So ROBIE finally broke the suspense and told "Bhabhi"
Hearing this MAAN who was drinking coffee spit the coffee out of his mouth and looked at ROBIE with shock.Seeing this ROBIE,GEET and SHILPA started laughing.
Then ROBIE said "Bhai now you have to kiss bhabhi's hand"
Hearing this GEET got embrassed and she was about to say ROBIE to stop when she saw ARMAAN coming so she went and hugged him and told in her mind "Thank you BABAJI aapne sahi waqt pe ARMAAN bhai ko bhej diya warna ROBIE toh mera band he baja deta"
Then she asked ARMAAN "Bhai aap itni subah ya pe koi kaam tha kya?Sab kuch thik toh hai na?"
So guys what do you think ARMAAN has come to GEET'S sasural for???
Has destiny again played a game on GEET ???

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
love it.
love robie.
do continue plz

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged maan-geet emotional sceneEmbarrassed........ robie was pulling maan leg n maan was so cute to fall for itLOL....... arman why did u come so early.....couldnt u have waiting for few mins more.Angry.......anyway great continue soon

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
awesome update...

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
loved it devar babhi convo...............ab kya hain ki armaan geet ko lene aaya hain.............may for some rasam after marriage................

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Posted: 03 February 2011 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
awesome updates gurlls...Smile

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