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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged

Hie guys im Spandana….a silent reader..this is my first ff….plzz do comment Smile

 

 

Mayank :- A very handsome and intelligent boy.Lives with his mother.Not serious types….takes lyf as it comes.Madly in love with nupur…and by hook or crook want to make her fall in love.

Nupur:-A beautiful and intelligent girl . Lives with gunjan . Shez is a little serious compared to her character in the serial . Considers Mayank just as a friend.

 

Other characters:

 

Samrat: Same as in the serial . Already commited with gunjan.

Gunjan:Younger sister of Nupur.Already commited with samrat.

Diya,uday,benji : same as in the serial.

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Go ahead dear.. nice CS..
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
interesting concept Spandana!
would love to read more
do continue soon
nd plz add me to ur pm list Smile


Edited by Favouriteofall - 26 January 2011 at 7:19am
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PART – 1

 

It is one of those days when mayank was desperately waiting to propose nupur  . Nupur was not so expert in the area of love and such feelings so she couldn't understand the little gestures gave by mayank.

Mayank was waiting for nupur in an empty class room where he asked her to come fast….. when nupur asked the reason he told that he wanted to clarify a doubt in a subject…..as the exams were fast approaching she coudnt deny his urgency…

Mayank saw her….she was wearng a white dress and hair tied as a ponytail and waking towards him….she was completely looking like an angel….he was becoming nervous…all the courage he built earlier was crashing….but some how he determined to express his feelings to her as they are in the their final year and nupur was planning her higher studies in abroad…and he didn't want to loose her.

Nupur : (tapped him on his shoulder) aise khade khade kya dekh rahe ho…

Mayank : ummm…kuch nahin….cha…aalo ander chal kar bath karthe hain…

N : Teek hain…

They enter inside and make themselves comfortable….nupur starts opening her books

N : mayank bathao na tumhe doubt kis topic me hain

M : voh…actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain…

N : (she gets worried ) kya bath hai mayank sab kuch teek hai na…aunty ko…

M : (cuts her in between)nahi nahi…sabh kuch teek hain…darasal mein yeh kehna chahta hoo ki..

(closing his eyes he says )

Mein tumse bahut pyaar karta hu nupur aur tumhar saath apna zindagi guzarna chahta hu…mujhe pata nahi hein ki tum mere bare me aise sochte ho ya nahi…phir bhi apne appko yeh kehne se rokh nahin paaya…

He slowly opens his eyes and finds nupur shocked…

N : Mayank yeh tumne kyaa keh diya….per mai tumse……


plzz do comment...Smile

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 9:03am | IP Logged
nice concept and great update dear........................
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 9:33am | IP Logged
nice start
interesting conceptSmile
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
superb update Spandana!
so mayank expressed his feeling Big smile
u stopped at such a crucial point..............what a cliffhanger LOL
waiting eagerly for the next part
plzzzzzzzz continue ASAP
nd thnx for the pm Smile
 
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
Hi dear
fantastic  start
loved it
plz do cont and pm me
take care

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