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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
 Hi my  name is Sonali. Nice to meet you Yumna! what a beautiful nameBig smile

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Awww Bless!!
Thanks for the OS!! Great job for the first one!
I usually don't read OS's .. LOL.. no particular reason.. but i did read this one when waiting for my process to get done here.. Thanks dear.. good job!

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:26pm | IP Logged
Hi yumna (nice name)  im shai Smile

ClapClapClap  great job dear....awesome.....shanak are soo cute....always fighting LOL..... looking forward to ur SS....nice to see a different aspect of shanak's life....

continue soon

cheers


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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Oh my! Lovely Sys
 
Maza aa gaya!
Seriously "real" good!
 
This was one of my favorite tracks of all time on the show
 
I wanted to find out how unsure he is, how immaturely/maturely he handles fatherhood
 
I wanted to understand the perceptions sorrounding fatherhood/motherhood in an urban vs. rural mindset.............
 
Do we all want the same things at the end of the day?
Or are we driven by a different set of social compulsions?
 
Lovely topic
 
Even lovelier SS
 
Keep going..
I dont read any OS usually............ I am too caught up in dissecting the show....... I have time for nothing elseLOL
 
Saaz and you are awesome
Real and matter of fact writing...........not OTT at all
 
I like my fiction to be that way
 
Cant imagine Shaan as a rocket scientist and her as a neuro surgeon
 
 
Take a bow
 
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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 7:51pm | IP Logged
@Simple21(Name please!)
LOVED your comment! Thank you so much for all the details about how different things made you feel what.Stuff to make a writers day and keep her floating on air! Thank you!=D

@ Saaz
Thank you once again. If we ever meet you get quite a few hugs from me.Even if they freak you out.

@Rooj
Thanks woman! Better than you? I don't think so.But love you for saying it=D

@ Sonali
Thank you-again! And if I forget your name or call you something else later, please don't mind.I suck at remembering names!

@Veena
Thankyou! I'm glad for whatever process it was that made you read this! And its a SS-which means more parts are a-coming and you have to read them.Hehe.

@Shai
Thank you! I love and miss their cute fights which is why they found their way here=D

@aditee
Aditee ji, you leave me speechless! I seriously didn't expect such effusive praise from you and it makes me do a little jig of happiness!
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
hi Sys
 loved the ss its awesome..............ClapClapClap
very well written ............ 
n awesome part loved how u expressed the emotions of khanak, madhavi
 n shaan becoming father.........LOL 
 
Angel


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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:08am | IP Logged
hey Yumna!..awesome work!...i dnt think any1 has attemptd an SS on this track be4...
gr8 work to u and Saaz!


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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 2:31am | IP Logged

Yumna darling......beautiful dear.....loved it ...Clap

Loved how you began with what Shanak do best ....thier Nok-Jhok....MISS this in the show a lot....and you did it perfectly dear.....it was so them...could so see them doing it ...LOLLOLLOL
 
Loved how the family reacts to their cute fights and their obliviosness towrds everyone reaction .....so cute nah...
 
Loved you describing her feelings on finding out that she's expecting..her going to dadi..and loved lovd her and Madzs bonding...aww....sigh...
 
And loved Shaan's reaction to it the most....lovd how you showed his fears on being old enough, mature enough responsible enough to be a father and his putting them on hold to just be happy for Khanak...God...there you showed us that yes he's there all ready..but does not know it yet.
 
Can't wait to see / read what you have in store for us..the name of the SS gives me a clue though....
 
So update soon....can't wait to read what you got to say...Big smile

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