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iluvmanar IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged
yamna...it's no touchy yaar...just luvved it...so emotional..i felt like crying....

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togepe30 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Very Heart wrenching and very real !!
We probably might never understand what ppl go thru when they face such situations...Even reading this sends shudders........
May God Bless people and give them strength to heal from this kind of pain !

Edited by togepe30 - 13 February 2011 at 1:21pm

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rafia 24 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
yumna im honestly speechless, they way to depict the emotions, the dialogues everything was spot on, first the two of them struggling internally as they both feel they need to come to terms with their own grief before they can support the other, the way shaans outburst breaks through khanaks walls and makes her feel again and their hear to heart and mini banter at the end was the perfect ending and very endearing,
seriously i dont know anyone to have gone through such a traumatic event but the way you have dealt with its seems sooo plausible and real. there was no cushioning some raw pain which is justifiable,

honestly this whole ff was brilliant, gripping and engaging and the writing was amazing- you really have a way with words

so now im bummed that there is no more parts but when your free will look forward to your latest creative adventure xxxxxxxxx

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adventure_gurl IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
 Yumna loved the update  keep it up! I mean I hope you write more stories to share with us, this one was great!Big smile

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kubare IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Yumna ....this is all that I can say..or show...ClapClapClapClap words aren't enough really...this whole part brought me to tears...Cry..beautiful...ClapClapClapClap
Wishing you a Very Very Happy ValentineBig smile *muwah* Hug

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aditee IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 7594

Posted: 13 February 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
Intense, emotional, poignant, sad, hopeful................
Ekdum sahi!
Fitting end to a lovely lovely story
I would LOVE to see my most fave pair enact the above, despite it being SO tragic and all
they both will doa  splendid job
I know!

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rooj-i IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 09 January 2007
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 2:13pm | IP Logged
OMG woman ur a classy, classy writer...where have you been hiding all this time?

Kuch aur nahi likh sakti? i mean an epilogue?

neways it was a great update yaar! I loved it!

You did amazing with it...ill come back with long comments but for now know this...this was good girl...

u are really good with words and emotions...

i loved the ending...typical Shanak style..

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OlicityFan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
awesoem ending!!..
thnx for the PM!

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