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Aisa hota toh?..Ufff... 1/26/11

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:56pm | IP Logged


Kal Aisa hota toh?......Ufff.. 


Maan & Geet's Bedroom ' Morning

GEET slowly opens her eyes and sees Maan standing in front of the mirror buttoning his shirt. MAAN turns and sees GEET watching him with a smile on her face and a twinkle in her eye. 


MAAN

(heart skips a beat and feels elated)

{ his fleeting thoughts ' no neg feeling about last night? - She is so pleasant ' feel so relived} 

(softly) 

"Good morning Geet"   


GEET

(gets off the bed and walks towards Maan. Lightly touches his hand and entwines her fingers with his and looks into his eyes)

(softly)

"I am so happy Maan"


MAAN

(smiles and runs his fingers lightly across her cheek)

(softly)

"Me too Geet"


DADI 

(off screen)

"Nakul, why are all these glasses and plates still here? Call the caterers and ask them to take care of them."


Maan and Geet look towards the door.

Maan turns around to look at Geet. Geet is still looking at the door.

Maan P.O.V. ' Geet's beautiful profile, his eye catches the spark of the nose stud on her cute little nose, then they travel slowly down to her long and elegant neck that is beautifully bare and exposed with her hair pulled up and with no jewelry. 

Takes a sharp breath and slowly bends down to nozzle against her neck and plants a passionate kiss on her soft flesh. And moves back still holding hands.


GEET

(gasps)

"Maaannnn"


MAAN

(Mischievously and softly)

"See Geet, its all your fault. It would have been a different story if you had brushed your teeth" 


GEET

(Mumbling under her breath and thinking of something)


MAAN

(Bursts out laughing at her expression)


GEET
(Goes up on her toes and tries to kiss Maan's open mouth)


MAAN

(Stunned and screams)

"Noooooooo"


DADI

(knocking)

"What happened?? I am coming in!!


Dadi enters the room and sees Maan and Geet sitting on the edge of the bed. Geet looking confused and Maan holding one of his shoes in his hand and trying to make Geet hold it as well.


DADI

"Why were you shouting No?"


MAAN

(Pretending to take the shoe away from Geet)

"No Dadi, nothing. Geet wants to polish my shoes and I am trying to stop her from doing it" 


GEET

(Confused)

"Hah??"


DADI

(smiling and thinking I will fix they goose)

"So what? Let her do it if she wants to do it"


MAAN and GEET

(stunned)

"Hah????"


DADI

(laughs)
" What do you think? I don't know what is going on? Did she really want to polish your shoes or was she trying to do something else?


Maan just grabs his shoes and starts walking out the door.


MAAN

(looking over his shoulder winks at Geet)

" Whatever, shoe polish or something else I will get it done later."


NAKUL

"Ouch!"


Maan and Nakul run into each other. And the shoes fall to the floor.


NAKUL

(picking up the shoes)

"Can I do it instead of Geet maam?"


Maan just grabs his shoes and leaves. Nakul looks confused. Dadi and Geet exchange looks and burst out laughing.


Scene fades from the bedroom and focuses on Maan in the living room sitting on the sofa. Maan ties his shoe laces and slowly sits up.  

Close up of Maan's face'.

Slowly leans his head back on the sofa and closes his eyes and smiles to himself and says softly "With Geet in my life everything will be fine. We will have our ups and downs. But we will never dwell too long on our downs. Geet proved that today. I have a lot to learn from her. It is going to be an interesting life with my "Sherni"

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I admire all the FF. OS and SS writers in this forum and was inspired to pen down this little scene. Thanks to all you amazing writers. But the humorous streak came from being inspired by tonyahk writing.

This scene is what I thought would be nice if it happened in tomorrows show. I am sure the CVS will come up with a better one then this. But till then enjoy....

Feel free to critic it.

Thanks for reading.. Push "like" if I have entertained you even a wee bit. It is my first attempt you see..Embarrassed




Edited by naamteeg - 25 January 2011 at 5:43pm

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
SUPER....dear....Hope something like this happens...BUT the precap shows that Maan is trying to avoid Geet as he is tensed about that URGGHHHH BABY thingy.....Cry

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged

ROFL ROFL ROFL   

WHAT A PREDICTION!!!

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Absoluv

SUPER....dear....Hope something like this happens...BUT the precap shows that Maan is trying to avoid Geet as he is tensed about that URGGHHHH BABY thingy.....Cry

Thanks!!

I have no fear when it comes to Maneet. They always bounce back with a bang!!Big smile

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 8:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by blackb28

ROFL ROFL ROFL   

WHAT A PREDICTION!!!


LOL Less of a prediction and more of a hope that it will all turn out good and spicy by the end of the weekROFL   

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Hey I would love to see thatLOL.........Its funny, romantic && cute at the same timeClap!! loved it.......HOPE IT HAPPENS THIS WEEKDay Dreaming!!

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrs.MSK_GurTi

Hey I would love to see thatLOL.........Its funny, romantic && cute at the same timeClap!! loved it.......HOPE IT HAPPENS THIS WEEKDay Dreaming!!

Thank you sooo much. This was my first attempt at this... And was sadCry seeing not many people enjoying it... until your post popped upBig smile.... YOU MADE MY DAY(NIGHT)...NOW I WILL GO SLEEP WITH A Big smile...

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:07am | IP Logged
hope they have some of the positiveness in todays show as I have expressed in my little scene

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