my jesture..... THOSE PAINFUL DAYS!!!! (completed) (Page 2)

NandiniRaizadaa IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Greatt !!!

shreela Goldie

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
very nice work!Star love it! my eyes were full of tears after reading this. keep it up!Hug
Bhavanab IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:16am | IP Logged
One word for your story is 'touching' !! Nice work !!! You're doing better and better !!! keep it up
cid_duo IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
i liked your every story.
but this one is awesome like daya's smile. your this story is very emotional and heart touching.
please write more, more and more stories for us.............
i am waiting for ur next one............
neeme IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged

@gadhadada, Very nice story. after reading ur story i feel that u r an emotional person.
Well, back to story , what i say very well written. Specially the way u describe the true and full of love frendshp.Big smile
In real life it really happens. that smetime because of very little confusion make a big confusion in frenshp.and its relly painfull, i experinced that.
The way u described expression of each character in words thats are so so good,meaningfull and appreciatble.Clap
Smetimes i feel that its overemotional. thats y i say that u r an emotional person.Dont mind that.
I like ur story so much.
The last part. FREDDIE: magar Sir ACP Sir nay hee kaha tha kay achi acting karna….ROFL
Oh thats was so funny.while readfing i was imagine him by saying this with his cute expression.
Very good story.Clap
Keep it up.....Thumbs Up

gadhadada IF-Addictz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged
hey ppl...

THANK YOU ALL from the core of my HEART.... thanx alot....Big smileBig smileClap
Big smilefirsy BHAVNAB DII ur comment is COMPLIMENT for me... thanx DII to xtract for reading my story as well...Big smile.

ya SHREELA, NANDANI, SHIVANI, NIMI and RASHIDA... thank you DII's...Clap

haan about NEEME.... thank YOU DIIClap.... according to UR comments (i took them praise)... sum lines are OVER EMMOTIONAL.... ya bit true... pata nahi NEEME DII mujhay khud kya baat buri lagi... shayed DAYA Sir ki takleef kay wo cope nahi ker pa rahy thay.... and also i did not look secondly... but i think i m not an emmotional person (my family/buddies call me GANDA BACCHATongue)... cz DII if i was there the SCENE b/w DAYA Sir and ABHI Sir... i did not just only grab my buddy coller... i slapped him/her as well.... hahahaWink....

ppl... buddy per hee tou gussa nikaal saktay hain na.... khair... again thanx....

SHIVANI for my new story.... thora wait karna paray ga... advance mein SORRY.....

i wrote 2 stories keep in mind JDJ (the circular bond which is quite hilirious) and this one.... while I M REALLY SORRY DAYA Sir was not based on JDJ idea but it abruptly ended by JDJ....

i really appreciate all of U who r SILENT READERS..... ppl plz FEEDBACK.... its really boost the writer hardwork....

ya ab mujhay stories mein BREAK lena hoga cz GALS/GUYS, CHINNU DII ki new story FORUM mein aa gayii hay.... VISROM DII ki story bhi COMING SOON per hay... ya BHAVNAB DII bhi apni stories post karnay wali hain.... so main tou bhaag jaon yahan say.... wesay bhi in CLASSIC WRITERS nay thora BREAK liya tha... tou meri story aap logun ko nazar aa gayii.... wana most probably ME and MY STORY were DEADDead.....

yes NOTEPAD... where is UR feedback... u said that u do that when the story is over... so story is over and out.... i m waitin....Question

i also wait TASHAROSE comments... i missed them... so plz if U have time....

now GALS?GUYS fasten ur seat belts and prepare urself to have a flight on CHINNU DII.... VISROM DII and BHAVNAB DII coming up stories....

still i missed VISROM DII... CHINNU DII... DR.FAHMI DII... SAGNIKA DII and everone comments.... arry bhai CRITISIZE he ker lein..... magar kuch kahein tou!!!

yes one more... if anyones intentions hurted.... i say VERY VERY SORRY.... and really THANX ALOT....

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LadyMeringue IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 January 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
But seriously Gadhadada, awesome job!!!! And as Bhavana di said, it was purely "touching"!!!!Clap
.Crystal. Senior Member

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 6:32am | IP Logged
Awesome words to describe.....just so touching Star had tears in my eyes when i read this
u have portrayed abhi-Daya's friendship( more like brotherhood) so nicely...especially daya's concern for abhi wen he supposedly lost his memory...n the letter daya wrote to ACP sir made me cry...and the line in the letter was so cute but true:

"Sir' aap log mera pata lagany ki koshish nahi kijyeyga' khas ker ABHIJEET' kyunkay mujhay malum hay wo mujhay dhoond hee lay ga'

Gadhadada, ur stories are just so touching,I really like them...lookin' forward to more stories by u Big smile

Edited by notepad697 - 12 February 2011 at 7:53am

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