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love it! my eyes were full of tears after reading this. keep it up!
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@gadhadada, Very nice story. after reading ur story i feel that u r an emotional person.
Well, back to story , what i say very well written. Specially the way u describe the true and full of love frendshp.
In real life it really happens. that smetime because of very little confusion make a big confusion in frenshp.and its relly painfull, i experinced that.
The way u described expression of each character in words thats are so so good,meaningfull and appreciatble.
Smetimes i feel that its overemotional. thats y i say that u r an emotional person.Dont mind that.
I like ur story so much.
The last part. FREDDIE: magar Sir ACP Sir nay hee kaha tha kay achi acting karna….
Oh thats was so funny.while readfing i was imagine him by saying this with his cute expression.
Very good story.
Keep it up.....
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firsy BHAVNAB DII ur comment is COMPLIMENT for me... thanx DII to xtract for reading my story as well........ according to UR comments (i took them praise)... sum lines are OVER EMMOTIONAL.... ya bit true... pata nahi NEEME DII mujhay khud kya baat buri lagi... shayed DAYA Sir ki takleef kay wo cope nahi ker pa rahy thay.... and also i did not look secondly... but i think i m not an emmotional person (my family/buddies call me GANDA BACCHA
)... cz DII if i was there the SCENE b/w DAYA Sir and ABHI Sir... i did not just only grab my buddy coller... i slapped him/her as well.... hahaha
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