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MG ff *Pehla Pehla Pyaar* Rewriting in ghsp forum - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
hahahahahaha i lyk da baby confident
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Posted: 13 years ago

OHH-EMM-GEE CP

this was ultra freaking mega adorableee....ahhhhhh i wanna pull ur cheeks😳
how can you be this cute?πŸ˜†
awww my maan singh khulana is such a cutiepieee....soo dreammy as a kid too😍
okay okay lemme control my thoughts hehe
awww he is soo confident and brave....didn't even cry on the first day of school...shoo cuteee! and his laugh...*haye* i can legit hear it right now!
omggggggg geet is like a mini-me....i cried soo much on my first day and just like her teacher, even my teachers were scared as to what to do....i used to say chocate cuz i cud never really say chocolateπŸ˜†....i still say it cuz i will never forget my chocate days hehe
awww their little fight was shoo cutee...abhi se naughty geet?...maan ki chocate chahiye?πŸ˜‰
omgg cp you wrote this update soo beautifully and cutely...took me back to my childhood days...you writing always has this adorable innocence in it and i love you for that😳
omggg pweez make them stay as kids for couple more updates!
*sigh* if only little geet ate muffins cuz then she would totally be like me...i was addicted to muffins bachpan se...muffins and bournvita and still am hehe
okay enough bak bak
awesomelicious update cp!
continue jaldi warna i am coming to do pitaai
love you babes!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
very cute story.........Maan and Geet are so adorable..............so both are in the same class.............wow...................cont soon and pm me.......................
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnk u sooo much for ur wonderful comments....i'll be rplying to all of them from now on...with every update...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
and finally i have named this ff as Pehla Pehla Pyaar...
hope u like it..
and i will be updating today...πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

plzz update kero naa ... its been so long   ...  πŸ˜’

 
cant wait for the kiddy maneet's conversation  😊
 
 
love
Sana
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Posted: 13 years ago
yippeeeee .. ur updating today  πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³πŸ₯³
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute one.
 
i hope maan offered her the chocolate
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz.......can't wait for it!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
πŸ€—hello everyone...thnk u so much for ur wonderful response....
after seeing ur comments...i thought it would be better if i thank u all personally...

so here r the replies...πŸ˜ƒ
millie_maaneet:
i'm glad u liked it...thnk u.😳

maangeetcrazy:
thnk u jaan for ur sweet comment..😳
oh ok...i have titled it pehla pehla pyaar then...
aww...googli googli update...lolπŸ˜†
hmm...yup...he is going to give chocolate to her lolzz..
haan shreya....kind of childhood story..but more of transition from frndship to love...😳
thnks again...& a big pappi jhappi to u too.....πŸ€—

cutieteju:
thnk u dear.😳

rohini20:
thnk u so much rohini..😳

cyum321:
thnk u dear..😳

namita25:
awww...thnks namita for loving them..😳

aarthirajendran:
lol...i was laughing while writing too...thnksπŸ˜†πŸ˜³

-afsha-:
awww.....thnk u dear..😳
u have cute little bachchas in ur house too...!! it feels so pleasant to have them always na..! though i have never lived with a bachcha...lolπŸ˜†

todazstar:
thnk u dear😳

sonnal_17:
thnk u dear...
lolzz..
the pleasure is all mine..😳

mayuri.vet:
oh thnk u mayuu....πŸ€—
even i want a chocolate...lolzz...πŸ˜†

kahkashansakina:
thnk u dear😳

trishap:
thnk u dear😳

kirti_fiji
thnk u dear😳

shalve:
thnks😳

doosheeka:
thnk u😳

namitasin:
thnk u...u r also shoo shweet..

Maaneetluverr:
i'm so glad that u liked it...😳
thank u dear..😳

kawaii_geet:
yup...finally i updated...lolzz..πŸ˜†
sorry for the delay always...
mujhe b uchke shaath palna hai...u r too cute..😳

sindu555:
thnk u sana...love u.😳
and u r already in the pm list dear...and i am updating soon..πŸ˜†

t_areeb:
thnks😳

gangesegb:
thnk u ...
the pleasure is all mine..😳

rsroopali:
aww....thnk u pakka plommishπŸ˜³πŸ˜†

radhikashah:
thnks😳

-shamima-
i'm happy that u liked their fight😳
yes dear...u guessed right...he'll give the chocolates to her...
thnks for helping wid title...so P3 it is..😳

simi91:
thnk u so much..😳

swetha10:
thnks.😳

maankimishti:
thnks dear..

amzu32:
thnk u for ur sweet sweet comments.😳

perfectyarav:
ratna thnk u so much....πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
oh sure dear....if u wish to see cutie maaneet more...i'll delay the leap a bit..
and thnk u dear...for u know what..u r really shweet...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
and sorry i had missed all d comments on pg 15...so thx for telling..πŸ˜ƒ

preethia:
thnk u..😳
yup...he will share it wid her..lolπŸ˜†

-sofiya-
thnks.😳

zahra15:
thnk u so much...😳
i'm glad u all like maan..lolz..
hmm....ur guess is perfect..πŸ˜†

sweet scorpio:
thnk u dear...
and no problem..!!😳

divareena:
i'm so happy that u r liking it...
thnks for sweet comments...😳
lol u all r masters at guessing..πŸ˜†

sukanyaangel:
thnk u so much dear...
and u r added...😳

hinalshah:
yup...hinal how can they live widout fighting..lol..πŸ˜†
thnks😳

ambbiha:
thnks..😳

silkyarora:
i'm glad that u like the concept...
thnks..😳

sanya456:
thnks dear..😳

sweetcherry96
thnks adeena😳

muskaan_cute19
thnk u so much😳

sanjulee:
thnks dear..
i'll b updating sooner now...😳

123pritha
thnks..😳

mrk_1
thnk u so much...
btw...when r u updating??πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

madhavipatil:
thnks.😳

neethuchandran
thnks.😳

sona-rai:
thnks a lot for ur comments dear..😳

maan13579
thnks..😳

pikachu:
thnks fatima..
u r guessing right dear..lol.πŸ˜†
i'm glad u like it..😳

mgdg_2010:
thnk u ren diπŸ€—

dmg_roks_antara:
thnk u..
btw...i love ur dP....really cute..lolz..πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

kareena-mayur:
aww..karree u aal chhhoooo chweet...maine na updet kal diya...i hoap ti tumhe patand ayeda...πŸ˜³πŸ˜†

shradha14
thnks shradha...😳

princess163:
aww...thnk u so much dear..
u r added..😳

deepthichoudary:
thnk u dear..😳

nahtani88:
thnk u so much😳

zaara2212:
thnk u so much dear....i have added u..😳

dia_ditz:
thnk u sho much
i have added u..😳

maaneet.lover:
thnk u dear...added u.😳

salmankhanrulz:
lol i'm glad u like him..

macho_muffin:
CP!!!! thnk u for ur bada bada ultra freaking mega adorable comments dear..heheπŸ˜†
thnk u choooo much CP...i wanna pull ur cheeks too...πŸ˜‰
can i call u cute plz haan..lolπŸ˜³πŸ˜†
awww......u were like geet...how cute!! and chocate....even the little CP was sooo adorable...πŸ˜›
and u know...i was minnie-maan in childhood...like i was always ordering everyone since kg...πŸ˜†
oh CP...i'm soooo happy that u recalled ur memories bcoz of it...me too was recalling mine...lolz...πŸ˜†
ufff.......CP...don't praise me so much...mai khushi se fuut jaoungi...☺️
and ok done...they'll remain kids for now...ok!😊
oh....my my...! me too love bournvita...and my muffin too..!! lolzzπŸ˜†
thnks again CP...vaise i was waiting for ur comments...to update the next part...sachchi..
love ya too..πŸ€—

spvd:
yup...both r in same class...
thnk u for liking dear...
and i have added u.😳


gosh!! its done...thnk u so much...each & evry comment of urs means a lot to me....it makes my day..!!
and i will be updating Dil Hai Tumhara also...if not today...then tomorrow pakka!!
but....till then...
enjoy this...
hope u will like it..
do comment haan..


Edited by maaneet_ayla - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
edit..will rewrite in ghsp forum..thanks :)

Edited by pinkmoon - 11 years ago