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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 68)

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Part21 (Samajh payenge pyar ko?)



Heer car mein baithi hoti hai aur Prem car check kar raha hota hai tabhi ek aurat bohot budi halat mein saans le rahi hoti hai aur uske haath mein ek bachcha bhi hota hai jo zor se roye jaa raha hota hai, woh aurat takh kar sarak par hi baith jaati hai, Prem bagte huwe jaata hai aur Heer usske piche

Prem: Heer tum bachche ko pakkro!

Heer bachche ko godh mein le leti hai aur Prem uss aurat ki utne mein madat karta hai

aurat: apka shukriya!!
Prem: aap aise itni dhoob mein sarak par kiya kar rahi hain?
aurat: mere bachche ne do din se khuch nahi khaya hai, kissi jagah par kaam bhi nahi mill raha aur aab to khaana mang mang kar bhi takh gayee houn, rehne ki jagah bhi nahi hai
Prem: aaj ke baad apko fikaar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai kyon ki aabse aap mere hotel mein kaam karein gi aur wahin rahein gi
aurat: main kaise apka shukriya karoun?, aapto ek farishta ban kar meri zindagi mein aye ho

Heer bachche ko chup kara ne ki koshish kar rahi hoti hai: Prem dekho na!! book se roya jaa raha hai..

Prem une apne hotel mein le jata hai aur manager bohot pareshaan ho jata hai Prem ke saath Heer ko dekh kar

Manager: woh sir... main... inne job pe.. rakhne wala tha... lekin woh... I'm sorry sir, age se aise galti nahi hogi... main abhii hi Heer maan ko job pe rakhta houn

Prem: tum kehna kiya chah rahe ho?... isska matlab pichli baar job ke liye jo ayee thi woh Heer thi aur mere kehne par bhi tumne usse job pe nahi rakha...

Manager: I'm sorry sir!!

Heer feels bad... she thinks " maine Prem ko kitna galat samjhaa... mujhse itni badi galti kaise ho gayee? "

Prem to manager: iss aurat ko hotel mein kamra dedo aur aajse yeh yahin job karein gi, yehi hai tumhara yahan pe manager rehna ka ek moqa, aur inne khaane ke liye bhi do

Prem yeh keh kar wahan se chala jata hai aur Heer wahan se chal kar ghar jane laghti hai

~ ~ ~

Arjun ko call ati hai, woh utha tha hai

Arjun: haan mr. Mehra!

Mr.Mehra: aaj meri baithi ki engagement hai to main soch raha tha ke aap aur Arohi bhi yahan aa jate aur hum project bhi aaj hi discuss kar lein ge
Arjun: ok Sir!
Mr.Mehra: Thanks!

Arjun phone bandh karta hai aur Arohi se kehta hai: Mr.Mehta ki baithi ki engagement hai aur woh chahte hai ke hum bhi wahan jayein aur aaj hi project discuss karle

Arohi: thik hai sir! waise bhi mujhe engagements aur shaadiyon mein jaana bohot pasand hai

Arohi yeh keh kar tyaar hone jaati hai aur Arjun uska wait kar raha hota hai

~ ~ ~

Heer ka room candles se decoret huwa hota hai

Meher: Di ko yeh sab bohot pasand aaye ga
Preet:  aaj raat unke beech ki har dhooriyan mith jayein gi
Meher: ... di ati hi hongi!!
Preet: main lights off kar deta houn

Preet light off kar deta hai aur kehta hai: chalo hum dosre room mein chalte hain
Meher: haan chalo

~ ~ ~

Arohi tiyaar ho kar ati hai to Arjun usse dekhta reh jaata hai

Arohi: chalein?
Arjun: haan chalo!

dono chale jate hain... raste mein Arjun ko office se kuch files leni hoti hai to woh jata hai aur Arohi car mein baith kar uska intezaar kar rahi hoti hai

a worker: sir!! merii maa ki tabiyaat kharab hai to main ghar jaa sakhta houn
Arjun: yahan tum log kaam karne ate ho ya phir mujhe apni family problems sunna ne ate ho

Arohii sochti hai ke woh Arjun ki help karde to woh jati haii aur wahin darwase ke bahir gadhe ho kar sunn leti hai

Arohi feels bad, in her heart " yeh kitna buda hai, kabhi kissi ko khush nahi dekh sakhta "

worker: I'm sorry sir
Arjun with attitude: It's ok!!

Arjun apni pocket mein se kuch paise nikaal kar usse deta hai: yeh lo tumhari maa ke liye kaam aa jayen ge, main unke ilaaj ke liye paiment karoun ga!!
worker: thnk you so much sir!! aap sab ki nazron mein bude banne rehte hain lekin aapka dil utna hi saaf hai

Arohi smiles

Arjun ghusse se kehta hai: thik hai!! zyada bolne ki zaroorat nahii aur haan yeh baat sirf hum dono ke beech rehni chahiye

Arohi think " main sir ko kitna galat samajh rahii thi, woh itne bhi bude nahi hain lekin aisa kya huwa hai inki zindagi mein jo yeh bahir se itne phattar dil hai, khair mujhe innse kiya? "


~ ~ ~

Prem car drive kar raha hota hai: I'm sorry Heer but you have to wait... yeh sab to aaj raat ko hi thik ho ga aur tab tak tumhe intezaar karna hoga

Heer chal rahi hoti hai aur uske ankhein nam hoti hain: maine Prem ko kitna buda samajha, kaise maine apne hi Prem ko galat samjh liya lekin mujhe iss baat ki khushi hai ke mera Prem galat nahi hai

Heer ko achanak dard hone laghta hai kyon ki uski phair mein choth ayee hoti hai lekin usske khushi ke age woh dard bhi pheeka par jata hai aur woh muskuraye jaa rahi hoti hai

Heer ek dukaan par rukh kar Prem ke liye ek pyara sa teddy bear leti hai



Heer smiles: I know Prem yeh teddy gift karna todha sa bachpana laghe ga lekin pyar mein to sab hi chalta hai na, aur yeh teddy hamare chahat ki nishaani bane ga

~ ~ ~

Thanks for reading my FF and for liking... If you really like this part, hit on the like button and leave ur compliments, please give me some suggestion for next part... I will read them n if I've time I will reply them.. Thnks!! 



Edited by amira_saeed - 28 May 2011 at 1:34am

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great ff - update soon - pls dont make us wait longer
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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 4:00am | IP Logged
so heer got to knw dat it wasnt prem who didn give her d job..and even arohi gets to knw dat arjun is nt as bad as he acts..luved d update...post d next chapter soon yaar...

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awsome, and youre updading sooner, evan better. cant wait to see what you do next. hope some romantic moments between heer and prem in her candle lit room, and arjun and arohi have a nice one to one in wedding, and start feeling more for each other.

 
thanks for the pms. again
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Owww. So cute Upd. Heart Love it.
Awesome work, Yaar
 
Update soon.. Hug
 
Thakuu for the pm.
 
Love from Hinz<3
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awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap

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thanks amira awesome update Clap

finally Heer misunderstanding of Prem is cleared , hope they both confess their loveHeart for each otherrr sooon, woohh Preeth Winkand Mehr are planning for Heer and Prem lovelyyy
Even Arohi came to know Arjun's Good side wohhh Big smile
waiting for next update interstinggg one

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