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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 65)

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awesome update...waiting for d next chapter...update soon...

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I am falig in love with your  work.  Day Dreaming
 
Keep rocking & upd sooon.
 
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Originally posted by Nikita_David

awesome update...waiting for d next chapter...update soon...



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Part20 (Pyar mein khoye huwe)




In Ludhiana

Heer Prem ko phirse ignore karne laghti hai aur agli bus ka wait karne laghti hai aur Prem kahinn chala jata hai tabhi ek admi ata hai aur kehta hai: strike hone ki wajah se aaj koi bus nahi ane wali

Heer: acha... Thank you!!

Heer chalne laghti hai aur Prem ki car aa kar uske paas rukhti hai

Prem: agar tum chaho to main tumhe drop kar sakhta houn waise bhii agli bus kal hii ane wali hai

Heer: main chal kar jaa sakhti houn... aur haan waise bhii main ajnabiyon se baat karna pasand nahi karti

Heer yeh keh kar jaane laghtii hai achanak uske phair mein mojh aa jatii hai aur Prem jaldi car se nikal kar Heer ke paas jata hai aur uske phair ko dubaane laghta hai

Prem: tumhe zyada choth to nahii laghii na? tum thik to ho na?...

Heer ko choth laghi hoti hai lekin dard Prem ki ankhon mein jalak raha hota hai, Heer woh dard Prem ki ankhon mein dekh leti hai lekin phir bhi woh usse ignore karne ki koshish kar rahi hoti hai

Prem: chalo main tumhe chor deta houn (isse pehle ke Heer kuch bolti to Prem apna haq jeeta the huwe kehta hai) tumhe apni batein mannwane ka bohot shoq hai lekin iss bar tum sirf meri sunno gi

Prem Heer ko godh mein lete huwe car mein betha tha hai aur Heer ko aise mehsoos hone laghta hai jaise Prem sehii hai


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In Shimla (Arohi's house)

Arohii sabsiyein khat rahii hoti hai tab hi darwase par bell bajhti hai, Arohi baghte huwe darwase ki taraf jaa rahi hoti hai achanak usske phair mein ek kaanta chup jata hai

Arohi: ouchh!!

Arohi ahista se chal kar darwasa kholti hai aur Arjun ko dekh kar hairan ho jati hai: tum yahan kiya kar rahe ho?

Arjun attitude se bolte huwe kehta hai: kal 6bajhe hum mehra's company jaa rahe hain, project discuss karne ke liye

Arohi: main kahin nahii jane wali aur woh bhi apke saath!!

achanak Arohi ko dard hota hai to woh apni ankhein band kar leti hai to Arjun ki nazar Arohi ke phair par pharti hai jo ki kaante chupne ki wajah se zakhmi ho jata hai

Arjun: tumhare phair par to choth laghi hai!! tum bhii na, choth laghii hai tab bhi jungliyon ki tarah ladh rahi ho

Arjun Arohi ko sofe par baitha tha hai aur puchta hai: first aid box kahan rakha huwa hai?

Arohi point karte huwe batta thi hai: uss cupoard mein para huwa hai!! ouchh... bohot dard ho raha hai!!

Arjun jaldi se box le kar ata hai aur Arohi ko duwayee lagha kar patti kar deta hai,  dono ek dosre ki ankhon mein khoo jate hain

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Prem car drive kar raha hota hai aur Heer usse dekh rahi hoti hai

Heer sochti hai " main sab bhool jaoun gi lekin yeh pal kabhii nahi bhool paoun gi, inn palon mein kuch to hai jo mere dil ko betaab kar deta hai shayd Prem hi hai woh deewana?... yeh to aaj raat ko hi patta chale ga "

Prem Heer ki taraf dekhta hai aur puchta hai: kya huwa? aise kyon dekh rahi ho? mere face par kuch lagha huwa hai?

Heer moo hilate huwe naa kehti hai aur kuch dher baad car rukh jati hai

Heer: yehh car kyon rukh gayee?

Prem: patta nahii! main check karta houn

Prem nikal kar dekhne laghta hai aur aise hii shaam hone laghti hai

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Arohi smile karte huwe kehti hai: Thanks!! waise mujhe lagha tha ki aap to celebrate karein ge apnii iss jeet ko to phir aab kiya huwa?

Arjun: zyada khush mat ho!! yeh junk tum jeeti ho lekin agli junk main tumhe jeetne nahi doun ga

Arohi: akhir aapne har mann hi leena lekin phir bhii yeh attitude nahii gaya but don't worry bohot jald woh bhi chala jaye ga

Arjun: itne dard mein bhi tum ladna nahi bhooltii, tumhe ladne ka award millna chahiye aur waise mujhse zyada gamandhii to tum ho!!

Arohi Arjun ki ankhon mein khoo jati hai aur tabb hi woh soch mein bar jati hai " yeh ladte ladte achanak mujhe kya ho gaya? "

She smiles because she thinks that it's something stupid and Arjun also smiles...


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Thanks for reading my FF and for liking... If you really like this part, hit on the like button and leave ur compliments, please give me some suggest for next part... I will read them n if I've time I will reply them.. Thnks!! 


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Awesome update
loved it...
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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