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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 51)

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Awesome update

Loved it loadz

Can't wait 4 da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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awesome update............arjun n arohi n their fightin ................loved it...
waitin for prem heer scene...........
thnx for d pm..........update soon
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beautiful update dear<3
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Thanks a lot for ur lovely compliments... Big smile

Part16 (Fire of Love)
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Next day

Heer shop se kuch samaan ghirad rahi hoti hai aur paise kaam phar jaate hain

Heer: bhai iss waqat mere paas itne hi paise hain, please price kaam kardi jiye

woh admi ghusse se kehta hai: paise dene hain to do ya phir jao!!!

Heer ko buda laghta hai lekin phir bhi woh issi koshish mein hoti hai ke woh mann jaye: please...!!

achanak koi aa kar paise deta hai aur kehta hai: yeh li jiye

Heer mudh kar dekhti hai to Prem hota hai: tum?... woh yeh...

Prem Heer ko bolne ka moqa nahi deta aur kehta hai: tumhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai

Heer dheere se muskurah the huwe kehti hai: Thnks...

Prem bhi dheere se muskurah tha hai lekin isse age Prem ke paas kuch bolne ke liye nahi hota to woh sirf itna hi keh pata hai: mujhe kahin jana hai

Prem yeh keh kar challa jaata hai to Heer sochne laghti hai " jab Prem paas hota hai to woh to moqa nahi chor tha aur har pal saath rehta hai aur aaj ek minute ke liye bhi mujhse baat nahi ki " yeh baat Heer ke dil ko chup thi hai aur iss chuppan se usske aankhein nam ho jati hain

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Arjun apne cabin mein bethe kuch plan kar raha hota hai: mujhe aap iss junk ke dosre mission par concentrate karna hoga, Arohi ke naak mein dum karna

Arjun apne nose pe haat rakhta hai kyon ki ussko ek dum se yaad ata hai jab Arohi ne uske nose pe darwasa mara hota hai... Arohi andher aati hai aur bohot hi ache mood mein hoti hai

Arohi ek cute si smile dete huwe kehti hai: hi sir!

Arjun attitude se kehta hai: miss.Arohi you are late!! woh bhi 5minute

Arohi: 5min hi late huwi houn na koi 5din to nahi na?!
 
Arjun jhooti si smile dete huwe kehta hai: very funny... jao aur mere liye coffee le kar aoo and please beech mein garwaat wali koi cheez mat dhalna

Arohi: to kya pyar millaoun?

Arjun uth tha hai aur dheere se Arohi ke paas jata hai aur muskurah the huwe uska haath pakkar tha hai aur kehta hai: chaho to pyar hi milla dena...

dono ek dosre ke ankhon mein khoo jate hain aur phir todhi hi dher baad Arohi dheere se kehti hai: Arjun...?

Arjun zor se haste huwe uska haath chorta hai: tumhe kya lagha main serious houn?... I'm just kidding... go and bring my coffee!!

Arohi jaane laghti hai to Arjun dheere se kehta hai: Arohi!

Arohi Arjun ki taraf mudhti hai aur puchti hai: haan sir?

Arjun: garwat mat milla

dono haste hain aur phir Arohi chaali jati hai...

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Prem aur Preet chal rahe hote hain to Prem ka phone bajhta hai aur woh utha tha hai, uske pauji ka phone hota hai, Prem ko unki awaaz sun kar bohot acha laghta hai

Prem khushi se kehta hai: ji pauji, aap kaise hain?

Lalit(Pauji): tum dono bachchon ke bekher main kaisa ho sakhta houn? tum sab bachchon ki bohot yaad ati hai

Prem: aapki bhi bohot yaad ati hai

Lalit: acha Prem pooter, hamara ludhiana mein ek hotel hai na to tu wahan ho aa aur dekh aa sab kaisa hai

Prem: ji pauji aur kuch kaam hai to kahi main kardoun ga

Lalit: uss Preet ko bhi kuch samajhaa, har waqt gumna phirna, doston ke saath rehna aur raat ko parties mein jana...

Prem: aap usski fikaar mat ki jiye, main apne bhai ko sambaal loun ga

Preet: phirse iss eid ke chand ne mere baade mein kuch kaha na?

Lalit: dekh phirse shuru ho gaya, aagar yeh mere samne hota na to isse batta tha

Prem: paujii!! please.... rehne di jiye na bachcha hai

Lalit: tu har baar isse bachcha leta hai.. chal aab jaa!! apna khayal rakhna aur iss nalayak ka bhi

Prem: jee pauji

Prem phone band karta hai aur Preet ki taraf dekhte huwe kehta hai: tu bhi na!

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Arjun office mein hota hai aur kuch workers se baat kar raha hota hai... woh workers chale jaate hain... Arjun sochta hai " maine Arohi ko coffee lane ko bola tha koi bahar todhna ka nahi "

Arjun Arohi ko dundhe the huwe canteen jata hai to Arohi andher wale hisse mein hoti hai, Arjun Arohi ko bhoola tha hai to achanak light chali jaati hai

Arohi darte huwe kehti hai: sir...

Arjun jaise ki janta hai ke Arohi ko andhere se dar laghta hai to woh lighter jala tha hai aur Arohi uske paas jati hai, Arjun zor se uski basu pakkar tha hai aur Arohi kehti hai: sir mujhe dard ho raha hai!! choriye!!

dono ek pal ke liye ek dosre ki ankhon mein kho jate hain...


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Arjun: jab koi cheez dar aur dard de to usse itna darao ya itna dukhao ke woh khudh hi bagh jaye

Arohi: lekin mujhse aisa nahi hota...

Arjun: waise to bari banti phirti ho aur andhere mein awaaz tak nahi nikaal thi

Arohi dar to rahi hoti hai lekin phir bhi woh koshish karte huwe bolti hai: haan main darpok houn... ek din aisa aaye ga jab apko kissi cheez se dar laghe ga aur tab aapko samajh aaye ga ke aap kaun ho

Arjun stupid si smile deta hai aur kehta hai: main kaun houn?
 
Arohi josh ke saath bolte huwe kehti hai: aaj aap sirf ek famous bussiness man Arjun punj ho lekin jab aap sirf Arjun honge to tab aapko patta chale ga ke aap ka bhi koi dar hai

Arjun uski basu chorte huwe kehta hai: aisa kabhi nahi ho sakhta (he smiles)

Arjun ke paas aur kuch kehne ko nahi hota to woh attitude dikhate huwe chala jaata hai aur light bhi aa jati hai to Arohi muskurah the huwe kehti hai: sir aapki inn baton mein mujhe meri junk ladne ka hatyaar mill gaya hai, dard!! aab main aapke dard pe aisi chot dene wali houn ke aapka yeh attitude wala paan uthar hi jaye ga aur phir main tabhi yahan se jaoun gi

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Prem apne hotel mein jata hai, woh sara hotel dekh raha hota hai to usse ek room se awaaz ati hai,

Room ke andher Heer aur ek admi hota hai

Heer: sir please mujhe job ki bohot zaroorat hai

Admi: dekhiye yahan aap jaisi middle class ladki ke liye jagah nahi hai

Heer: yeh aap kiya keh rahe hain? dekhiye ek probleme ho gayee hai to mujhe job ki sakht zaroorat phar gayee hai

Admi: to main kya karoun?

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Prem yeh sunta hai to usse buda laghta hai lekin bandh darwase ki wajah se woh yeh nahi jan pata ke woh ladki Heer hai, wahan se ek worker ghussar raha hota hai

Prem: excuse me! please jo admi andher hai aap une bahar bula di jiye

worker andher jaa kar usse bhula tha hai aur phir chala jata hai...

Prem: jo ladki andher hai aap usse job pe abhi hi rakhiye

Admi: tu to aise baat kar raha hai jaise yeh hotel tere baap ka hai

Prem: jee!! main Prem juneja houn

Admi: woh... woh I'm sorry

Prem: it's ok, maine jo kahan woh ki jiye

Prem yeh keh kar challa jata hai to woh admi kehta hai: ek din kya yahan aa gaye to samajhte hain sab inki hi marzi se hoga

woh Admi andher jaa kar Heer se kehta hai

Admi: main tumhe iss job pe nahi rakh raha aur tum phirse koshish bhi mat karna, tum jaise logon se sakhti se hi pesh ana pharta hai

Heer: abhi todhi hi dher pehle aap thik se baat kar rahe the aur aab aap aise kyon baat kar rahe hain?

Admi: hamare boss Prem Juneja ne kaha hai ke aapko iss job pe na rakha jaye aur aapse waise hi baat karni chahiye jaise aap ho

Heer yeh sunne ke baad shock ho jaati hai aur kuch kahe bekher hi wahan se chali jaati hai, woh hotel mein chal rahi hoti hai to woh ek bandh room mein pohnj thi jahan andhera hota hai

Heer ki ankh mein ansoo hote hain: Prem aisa kaise kar sakhta hai? woh bhi mere saath?... main akhir uski laghti hi kya houn jo mujhe buda lagh raha hai?

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Arohi Arjun ko uske cabin mein coffee dene jaa rahi hoti hai to uske raste mein sid aa jata hai

Sid: hey sweety!! how are you?
Arohi: main thik houn tum sunao?
Sid: hmmm... fine!! yeh coffee kiss ke liye hai?... oh i guess yeh mere liye hai

Sid Arohi ke haat se le kar pee leta hai to Arjun dhoor gadhe huwe dekh raha hota hai

Arjun think " oh! to issne meri coffee Sid ko de deyi, chalo acha hi huwa isski garwi coffee peene se bachch gaya "

Arjun zor se bolta hai: Arohi!!! mere liye fruit ka salad le kar aoo

Arohi think " main yahan kaam karne ati houn ya ine khana kilane? "

Arohi: jee sir

Sid: good luck and coffee mazze ki thi

Arohi smiles: thnks

Arohi wahan se challi jaati hai

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Heer ka dil yeh manne ko tyaar nahi hota ke Prem ne aisa kaha hota hai lekin achanak room mein koi ata hai aur woh lighter jala tha hai to woh Prem hota hai, dono bohot pass hote hain, Prem ko dekhne ko baad Heer ka shaq yakeen mein badal jata hai

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Heer ke dil mein bohot dard hota hai aur woh apne dil mein kehti hai " kyon tumne aisa kya? maine tum pe yakeen kyon kya? kyon tumhare iss kadam se mere dil par choth pohnji hai "

Prem: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Heer: ek bohot zaroori kaam ke liye ayee thi

Prem: woh kaam huwa ke nahi huwa?

Heer Prem ki ankhon mein dekhte huwe kehti hai: aagar main yahan naa ati to woh kaam kabhi nah hota

Prem: kaisa kaam?

Heer think " jaante huwe bhi anjaan ban raha hai, kaise mujhse itni badi galti ho gayee "

Heer: i think ke mujhe late ho raha hai main chalti houn

Prem: main chor deta houn

Heer smiles: no thanks... main aapne kaam khud kar sakhti houn

Heer yeh keh kar chali jaati hai aur Prem Heer ke iss andaz se hairan hota hai aur usse bohot buda laghta hai, Prem: yeh Heer mujhse aise kyon baat kar rahi hai? may be maine hi uske saath kuch galt kya hoga tabhi woh aise behave kar rahi hai.. koi baat nahi main Heer ko mana loun ga

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hi
the up is good
so arjun and arohi ar there in the office and arjun arohi ko satane ke liye usse coffe laane ko kahete haai
arohi arjun ke liye coffe laata haai parsid woh coffee aapna samajh ke pi jaata and arjun see that
arjun aur arohi ka jaise andhera se rishta ban chukka haai jab dekho andhere mein phas jaate haai dono
anyways prem again helps heer
plz cont soon and pm me
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.


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