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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 46)

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by harshitideewani

thanks amira for a amazing and lovely update Clap
premeer scenes were cuteHeart and arjuhi scenes were also
 interestingSmile
waitinf for the next part update sooon asapDay Dreaming


Ur most welcome... Big smile
Thnks a lot for ur lovely compliments...
suree Wink

~Amira~

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 1:45am | IP Logged
Thnks for ur lovely compliments... Big smile

HapPy Holi... =D

Part14 (Holi ka jatkha)

Prem, Maan, Geet, Preet khanna khaa kar aur batein kar ke apne apne ghar chale jaate hain..
Arjun aur Arohi ki meeting ho jati hai.. aur une contract bhi mill jata hai...


Arjun: Arohi tumne bohot mehnat ki hai, iss contract millne mein tumhari bhi wajah hai
Arohi: it's ok (smiles)
Arjun: itna banne ki zaroorat nahi!!


dono apne apne ghar chale jaate hain.....

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Prem bed par baithe huwe Heer ke bade mein soch raha hota hai

Prem: jabse main Heer se milla hon tabse main kho gaya houn, patta nahi mujhe kya hogaya hai!!

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Next Day

In Ludhiana

Holi ki tyaari ho rahi hoti hai, koi ek dosre ko rang lagha raha hai to koi bangh pee raha hai, sab ke chehron khushi se khilkilaa rahe hai...

Heer rangoli bana rahi hai, jissme har rang saja huwa hai




Geet: yeh hamari shaadi se pehle akhri holi hai aur main chahti houn yeh hamari sabse achi holi ho
Maan: tum jaisa chahti ho waisa hi hoga


Prem ek kone mein chup chap gadha huwa hai aur pray kar raha hai



Prem(in heart): patta nahi aaj sab khush hai lekin mera dil khush nahi hai (Prem apni ankhein bandh karta hai)... akhir meri kismat mein kiya likha hai?


Prem apni ankhein kholta hai to uske samne Heer hoti hai aur woh muskurah rahi hoti hai



Heer kee haathon mein rang hote hain to woh Prem par ghira thi hai

Heer: Happy holi!!
Prem muskurah tha to hai lekin waise nahi jaise woh dil se muskurah tha hai: tumhe bhi...

Prem yeh keh kar challa jata hai to Heer ko ajeeb sa laghta hai

Heer think " yeh Prem ka chehra itna uthra huwa kyon hai? "


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In Shimla

Arohi ki friend uss pe rang dhalne laghti hai to woh apne haath age karti hai



Arohi: dekh mere baal kharab ho jayen ge
Her friend: holi hai!!

uski friend uske gaal par gulaal lagha thi hai aur phir Arohi muskurah the huwe uski gal par lagha thi hai, aur phir uski friend usse pichkari deti hai

Her friend: dekh jo bhi wahan se aye ga tujhe uss par paani dalna hai
Arohi: issme kiya mushkil hai


Arohi woh pichkari leti hai aur woh paani phenk thi hai to samne Arjun aa jata hai aur uss par ghirta hai




Arjun: tumhari himat bhi kaise huwi?
Arohi laugh: sir aap bohot ache lagh rahe hain!!




Arohi zor se has rahi hoti hai aur Arjun ghusse se wahan se challa jaata hai

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Salil Purvi ek dosre ko rang lagha rahe hote hain





after sometimes... Purvi chal rahi hoti hai to kuch log usske bade mein batein kar rahe hote hain


Aurat: arre yeh to wohi ladki hai na jiss ki shaadi hote hi thut gayee
dosri aurat: galti to isski hi thi
dosri aurat: aisi ladkyon ko kamini bolte hain, pehle to issne ek amir ladke ko phasaya aur phir uske saath mazze kar ke shaadi thodh di aur phir uss pe hi ghatyaa inzaam lagha ne laghi
Aurat: isse to koi shaadi bhi nahi kare ga!!!

Purvi yeh sunnte hi rone laghti hai aur Salil bhi yeh sab dekh kar ghusse mein aa jata hai aur woh gulaal apne haath mein utha kar Purvi ki mang mein phaar deta hai

Salil: kissi ko kuch kehna hai?... aap ko to laghta tha na ke isski shaadi nahi ho sakhti, lekin aaj aap sab ke samne maine isse shaadi ki.. aap to aap sabke moo bandh ho gaye na


woh sab log Salil aur Purvi ko dekhte hi reh jate hain

Purvi shoked: yeh tum ne kiya kar diya?
Salil: maain tumhare baade mein ek bhi lafz nahi sunn sakhta

they hug...

Arohi yeh sab dekh rahi hoti hai, pehle to usse buda laghta hai lekin jab woh Purvi ke chehre par khushi dekhti hai to woh bhi kush ho jaati hai, Arjun dekhta hai ke Arohi ka dihaan kissi aur taraf hai to woh usse paani mein dakka de deta hai



Arjun: Arohi tum aise bohot achi lagh rahi ho!!

Arohi ghusse se uth thi hai aur apne baalon ka paani uss par ghiraate huwe challi jaati hai

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In Ludhiana

Sab batein kar rahe hote hain, Prem bohot pareshaan se lagh raha hota hai aur Heer usse aise dekhti hai




Heer: kya huwa Prem? tum itne uthre huwe kyon ho?
Prem: main nahi jaanta kyon lekin itna patta hai ke isski wajah tum ho
Heer: main? maine kiya kya?
Prem: aisi kaunsi dhor hai jo mujhe baar baar tumhari ore kench thi hai... tumhe yaad karoun to bhool nahi paata, bhoolna chahoun to jee nahi paa tha.. akhir kismat chahti kiya hai
Heer: main nahi chahti ke meri wajah se tumhara yeh haal kyon hai lekin main tumhe aise uthra huwa nahi dekh sakhti
Prem: kyon nahi dekh sakhti?
Heer: kyon ki main tum se py...
Prem: pyar karti ho?
Heer: naa... hii...

Heer yeh keh kar challi jaati hai

http://img62.imageshack.us/img62/6028/holi8.jpg

Preet sab mein dance kar raha hota hai.... Meher niche se phool utha rahi hoti hai, achanak Preet ko kissi ka dakka laghta hai to woh Meher par ghira tha hai, Meher niche leti huwi hoti hai aur Preet uss par.... Preet jaldi se uth tha hai aur Meher ko bhi utha tha hai... n they start dancing..


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I hope u all like it,
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hit the like button,
~Amira~



Edited by amira_saeed - 19 March 2011 at 1:49am

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  nice  updates  dear................
n  holi  part  was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb..............my  fav  arohi  n  arjun  was nice  in  this  celebration.............n  heer Confused  said  nahi  n  ran  away OMG  poor  prem.............looking  fwd.............

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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 2:41am | IP Logged
very nice updts...bolna parega tht u r an amzngg writer n very fastt..greatt goingg
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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 2:50am | IP Logged
hi
both the ups is good
so sab couple aapne aapne pyaar ke saath haai
geet maan heer prem sab log dinner pe jaate haai
the dinner situation was romantic as well as funny sab aapne aapne pyaar ko samajh ek dusre ko pair maar rahe hote haai lekin sab he aapne pyaar ke jaaha dusre logo ko pair maarte haai
 
and holi scenario was really nice
plz cont soon and pm me


Edited by ronojoy_ria - 19 March 2011 at 2:52am
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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
superbbbbbbb update dear
loved it
the way u managed it just hats off
really rockinggggggg one
both the couples were sweeeeet
n the addition of vm made it more sweeeeet
beautifully presented
 the holi update was fun to read
great job
n with the pics was more fun
mind blowinggggg
 
do continuie soooooooon
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Posted: 19 March 2011 at 3:40am | IP Logged
Superb,holi ka perfect celebration write soon
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awesomeeeeeeee too good very cute and lovely part waitingggggg for next asap.

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