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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. [email protected] (Page 45)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
Thnks a lot for ur lovely compliments...


Part13(Mohabbat ka Ehsaas)


In Heer's house

Maan, Geet, Preet, Maan Heer ke ghar par diner karne ke liye aye hote hain... sab hi bol kar andher jaate hai aur Prem bhi jaane laghta hai lekin uske raste baar baar Heer se takkra jaate hain



Heer think " akhir Prem ko dekhte hi mera dil bechain kyon ho jata hai? mere dil mein itne sawal kabse ho gaye hain? yeh kismat nahi to kiya hai? "

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Arjun aur Arohi dono ghar mein hote hain aur ek meeting ke liye jaa rahe hote hain, aur achanak car rukh jaati hai

Arjun: oh god!! iss car ko kiya hogaya?
Arohi: tumhari car hai to tumhare jaise hi ho gi

Arjun Arohi ko koi jawab nahi deta to Arohi sochti hai " Arjun jawab kyon nahi de raha? waise to mujhe isski batein sunn kar ghussa ata hai lekin aaj jab yeh mujhe kuch nahi bol raha to kyon main kuch sunna chah rahi houn "

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Purvi kitchen mein khanna bana rahi hoti hai to achanak darwase par ring hoti hai to Purvi dekhti hai to Salil hota hai

Purvi: tum?
Salil: woh Arjun ko meri help nahi chahiye thi to main ghar par baithe huwe bor ho raha tha to socha tumse milloun
Purvi: main table par khanna lagha thi houn tum bhi khaa lo
Salil: thik hai

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sab baith kar khaa rahe hote hain, Maan ne niche se Geet ka haath pakkra huwa hota hai, dono nazron se baat kar rahe hote hain

Geet " Maan sab kiya sochen ge"
Maan " soch lene do jisse jo bhi sochna hai "

Geet apna phair Prem ke phair par marti hai yeh sochte huwe keh yeh Maan ka phair hai aur Prem ko laghta hai jaise Heer ne usse phair mara, Prem Heer ko dekh raha hota hai aur Heer usse nazrein chura rahi hoti hai

Heer think " please mujhe mat dekho, main nahi chahti ke main phirse tumhari ankhon mein kho jaoun aur duniya ko bhul jaoun "

Heer iss dar se Prem ki ankhon mein nahi dekhti, Prem wapiss phair marta hai lekin woh jaa kar Meher ko laghta hai aur Meher ko aise laghta hai jaise Preet ne apna phair mara

Meher think " yeh Preet mujhpe line mar raha hai "

Meher ghusse se Preet ko phair marti hai aur Preet kehta hai: any probleme?
Meher: limit mein raho

Preet confus ho jata hai lekin woh zyada dihaan nahi karta aur khaane pe dihaan dene laghta hai

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zor se baarish hone laghti hai aur Arohi car se bahir nikal kar bighne laghti hai aur achanak usska palloo udhne laghta hai, woh sambaalne ki koshish karti hai lekin usse sambaala nahi jaa raha hota, Arjun car se nikaal tha hai....



Arohi: thank you
Arjun: agar tumne beegh liya to challe

Arohi koi jawab nahi deti, dono car mein beth the hain...

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Purvi aur Salil khaa rahe hote hain n they feel sometimg for eachother...

Salil: tum khanna bohot acha bana leti ho
Purvi: thnks

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Sab khaa rahe hote hain, Prem ko yaad ata hai ke woh apna mobile car mein bhul gaya hai

Prem: main apne mobile car mein se le kar ata houn
Teji: Heer betha tu Prem ke saath jaa
Heer: jee maa

Prem aur Heer bahir jaate hai aur baarish hone laghti hai to Heer beeghne laghti hai aur Prem Heer ko aise dekhte huwe car ke saath chipak jaata hai, aur phir Heer ghirne laghti hai lekin Prem usse pakkar leta hai

Prem: andher chalein
Heer side ho kar aur muskurah the huwe kehti hai: chalo

dono andher jate hain...

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~Amira~


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awesomeeeeeeee too good very cute and lovely part waitingggggg for next asap.

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hey dear
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm
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Wow, awesome part !
 
Keep it up !
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thanks amira for a amazing and lovely update Clap
premeer scenes were cuteHeart and arjuhi scenes were also
 interestingSmile
waitinf for the next part update sooon asapDay Dreaming
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Originally posted by sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeee too good very cute and lovely part waitingggggg for next asap.


Thnks Wink
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Originally posted by RUBA-SIDDIQUI

hey dear
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm



Heyy
Thnks a lot
suree n ur most welcome

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Originally posted by -Hina-

Wow, awesome part !
 
Keep it up !


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