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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 38)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 12:31am | IP Logged
awsum part!!

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
awesome  update  dear..............
arohi  n  arjun  scenes  r  really  nice............tom  n jerry  pair............
heer  n  prem  started spent  time  with  each  other...........hmm..........nice ...........
looking  fwd...........

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Thnks a lot for ur lovely compliments, for ur support n for ur love Smile


Part10 (Meelon ka hai fasla)

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Prem, Meher aur Heer ko ghar par chod deta hai, Meher aur Heer ghar ke andher jaati hain to Teji unse puchti hai

Teji: woh ladka kaun tha Jo tum dono ko chor ne aya tha?
Meher: yeh wohi ladka hai jissne Di ko bachchaya tha uss raat
Heer: maa usne mujhe sirf ek baar nahi geyee baar bachchaya hain aur woh Maan ka dost hai
Teji: main soch rahi thi ke Maan aur Geet ko kal dinner par invite karle, aur saath mein uss ladke ko bhi
Heer smiles: thik hai maa
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In Shilma (Next day At Arjun's office)

Arjun apne cabin mein hota hai, Arohi Ati hai

Arjun: aajse tumhe junk ladni hogi aur yeh yaad rakhna ke main tumhe itna torture karoun ga ke tum yahan se daffa ho jao gi

Arohi: main yeh junk ladoun gi aur aap bhi ek baat yaad karlo ke main aapki damkyon se darne nahi wali

Arjun: yeh to waqat hi bataye ga ke kaun baghe ga.. now go n iss list mein jo bhi files ke naam likhe hain woh le kar ao

Arohi store room mein jati hai aur files dhund rahi hoti hai, Arjun bahir se darwasa lock kar deta hai, Arohi files dhund rahi hoti hai achanak light chali jaati hai, Arohi bahir jane laghti hai lekin darwasa lock hota hai woh bohot dar jaati hai

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In Ludhiana

Prem soo raha hota hai, uske moo par paani ghirta hai woh apni ankhein kholta hai aur samne Preet hota hai

Prem: Preet!! tu yahan?
Preet: bhabhi se millne aya houn

Prem uth kar baith jata hai aur kehta hai

Prem: kaunsi bhabhi? tu pagal to nahi hogaya?
Preet: wohi jo bohot pyari hai
Prem: i don't love her, she is only my friend!!
Preet: maine kab kaha aap usse pyar karte hain?
Prem: shut up!!

Preet think " bhai main aapko bachpan se jaanta houn aur aapki ankhon mein us ladki ke liye jo feelings hai, tum dono ko ek karna aab mera kaam hai "

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In Shimla (Arjun's cabin)

Arjun: oh my god!! main bhool kaise gaya ke Arohi store room mein lock hai aur aab to light bhi challi gayee hai

Arjun store room ke paas jata hai, woh darwasa khol raha hota hai

Arohi (bohot dari huwi hoti hai): koi to darwasa kholo!! please help me!! mujhe andhere se bohot dar laghta hai!!
Arjun: don't worry!!

Arjun se darwasa nahi khul raha hota, he think " yeh darwasa to phaas gaya hai "

Arohi: sir mujhe andhere se bohot dar laghta hai!!

Arjun feels bad because it's his mistake, Arjun bahir jata hai aur phir ghidki se store room mein jata hai

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In Ludhiana (Heer's room)

Heer apne sari cupboard mein rakh rahi hoti hai aur usse Prem ke saath ghussare huwe pal yaad ane laghte

Heer: Prem kitna acha hai na? jab bhi main usske bade mein sochti houn to dil ko acha laghta hai

ek dum se Meher ati hai aur kehti hai: kiya huwa di?
Heer: woh.. Prem ke bade mein soch rahi houn
Meher: aapko unse pyar to nahi hogaya?
Heer: meher tu bhi na kiya ajeeb si batein karti hai

Heer Meher se nazrein chura the huwee jaa kar bed par beth jati hai

Meher: maine to sirf apke dil ki baat aapko kahi

Heer feels shy

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Arjun aur Arohi ek dosre ko dekh rahe hote hain, Arohi dar ke mare ro rahi hoti hai ... Prem and Heer are thinking about eachother, aur woh muskurah rahe hote hain...



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I hope u all like it,
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~Amira~




Edited by amira_saeed - 13 March 2011 at 4:37am

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awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.
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wow...awesome part...so preet has cum nw and prem heer fallin for each other....and arohi scared of darknes..hmmm hoping for some very cute scene next update..update soonSmileSmile
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so sweet. thanks for pm. so lovely and romantic, just reminds you fo kmh1 and kdmhmd, nice to see preets entry. cant wait for next update.
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hi
the up is superb
so heer and meher ko chorne prem uske ghar jaata haai
prem ko dekh ke teji ko aacha laagta hai
on the otherside
arohi ko arjun pareshan karna suru kar diya haai usne becchare arohi ko store room mein bandh kar diya
sach mein arohi gto so scared
but its nice that arjun ko atleast aapne harkat ke liye bura toh laaga aur usne arohi ke madad karne ke liye store mein gaya
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 5:26am | IP Logged
amazinggggggggggggg
superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
rockingggggggggggggg update dear
loved it to the core
 
both the couples were rockingggg
awwwwwwwww
preet finally know everything
hope he will positive role
n prem n heer together soooooooon
 
do continue sooooon

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