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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 23)

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Posted: 14 February 2011 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
awesome job!! Clap
loved part 3 and the promo! Smile
cant wait to see what happens next!! LOL
thanks for the pm and please update soon!! Smile
~Alisha~

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Thanks for ur lovely compliments Big smile

Part4 (Mulaaqatein)

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after sometimes...

In geet's room, Meher aur Heer wahin pe hoti hain

Heer: acha Geet, isse pehle bohot dher ho jaye hum ghar chalte hain
Geet: driver tum dono ko ghar par chor de ga
Meher: thik hai Geet
Heer: chal

Heer aur Meher challi jati hai

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Next Day

In Shimla, Arjun dukhanon ke paas hota hai aur apni mom se phone par baat kar raha hota hai

Savita: dekh tu jitna bhi buzzy kyon na ho ek baar Harri bhai ke ghar se ho aana
Arjun: thik hai mom
Savita: aur unke ghar jate waqat ek phoolon ka bouquet bhi le jana
Arjun: woh bhi thik hai lekin unke ghar ka adress to de di jiye na

Savita ghar ka adress deti hai....

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Arohi's house, darwase par bell hoti hai, Arohi jaa kar darwasa kholti hai samne Arjun hota hai aur uske haathon mein phoolon ka bouquet hota hai


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Dono ek dosre mein khoo jate hain

Arohi: jee?
Arjun: woh... (he gives the bouquet) Harri uncle se millna hai
Arohi: thanks.... lekin baba ghar par nahi hai
Arjun: oh to phir main kissi aur din aa kar unse mill loun ga
Arohi: thik hai

Arjun jaa raha hota hai aur Arohi unn phoolon ko muskuraate huwe dekh kar sung thi hai

Arohi: kitni achi khushboo hai

Arjun chall raha hota hai aur usse alag sa feel hota hai lekin woh zyada dihaan nahi karta aur challa jata hai

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In Ludhiana, Heer's house

Heer kitchen mein hoti hai apni mom Teji ke saath

Teji (Heer's mom): Heer betha, meine tere liye payal ghiradi hai
Heer: Payal... to mujhe bohot pasand hain

Heer Payal pehaan thi hai

Heer: Maa aaj main isse pehaan kar rakhoun gi

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In Ludhiana, It's night (10:00)

bohot zor se barish ho rahi hai aur bohot tez hawa hai, koi bhi patta ek jagah par nahi rukh raha...

in Heer's house, Heer ghirki ke paas baithi hai aur baarish dekh rahi hai

Heer: hawa ki in ghustakhion mein hai ehsaas uss ka
patiyoon ki in saansrahat main bhi hai awaaz uski
kahin paas hi hai woh mere magar dikhta nahi
par dil ki dadkhan sun leti hai dasdak uski

at Wishing-pond (behind of Heer's house)

Prem wahin pe hota hai aur woh ek coin nikaal kar wish mang tha hai

Prem: meri itni hi wish hai ke woh mujhe mill jaye

Prem woh coin phenk tha hai lekin hawa bohot zor se chal thi hai ke woh coin jaa kar Heer ki ghirki par aa kar ghirta hai

Heer woh coin utha thi hai aur soch thi hai "laghta hai koi wish mangne aya tha aur yeh coin hawa ki wajah se yahan aa gaya, mujhe yeh coin usse dena hoga jiss ka yeh hai"

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In Shimla, Arjun's office

Arohi job ke liye Arjun ke office jaati hai, she enters in cabin, dono ek dosre ko dekhte hain

Arjun & Arohi: tum??....
Arjun: yeh mera office hai
Arohi: oh! main yahan pe job ke liye ayee houn
Arjun: oh! please seat...

Arjun Arohi ki files dekhta hai aur  jagdesh ko call karta hai aur phir Jagdesh ata hai

Jagdesh: yes sir?
Arjun with attitude: issne aaj hi office join kiya hai... jao aur jaa kar ise sara office dikha do

Arohi in her mind: main isse kiya samajh rahi thi aur yeh kiya hai? (Arjun ko ghusse se dekhne laghti hai)
Arjun in his mind: yeh mujhe aise ghoor ghoor kar kiya dekh rahi hai? (Arjun bhi usse ghoor kar dekhne laghta hai)

Arohi jhooti smile karti hai aur Arjun bhi phir Arohi challi jati hai

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In Ludhiana, Heer woh coin dene jaati hai aur Prem wahan se jaa raha hota hai

Heer: excuse me!! aapka coin

Prem mudh kar dekhta hai, Heer budi tarah se beeghi hoti hai aur woh tandh se kaamb rahi hoti hai lekin woh phir bhi muskuraa rahi hoti hai

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Heer ko chakkar ate hain aur woh behosh ho jati hai aur Prem ko usse uthaa na pharta hai

Prem: mujhe to yeh bhi nahi patta ke yeh kahan rehti hai... lekin main isse iss halat mein yahan to nahi chor kar jaa sakhta na... main isse ghar par le chalta houn

Prem jiss ghar mein tehra huwa hota woh Heer ko wahin le jata hai

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In Shimla, Arjun's office

Arohi kuch files dekh rahi hoti hai tab hi usse ek dhun ki awaaz ati hai woh sunte sunte uske piche jaati hai

at terrace, Arjun flute baja raha hota hai aur Arohi usski dhun mein khoo jati hai lekin phir Arjun ko ehsaas hota hai ke wahan pe koi hai, woh rukh jata hai

Arjun: tum yahan pe kiya kar rahi ho
Arohi: woh... main ghar jaoo
Arjun(smiles): jao na kissne rokha hai?

Arohi
challi jati hai
 
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In Ludhiana, Prem's house

Heer Bed par leti hoti hai aur Prem doctor ko le kar ata hai, Doctor Heer ko chek karta hai

Doctor: tandh laghne ki wajah se todha sa bukhaar ho gaya hai...... (Doctor sab kuch samjha deta hai)
Prem: thanks chaliye main aapko bahir tak chor deta houn

Prem chor kar ata hai aur Heer ke paas beth jata hai, Heer so rahi hoti hai, Prem uss me kho jata hai...


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achanak se Heer ke baal uske moo par aa jate hain phir Prem woh haata raha hota hai tabhi Heer uth thi hai aur Prem apna haath piche kar leta hai

Heer: main yahan? mere sar mein bohot dard hai!!!
Prem: don't worry! tum subhe tak yahan par rukh sakhti ho
Heer: thank you very much

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~Amira~


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hey  it  was  superbbbbbbbbbbbbb   update dear............
arjun  n  arohi is gonna work  in  same company.....................it's  interesting................n
prem &  heer  meeting  also sooooo  nice..............
looking  fwd..............

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
hi
the up is good
so finally all the jodis met each other
arjun is the boss of arohi that good
and here heer met with her love prem
prem is nice he took care of heer
plz cont soon and pm me

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
finallyyyyyyyyyy they meeeeeeeet
ok
awesomeeeeeeeee
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
both the couples r sweeeeeeet
nice scenes
 
arjun arohi will work together
fun reading it
do continue sooooon

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hey dear
awesome part
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm 

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