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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey amira πŸ€— loved the update it was superb both of them were soo cute and Aww... i will surely pray 4 u and 4 ur family😳 hope everything gets well soon😊  continue soon

luv
      --madiha--

Edited by -mysterygirl- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wha...............wha................very  nice  update  friend................
it  was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb   scene b/w  all  the 3  couples...........
i  loved  it............looking  fwd...........

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey amira awesome update...very nicely written...and wil surely pray for u and ur family...
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for being late
amazinggggg update dear
really loved it to the core
u have done a great job
 
loved both the couples
do continue sooooooooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey amira!! πŸ˜Š
sorry for replying late! πŸ˜•
I just read part 5 & 6! πŸ˜†
wonderful job! πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ i love how you're balancing both couples!
its really amazing!! πŸ˜Š
thanks for the pm and please update soon! πŸ˜Š
~Alisha~
Edited by alishaL786 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnks a lot for ur love and support πŸ˜ƒ

Part7 (Mohabbat ki ore)


In Shimla

Arjun wahan se chala jata hai

Arohi: yeh mujhe kiya ho raha hai? main iss me kyon iss kadar kho gayee?.... Monster!!!


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In Ludhiana

Heer sharmaa the huwe wahan se chali jaati hai

Prem: yeh aise kyon sharmaa rahi thi?... main bhi kiya sochne lagha, woh to har ladki hi sharmaa thi hai

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In Shimla (Library)

Arohi ke saath mein ek mobile para huwa hota hai, Arohi khud ko rokh nahi paati aur woh utha kar dekhne laghti hai, ussme ek ladki ki kaafi sari photos hoti hai

Arohi: iss ladki ki itni sari photos? akhir yeh mobile hai kiss ka?

achanak Sid ata hai aur Arohi ke haath mein se mobile kench leta hai

Sid: yeh mera mobile hai
Arohi smiles: iss ladki se tum pyar karte ho?
Sid ka chehra uthra huwa hota hai: haan
Arohi: iss ladki ki baat karte hi tum itne udaas kyon hogaye?
Sid: kyon ki... (smiles) tum bhi na.. choro yeh sab

Arohi smiles..... in her mind " shayd yeh apni personnal life share nahi karna chahta issi liye issne topic change kar diya "

Sid chutki bajha tha hai: oye sweetie! kahan kho gayee?
Arohi: kuch neyi =D

Arohi yeh keh kar challi jati hai

Sid: sorry Arohi, maine tumhe apna friend kaha aur tumse jhoot bol raha houn

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In Ludhiana

Heer apne ghar jaa rahi hoti hai tab hi uske mobile par Meher ka phone ata hai

Meher: di!!
Heer: kiya huwa Meher tu itni dari huwi kyon hai?
Meher: Tamanna ne suicide karne ki koshish ki hai
Heer (shocked): kiya?....
Meher: di please aap jaldi se hospital aa jayein

Heer yeh baat sunne ke baad bohot hi upset ho jati hai aur woh baghte huwe jaa hi rahi hoti hai tab hi ek car zor se aa rahi hoti hai.... Prem aa kar usse kench tha hai

Prem ghusse se kehta: are you mad? kabhi to khud bhi apna khayal rakh liya karo... har baar main nahi ane wala tumhe bachchane ke liye
Heer: I'm sorry
Prem: mujhe kyon sorry bol rahi ho?

Prem yeh kehte huwe todha sa age hota hai



Heer (cry): mera dihaan kissi aur taraf tha issi liye...
Prem: sorry to mujhe kehna chahiye maine tumse bohot rude tarike se baat ki
Heer: agli baar aise galti nahi hogi

Prem usske paas ata hai aur usske kaan mein kehta hai

Prem: main tumhe kuch nahi hone doun ga

Prem yeh keh kar challa jata hai aur phir Heer hospital jati hai

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In Shimla

Arjun apne cabin mein baitha hota hai tab hi Arohi uss ke liye coffee le kar ati hai




Arohi: sir main aapke le coffee le kar ayee houn
Arjun: lekin maine to tumse nahi kaha
Arohi: main chahti houn ke hum woh purani batein bhul kar ache se friends ki tarah rahe, aise hum kaam bhi ache se kar payein ge

Arjun coffee leta hai to Arohi ko bohot acha laghta hai aur Arjun pee tha hai

Arjun: burkk!!!!
Arohi: kiya huwa sir?
Arjun: yeh coffee bohot garwi hai tumhari iss dosti ki tarah
Arohi: tumse to dosti kiya baat karna bhi bekaar hai, main sab kuch bhula kar tumhare liye yeh coffee le kar ayee aur tumne phirse mera dil dukha diya

Arohi ghusse se chali jaati hai, Arjun coffee utha kar peene laghta hai

Arjun smiles: Arohi ko tang kar ke bohot mazza ata hai

Arohi ko yaad ata hai ke woh apni file wahin bhool gayee to woh wapiss jati hai lekin Arjun ko nahi patta hota ke Arohi darwase par garhi hai

Arjun smiles: waise coffee itni bhi budi nahi hai...

Arohi think " Arjun sir itne bhi bude nahi hai " aur woh muskurati hai

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In Ludhiana (Hospital)

Heer: tamanna, tum ne aisa kyon kiya?
Tamanna: I can't live without him
Heer: aaj itne dinon baad tum phirse kyon uske bade mein sochne laghi?
Tamanna: issi tarikh pe hum dono pehli baar mille the
Heer: tum agar usse itna hi pyar karti ho to wapiss chali jao usske paas
Tamanna: main nahi uss ke paas ja sakhti
Heer: to phir usse bhul jao
Tamanna: thik hai

Heer Tamanna ko hug kar leti hai


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I hope u all like it,
leave ur compliments,
and hit the like button,
~Amira~


Edited by amira_saeed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update amira.........
prem heer n arjun arohi scenes were awesome.......
thnx for d pm..............waitin for nxt part..........
Best of Luck for ur exam................πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update, loved all parts. update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update amira πŸ˜ƒ
thank you soo much
loved all the scenes of premeer and arjuhi❀️
please update next part soon
Edited by harshitideewani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazingggggg upadete dear
really loved it
awesomeeeeeeeee
superbbbbbbbbbb
both the couples were rockingggg
do continue sooooon