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FF: || D E S T I N Y || ArjuHi&PremEer. Pt27@Pg84 (Page 10)

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 6:14am | IP Logged
hi amira

lovely vm and a fabulous ff.. yaaaaaay u got premeer here and im soooooooooooooooooooo happy!!!!!!!!!! loved it....... pls continue and pm me as usual

luv ya

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Posted: 30 January 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 31 January 2011 at 8:29am | IP Logged
nice start

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
hey dear
amazing promo
liked it
plz continue soon
thnx 4 the pm

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 8:42am | IP Logged
thnks for ur lovely compliments

Part2 (Alag Sochein)



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Next Day

In Mumbai, Arjun's house

Savita (Arjun's mom): maine tum dono ke liye parathe banaye hain
Salil (Arjun's friend): Parathe
Savita to Nokar: jao jaa kar kuch aur parathe le ao
Nokar: Savita maam aaj meri bethi ke school mein ek chotta sa function hai aur woh bohot zid kar rahi thi ke main...

Arjun apni pocket se paise nikaal kar uss Nokar ke samne phenk tha hai

Arjun: meri mom ne jo kaha hai woh karo
Savita: Arjun koi baat nahi,
Salil: agar teri yehi adatein rahi na to koi bhi ladki tujhse pyar nahi kare gi
Arjun(smile): mere paas itne paise hai ke koi bhi ladki mujhe mill jaye gi
Savita: sab kuch paise se nahi hota

Dk (Arjun's dad) ate hain aur table par ek file phenk the hain

Arjun: dad yeh kiya hai?
Dk: tera agla contract
Arjun(smile): thanks dad! aapke siwaye aur koi mujhe samajh hi nahi sakhta

Arjun yeh kehte huwe DK ko hug karta hai

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In Shimla, Arohi's house

HP (Arohi's dad) woh ek chair par bethe hote hai, Arohi unke paas aa kar unke kadmon mein beth jati hai

Arohi: jee baba
HP: Arohi pootar meri dilli tamna hai ki main tujhe dulhan ke jode mein dekhoun
Arohi: aap fikaar mat karo jab main dulhan ke jode mein houn gi na to main sabse pyari laghoun gi
HP: Purvi ki kismat mein phir se to shaadi na...
Arohi: ...Purvi di ki shaadi hogi aur unke liye sabse acha ladka banna hai, ek ladka buda tha iska matlab yeh nahi ke dosra bhi buda hoga aur yehi hai unki kismat aur Purvi di zyada dher tak iss sachayee se bagh nahi sakhti

HP, Arohi ke sar pe haath phair the huwe usse ek shopper dete hain

HP: tu sabki kitni fikaar karti hai, apne se pehle dosre ke bade mein sochti hai

Arohi uss shopper ko khol kar dekhti hai aur uss me se ek laal dupatta nikaal thi hai

Arohi: baba yeh to maa ka dupatta hai na
HP: teri maa marne se pehle tere liye yeh chor kar gayee thi
Arohi (smiles): main abhi pehaan kar apko dikhati houn

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In Canada

Gayatri(prem's mom) kitchen mein palak kat rahi hoti hain, tab hi Prem ata

Prem: bohot hi achi khushboo aa rahi hai
Gayatri: tujhe palak bohot pasand hai na wohi bana rahi houn
Prem: aap apne haath se agar bana kar khilayein gi to aur bhi pasand aye gi
Gayatri (smiles): koi achi si ladki le ao jo tumhe apne haath se bana kar khilaye

Prem apni maa ko piche se hug karte huwe kehta hai

Prem: mere liye ladki bhi apko hi pasand karni hogi kyon ki aap to jaan thi hi hai mere paas itna time nahi hota

Prem jaa kar chair par baith tha hai aur Gayatri usse palak khilaane laghti hai tab hi Preet ata hai aur Prem ke paas baith tha hai

Preet: Prem bhai ko hi khilaati rahe gi ya mujhe bhi khilaye gi
Prem: arre mere bhai tu bhi khaa

Gayatri dono ko khilati hain

Preet: bhai aap bhabhi ko le ao na aur maa ko mujhe de do
Prem(smiles): jab dil ko koi achi laghe gi to le aoo ga

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In Ludhiana

Heer apni friend Geet ke saath road pe chall rahi hoti hai

Geet: meri shaadi hone mein aab todha hi time reh gaya hai aur azaadi ke bhi
Heer(smiles): lekin shaadi bhi to tu ussi se kar rahi hai na jisse tu pyaar karti hai
Geet: tab hi to main khush houn waise tu batta tera shaadi karne ka kab irada hai
Heer: jab mujhe woh prem mill jaye ga jiss ka maine bachpan se sapna dekha hai tab hi karoun gi shaadi

Heer ki takkar ek aurat se laghti hai

Heer: i'm sorry! aapko laghi to nahi?
Aurat: main thik houn

Geet Heer ko side pe le kar jaati hai

Geet: Heer yeh wohi aurat hai, jiss ka naam Jugni hai aur agar iss ke dil se koi baat nikal jaye to woh dua ya badua ban jati hai

Heer jaa kar Jugni ke phair chuti hai aur woh Heer ko ashirwaad deti hain

Jugni: hone wala hai tera millan uske saath aur phir jaghe gi teri kismat

Jugni yeh keh kar challi jati hai aur woh batein Heer ke khaanon mein gunjh thi reh jati hai

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In Mumbai,

office, Arjun chair par bethe huwe files dekh raha hota hai



Arjun: aab iss contract ke liye mujhe bohot mehnat karni pare gi

Arjun phoone karta hai

Arjun: mujhe kal Shimla jane ki ticket chahiye

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In Shimla, Arohi's house

Arohi mirror ke samne hoti hai aur woh dupatta pehaan kar check kar rahi hoti hai



Arohi: aab sirf mujhe uss ka inezaar hai (Shy)

Purvi ati hai aur kehti hai: Arohi meine baba ki paking kar di hai
Arohi: di main kal baba ko railway station chorne jaoun gi
Purvi: thik hai

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

In Canada, Prem's house

Prem: pehle to maine kabhi aisa feel nahi kiya, laghta hai jaise kissi ne mujhe apne dua mein pyar se shamil kar liya hai



Prem ka mobile bajhta hai woh utha tha hai

Maan(Prem's friend): tujhe yaad to hai na ke kal tu ne Ludhiana ana hai
Prem: haan yaad hai

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In Ludhiana, Heer's house

Heer uss Jugni ki batein soch rahi hoti hai



Heer: aise laghta hai jaise mera koi adhoora sapna pura hone wala hai

Meher ati hai usske haath mein kabre hote hai

Meher: di yeh kabre kaise rahe ge geet di ki mehndi mein jane ke liye?
Heer: ache hain

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I hope you all like it,
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~Amira~



Edited by amira_saeed - 07 February 2011 at 9:03am

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Posted: 01 February 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
amira awesome and lovely update and please add me in pm list
hope to see soon meeting of premeer and arjuhi
please update soonn

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged
awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap

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Posted: 02 February 2011 at 5:19am | IP Logged

 Ok now they met soon i am eagerly wanted to know .........how they met and whats happened   when they metEmbarrassed

  Tahnks for the Pm and update soon
  
   Luv : Uswah


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