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MG FF: Limitless - Thread 1- (Page 99)

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashndsel4eva

Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx


Thanks dear!!Big smile Glad you enjoyed!!

Originally posted by MaaneetLuverr

Awesome update
Awww as soon as mel came 2 geets arms she became normal
So there was someone out there that wanted 2 break manes relationship & succeeded
Loved how belle was makin iman jealous by talking about hot guys on tv
Hope maan finds out hu this devious person is
Wonder hu geets going 2 call
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM


Thanks yaar!! Well the call will play an important part of the story Big smileBig smile

Originally posted by puth

lovely update sanjana...
i guess sameera is behind the text messages and photos...


Thanks so much dear...Good guess...Wink

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Limerance

Geet is so shattered, I'm glad that at least Mel can comfort her. But I hope soon Maan will also be able to. After his conversation with Meera I think that it was definitely Sameera who was behind all the messages and texts. I'm still curious as to who Geet will call though. Can't wait for the next update!


Yeah Mel is Geet's anchor...Maan still needs to make amends...Thanks for commenting dearBig smile

Originally posted by Radhika Shah

great part!!
thanks for the PM...


Thanks Radhika!!

Originally posted by simi91

i guess its sam & she succeeded
with it
love how mel came to
geet & she became normal
flashback amazing
love it core
cant wait maan to find
who was behind the break up
of their beautiful relationship
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
thnak yu dear
muah
were waiting paid of


Thanks Simi!! Good guess...Glad that you feel the wait was worth it LOL
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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 9:10am | IP Logged
awesome part...loved it to the core.

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninand

loved the update.. you juggle the past with the present deftly.. and. absolutely no idea about those questions hunLOL.. I mean, in Maans case we do not even know who all are there in the familyD'oh...

eagerly awaiting the next part.. thanks for the pmEmbarrassed




Aww thanks yaarEmbarrassed LOL glad that I have you confused! Will try to update sooner!

Originally posted by zahra15

amazing part...
continue soon...
n thnx for the pm...


Thanks Zahra! Pleased that you enjoyed.Big smile

Originally posted by shelly_08

Gr888 update sanju...MMMUUUAAAHHH...*shelly gives u a flying kiss*...


Why blame geet yaar even I'm simply MAD about christian baleEmbarrassedDay Dreaming

Thanks 4 taking names of all those HOOTIES (except Johnny Depp)

Pity...I shud b talkin abt the update and here I'm goin gaga over  CBLOL

I dunno y I have a sinking feeling that sameera herself is behind all this...or may be dev or NTConfused...Ok I know I'm exaggerating a bit too much but then one may never know what surprises u have in store 4 us!!!

Cont soon this time

Love

Shreya

HAHAHAHAHA!! Great minds!!
Shreya I have to warn you that I am very possessive about Christian Bale...how gorgeous is he in the suits? OH DEAR! I love him to bits...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Good guess!



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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
that was a great update
i feel sooo sad seeing geet in that state
thank god mel came
she is like geets medicine
cant wait till the next part hun
me hoping that maaneet can be happy together soon
cont soon please
thanks for the pm!

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Posted: 04 May 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet

loved it
too good
waiting for next part


Thanks dear!!! Glad you liked it!Embarrassed

Originally posted by sonali_N

m sure dt person is so dead .aftr all he ws messing mid MSK
cont sooon
I LOVED IT 
thnx for D PM Smile


Thanks Sonali!! Well Maan will definitely "take care" of anyone who messes with him and Geet. LOL

Originally posted by Morning Star

special call hmmm lets wish maan?? and the girl must be

a-  Sasha
b-  Anni
c- Sameera
:D - not NT


so since i have given the choices how about u givng the right ans loool


lovely update 


Thanks yaar!
HAHAHHAHAA! LOL how about I choose option ...*suspense*...NONE!!!
Sorry I am too cruel...don't worry with the next few updates I think you will understand who did it.
 
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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drashsree100



Ok , 1stly take a bow girl Clap  Clap  Clap  Clap I really wish I could say which part touched by heart the most , but the truth is the entire update touched my heart & soul Clap . I literally flinched with the kind of situation Geet is in @ present ; gosh , so much pain Cry Another , thing wanna mention is that , you really write beautifully ... particularly this update was Brilliant Clap
The words , the emotions , the situations ... all these had a smooth flow even though u r dealing with past n present tracks simultaneously Star
Indeed , what Geet went through during & post that accident is nothing less than a nightmare Cry Wait , u know what , I thought I would just write my comments but I feel I really should tell you why this update moved me 

"Maan felt helpless as he clasped Geet's shoulders and shook her. Her eyes were dry without a single tear glistening but they were glazed and her pupils dilated to the extent that her hazel eyes looked pitch black. She was staring at something that wasn't in front of her and it was as if he wasn't in the room. She just kept on mumbling to herself for their child and continued to rock her body.  "



A part of Maan felt that it would be better if she was crying because that would be understandable than the cold and unreachable Geet in front of him. He didn't want her to emotionally bury herself somewhere he wouldn't be able to reach and bring her back from.

 

"Geet! Please Geet talk to me! GEET!" Maan screamed in agony. Self-disgust and anger raged inside, threatening to destroy the think thread of control he had over himself. It was unbearable to see Geet in this situation and to know that he was the one responsible. He pulled her into an embrace, wishing that he could take all her pain inside himself. He would rather burn to cinders than seeing her face even the minutest of pain.

While Geet hadn't responded or shown any awareness of Meera's comments, the moment Mel was in her arms her whole demeanor changed. While Meera and Maan had failed to retrieve Geet from inner battle, all it took was Mel's entreaty to her mother for Geet to awaken. Her face lost its numb and blank look, instead it was filled with maternal concern and love.

 

"Nothing baby. Nothing." She smoothed down her angel's hair and got into bed with her. She didn't even notice the other two people in the room. All that mattered to her at that moment was her precious child. She pulled the blanket around them and then snuggle close to her darling and closed her eyes. There was such contentment in both of their faces that Maan felt like an intruder.   Clap   Clap  Clap  Beautiful ...


Loved the convo between Geet & Nonna 

Belle & Iman moments were as always Heart lovely Embarrassed


Now ur Qs ... let me try  Ermm 1 . Confused sorry @ the moment am cube , would answer once I read the update once more to get a clue Tongue

                                              2.Sameera Ermm  anyways , I know I would turn a Clown anyway , so cheers to that LOL


Ok , jokes apart , really , really superb update , loved it & thanks for pm ...






Thank you so much!!! MWAH!
I am going to get such a big head after your comment..hehehhee...Interesting guesses BTW...


Originally posted by undisclosed

fantastic piece of work sanjana!...you are weaving this story from passed to present flawlessly...you're keeping me guessing as i have no idea regarding questions 1 & 2...wow!...geet going into that state at the mention of her baby was heartbraking...but the way she reacted to mel...oh that was such a tender moment...i loved that maan wanted to join them in the cuddle...i am ver happy that maan knows why geet is bent on staying away from him...and that meera is sort of becoming an ally...thanks for the updateHug



Thank you dear!!! Thanks for the lovely comment Embarrassed GLad that I am maintaining the suspense Wink Meera will try her best to help...but there will be other people who have vested interest in Maaneet...lol sorry for the cryptic comment!

Originally posted by Klutszy_KaShian

I have a feeling it is eitherSameera or a new entry!!


Interesting guess...LOL...thanks for commenting yaar!

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Posted: 05 May 2011 at 2:52am | IP Logged
awesome update...

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