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UNNAMED RELATIONSHIP( mjht ff) |updated| (Page 8)

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 6:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanugr8fan

Originally posted by arjunkidiwani

cn u clear something dear? U r sanika right <font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">ya my name is sanika</font>...so what fanda of koyal? <font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">koyal is my friend</font>I mean u r writing this ff or she <font size="3"><font color="#cc0000" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">actually she is </font><font color="#cc0000" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">writing d ff</font></font><font color="#cc0000" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">but she cant post it here so i m posting it here on her behalf n also pm'ing evry1...c d first part of dis ff..</font>or its or combine post i m nt able 2 understand <font color="#cc3300" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">kind off combined post</font>!!Smile.
ok nw i got it. N combine post means ki i thought ki kuch parts tumne n kuch koyal ne likhe hai..thats y i ws asking

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Posted: 15 February 2011 at 6:29am | IP Logged
hey guyz....dsi tym i m not updating a new part...
actually i  hav posted dis comment for 2 reasons...
 
 1) to clear d confusion about dis ff's writer
~~ guyzz dis FF is written by my good frend koyal....n is posted by me ...as soon as she updated me wit her new part!!~~
 
 2) wanted to share wit u all dat i jus completed my l8est vm on mayur...
so its a request to u all 2 plzzz watch it....
i hav tried to gyv my 1000%
plzz click on dis link...
der u will find d link of my vm..!!
 
thnx ^_^

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nice vm..g8 job, keep it up
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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
oh.. finally Sheena is behind all this thing.. hope Mayank comes to know early of all her plan..
 
nice update
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
wao...when r u updating next part? Plz update soon
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arjunkidiwani

wao...when r u updating next part? Plz update soon
yup yup......wait 4 it!! d story is gonna take a twist!!WinkTongueBig smile
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Posted: 20 February 2011 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Part 7
City hospital (afternoon )
Nupur is going towards a room quietly, hiding her all tears n pain''..she opens a door n says''
N:GUNJAN''..
G:di''.(sitting on a wheel chair)
N:(runs towards her n holds her as tightly as she cn)
Kase hai?(says with concern)
G:ek dam fit n f9''..dekho''.(with a small sweet smile )
N:nupur too gives a fake smile''.
G:pr tumhe kya hoa hai di'..?kitne weak lag rhi ho, yaha se tho ek dam hatte-katte gye thi''teen din mae kitne kamjoor ho gye ho tum'''.
N:nhi'.nhi tho(says with hasitation'')wo actuly itne lamba safar upar se itna sara kaam tho shayad usse ki vajah se lag rhi hoe''..
G:tho itna kaam mat kiya karu di''..
N:accha mare ma''.nhi karuge'..bus'.(closing d topic)
G:that's lik my gud di''(n both laugh''.nupur trying to show her normal)

They were talking to each other when nurse comes n ask to take gunjan with her 4 some tests n gungan makes a face bt nupur makes sure that she go for these tests''
Now nupur is alone in d room.when ever she comes in this hospital she always go into past bcoz in this hospital only she hd done a deal''.a deal of her lif''.a deal of her self respect'..a deal which changed her lif 4 ever

Flashback''..

Gunjan ws coming from colledge suddenly a car in speed come n hits her hard.
When nupur gets to know this she rush 2 d hospital'..
N:dr'dr'''.mare bahan ko kya hoa hai?
Dr:dekhia unka bohat bura accident hoa hai or abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai''..
N:kya''.(totally blank)UnhappyUnhappy

After few hours dr come n tells nupur that gunjan is badly injured''they need 2 do operation with in two hours bt 4 that she need to arrange 5 lakh rupees which ws a very big amt 4 nupur as she even didn't hv a house of her home, her parents died long back''.it ws jst gunjan who ws her family. Strill she tried her bst 2 arrange 4 money bt no use.
Sheena came 2 hospital 4 her regular check ups as it ws jst some time ago she hd abortion''.she watched out a girl crying badly,she inquired abt d girl n got u know abt whole situation.she inquired abt nupur nt bcoz of sympathy bt bcoz of her plan. According 2 her plan she need a girl who is young,beautiful n smart as well as innocent so that she only follows d orders without any questions''..n nupur is showing all these features very well
Sh:hellooo''..nupur'..
N: ji''..sory mane apko panchna nhi''
Sh:I know''.kase panchanuge akhir hum kabhi mile hi nhi hai''..
N:dekhia main is samah bohat pareshan hoe tho''..
Sh:I know that nupur. Iselea tho main aye hoe tumhare help karne'''..
N:(confuse)
Sh:tumhe 5 lakh rupees chahea na apne sis k operation k lea''..main de sakte hoe''.ConfusedConfused
N:kya'''..bt kyun?
Sh:kyuki I want that ki tum mera ek kaam karu''..
N:(without thinking once) ha main apka koi bhi kaam karuge''.
Sh:ek baar sun tho lo''..baad mae palat nhi jana''
(And sheena takes nupur in a empty room in hospital)
N:aap mujhe yhan kyun lae hai?(so many questions into nupurs mind)
Sh: bcoz jo baat mane tumse karne hai wo vhan nhi ho sakti'''.(n she tells her abt her plan n why she want nupurs help)
N:disgusting''. (angrily)apne galat ladki ko chuna hai mam'.. main ase lalki nhi hoe''.app mujhse koi or bhi kaam kara sakti hai, main mana nhi karuge bt'.. main se nhi kr sakti''.
Sh:theak hai as u wish''..shayad tum apne bahan se pyar nhi kartiCryCry''wo bechari vhan dard se tadap rhe hai or tum ho ki''.. uske jeene ya marne se tumhe koi farak nhi padta.AngryAngry
(d name of her sis breaking her down. She loves her lik hell. She is nt only a sis 4 gunjan bt a mother n father too bcoz from her childhood only she hd taken all d resposiblies of her ''..after a long discussion she got ready to b in sheena's plan. She knows vary well that she is destroying her whole lif bt at that point of time to save gunjan's lif ws her priority.)CryCry
Flashback over
Nupur wipe off her tears when come back from her thoughts n says'..
N: ab aage kya hoga''.kya ab koi mare maddat nhi kr sakta ? koi nhi?????(asks questioning to God)OuchOuch

And now a handsome doctor is show.he is busz in flirting with a nurse in his cabin Embarrassedwhen another nurse knocks his door n disturbs him. He makes a cute n irritating face 4 disturbing him''
Dr: yes''.come in''
Nurse: main apke new patient ko le aye hoe sir.(n he brings gunjan)
Her name is gunjan bhushan sir''.(says to introduce her to d doctor)
Dr:hi''..miss gunjan bhushan''..i m Dr SAMRAT SHERGILL'''(says with sweet smile introducing him self) EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedWink
 
~~**so guyzzz how was d part ha??? hope u liked it....dis part was d entry part of sajan...to ab do jodiya......yanike dugna maza!!SmileSmile**~~


Edited by Sanugr8fan - 20 February 2011 at 5:29am

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