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UNNAMED RELATIONSHIP( mjht ff) |updated| (Page 6)

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nice update dear!
loved the song sequence Embarrassed
waiting eagerly for the next update
continue ASAP
nd plzzzzzzzzz pm me whenever u'll update (i missed last 2 updates coz u didn't pm me Unhappy)
@topicmaker: plzzzzzz update the title of this ff with the part number nd page no. in this way it will be a little easier for the readers to find the updates)
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Nice update...lukin forward for the twist ...plzzz add me to ur pm list !
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** first of all- i want to sincerely apologise to every1 esp- koyal dii coz i didn't update regularly....exams r near....hope u understand**
 
 
Part 6
I beautytiful morning welcoming them…….sun is sparkeling on mayank's face…..he don't want to open his eyes bt that sun rays which r directly falling on his face nt allowing him to sleep more…….a sweet smile on his face n he slowly opens his eyes, he watch that a girl is sleeping next to him, her hairs r covering her face…..mayank smiles showing his dimples bt as soon as he realized that he is nt in his house n d girl is nt his wife sheena, his all smile vanish…….he wants 2 believe that its nt true so he slowly removes d hairs of girl from her face n a big shock……..
M: nupur…….. bt hw cn this all happen……
And all d senes of last 9t started revolving around his head……he is nt able 2 belive that he is so weak that he crossed all boundries last nite…….
He immediately gets up from there n directly go to washroom…..
He is taking shower , water is dropping from his body n he is curcing his self for doing this sin….each n every movement of last nite boiling his anger n he comes outside after taking bath……
In bedroom nupur is siting on bed covring herself with bedsheet n waiting for mayank…….
Mayank comes…
N: agye app sir (hugging from back)
M: (mayank throughs her away as hard as he cn)
N: (stun on his reaction )
M:jst don't dare to come near u so called cheap girl……..
N:so scared after watching mayanks red eyes witch were full of anger
M: kya hua ab kyun der rhe ho…….kl raat ko jb tumhe itne giri hoe haekat karte hoe dar nhi lga tho ab kya kis baat ka der………
N: nupur jst standing on her place holding bedsheet around n her eyes were down……….
M: mujhe pta hai tumne coffee mae jaroor kuch na kuch milaya tha, tabhe main apne hosh kho betha….
N:shivering badly bcoz of mayank's anger……
M: bolu milaya tha ya nhi(going towards nupur)…….. milaya tha ya nhi nupur……(nupur's feet were automaticly taking her back..)……milaya tha ya nhi nupur….(this time in a dam loud n angry voice)
N:haaaaaaaa……….milaya tha(cryingly)
M:(a tight slap on her face………) kase ladki ho tum nupur…….tumhe acche tarh pta tha ki I m married tb bhi tumne mujhse asa relationship bnaya jis ka koi naam hi nhi hai…..kyun kiya tumne asa kyunnnnnnnnnn(angrily)

Nupur ws jst standing lik a statue n listening to her every word
M:oh……main kase bhool gya ki tum jase ladkiya ye sab pase k lea karte hai sirf pase k lea…….tum jase girls ko hi characterless kha jata hai……..pta nhi jo tumne mare sath kiya hai wo or kitne logo k sath kiya hoga…(nupur closes her eyes )…..u r such a cheap girl nupur…..such a cheap girl….(n he leaves from there)

After mayank goes from there nupur moves to bathroom like a lifeless body……..
She takes d shower n it ws difficult to know wheather d water of shower is more or d water which ws coming from her eyes………she sits under shower with her knees fold crying as hard as she cn…….she ws recalling all d memories of last 9t n trying to wash each n every part of her body where mayank hd touched her……she puts her hand on her head n holds her hairs as tight as she cn……..every word that mayank said killing her from inside……..

Afternoon 1.00 pm

Nupur collects all courage that she hv n reached to d hotel in which they were staying………n asks 4 keys bt get to know that mayank already left from there n hd cleared all d bills. Nupur collects her bags from here n make her way back 2 mumbai…….

Night time
Mayank hd reached 2 mumbai……n he rings n bell of his house
Sh: aray…….mayank, tum aa gye……itne jalde or ek baar inform bhi nhi kiya……..
M:wo time nhi mila (simply)
Sh:or meeting kase rhe?
M:gud……(low voice)
N:or nupur……..
Mayank cuts d topic n says….
M:sheena hum kl baat kare….i m so tied, want to sleep.
Sh:ok…..as u wish…..gud 9t…..
M:gud 9t……

Morning….
Mayank leaves early before sheena wake up as he wants to avoid her questions moreover he ws feeling guilty………so he leaves for office……

Morning at nupurs house
Door bell rings…….ting tong…..
Nupur opens d door
N:app......? yhan…..SHEENA MAM……..
Sh: HA…main….kyun aa nhi sakti kya…..
N:nhi…..i mean apko takleaf uthane ki kya jaroorat thi…….mujhe bulaliya hota
Sh:pagal ho gye ho kya……agar mayank ne mujhe tumhare sath dehk leya hota na tho bna bnaya plan chopat ho jata(says in one breath with a broud smile)
N:(expressions of disbelieve)
Sh:kher chodu……point pr ate hai……..mera kaam hoa ya nhi…..?
N:(nupur ws abt to cry bt controls herself n says) ji…….
Sh:OMG!!!!!!!! Kaam sach mae ho gya……..mujhe tho laga ki tum ye kaam karne mae barso lgadoge pr thk god finally u did that (a devil smile on sheena's face)
N:jst standing n reminding that sheena ws d one who hired her for saducing mayank…….
Sh:bt nupur tum sure ho na iske baad tum pregnant ho jauge varna this plan will b of no use…….
N:ji……almost sure (says in a broken voice)
Sh:great……..bs ab ek baar tumhare pregnance confirm ho jay tho sb kuch theak ho jayga…….
N:ek baat puchu?
Sh:ha puchu?
N:mayank sir apse itna pyaar karte hai tho apne unke sath isa kyun kiya ……itna bdha dhoka…….
Sh:kyuki main maa nhi bnana chahte nupur, infact main kabhi maa banane mae interested hi nhi thi…… isse lea tho pehle baar jb main pregnant hoe tho mane abortion kra liya or mayank ko news pohunchvae ki main stairs se gir gye jiske vajah se mera miscourage ho gya hai…….(n prouds that she ws successful to make fool of mayank)
Vase kitna bhola hai na mera mayank……..kitna trust kara hai mujh pr , main kuch bhi kahu hamesha yakeen kr leta hai…….(nupur ws nt able to believe her hears that a mother cn kill her own child)
N:vase aap maa kyun nhi banana chahti(nupur finaly asked to her)
Sh:kyuki I lov my figure n my beauty nupur more than anything else in this world……..ise vajah se tho mayank ne mujhe pehle baar dekhte hi pasand kr lea tha……..more over I m a well know fassion disinger , people apriciate me bcoz of my figure including my work no doutttttt……..main apne figure ko kharab kar k imbarisment nhi jhel sakti thi……
N:or jb ye news sabko pata chalege ki mayank sir hv relation with some other girl………other than his wife……tho ye imbarisment kase sahan karege aap…….
Sh:don't worry nupur……..hum teeno kisi asi place pr kuch deno k lea jayge jhan hmare bare main koi nhi janta ho or jb vapas mumbai mae ayege tho mare hath mae ek cute sa baby hoga or logo ko tho ye hi lagega ki ye baby mera hai…….
N:pr mayank sir iske lea kabhi nhi manegai…….
Sh:(intrupting) relax nupur wo sb tum mujh pr chod do….main sb sambhal luge wase hi jase mane tumhe mayank k office mae pohanchaya.......vase hi jase mane moka milte hi tumhe wo tablets di airport pr…….mujhe yakin tha ki apne hosh mae mayank tumhe kabhi hath nhi lagaega varna moka tho uske pass pehle bhi tha jb usne tumhe der raat ko drop kiya tha or tumne use coffee k lea invite kiya tha……..wo moka bhi tho mane hi tumhe call kr k dane k lea kha tha……bt my innocent mayank…….kuch samjhta hi nhi hai(says revealing all things she hd done in this plan)
N:pr mam…….
Sh:(again cuts before she could say anything) bus nupur……tum sirf mare order follow karne pr dayan do ya fir us pr jiske jaan bachane k lea tumne se sab kiya hai….(little angrily tone) bake jagah apna mind na chalau tho hi accha hoga……….
Now nupur don't dare to say any thing n sheena leaves from there……
Nupur POV
She sits on her knees (cringly) n says….i m sory sir main ye sab main kabhi nhi karna chahte thi……main mar bhi jati tab bhi ye ghatiya harkat nhi karti pr is bar sawal uske jaan ka tha jo mare jaan hai……….usse kase kho date…… kase………….

City hospital (afternoon )
Nupur is going towards a room quietly, hiding her all tears n pain……..she opens a door n says……
N:GUNJAN……..
G:di…….(sitting on a wheel chair)
And d sene closes……………..
 
 
~~so guyzz....did u like dis part.....hold on....more intersting twits awaiting.....be sure to comment....Tongue

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

nice update dear!
loved the song sequence Embarrassed
waiting eagerly for the next update thnx!!
continue ASAP
nd plzzzzzzzzz pm me whenever u'll update (i missed last 2 updates coz u didn't pm me Unhappy) sry!!
@topicmaker: my name is sanika plzzzzzz update the title of this ff with the part number nd page no. in this way it will be a little easier for the readers to find the updates)
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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i knoew that sheena was a really big bitch. And NUPUR could never do anything wrong. I TOTally lover this FF know Awesome plz add me to ur pm list

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Posted: 13 February 2011 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
juz want to kill dat sheeeennaaahhhh.......i knew that..it was all dat sheena''s plan......feeling bad4 nupur.....................

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i knew it was sheenas plan
so this was d reason ....
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