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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 6:30am | IP Logged
OMG...
I was almost gonna tell u dat by mistake Sheena's name is written wen i realised dat its actually Sheena,,.....!!!!!!! lol...
Bahut bada jhatka laga.....
Yeh koi bura sapna haina???

Continue soon....
Wanna read wat happens further.....
Plss pm....


Pooja
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged

great start Thumbs Up

ye to kafi zor ka jhatka tha by god LOL
would love to read more
continue soon
nd add me to ur pm list Smile
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Part 2

Party place

A big hall beautifully decorated. Mumbai's most rich n high class people came to give their bst wished to mr n mrs sharma. Every one ws their except d one for whom d party ws arranged…….yes, mayank n sheena bt soon they also reached to their party place n everyone welcomed them warm heartedly……both were looking great…….mayank ws in a black suit n sheena ws in a beautiful saree of red colour which hv a beautiful work on it…….both's dresses were designed by sheena aftrall she ws a well know fashion designer.

Then people started talking 2 each other n every one got buzy in party.

1st woman: look at sheena, she looks great na n her figure is still d same as she ws in colledge days n look at us we lost all grace after children n our figure is jst so pathetic.
2nd woman: ya u r so right she n we r of almost same age still she looks so young. She must hd maintained herself so well afterall she is a well known fashion designer . aye din interviews n photographs……so acha tho lagna hi padega.
1st woman: ya right!

Sheena over heards their conversation n feels proud that after d marriage also people prase her beauty lik before used to do.
Suddenly a voice comes from back……….hey sheena………
Sh :samrat! (happily)
Sa: umh… Dr Samrat kahu
Sh: oh god so tum doctor bn gay……..kya baat hai Dr Samrat.
Sa : ha, finaly(taking a deep breath)………muje tho lga tha ki dr banana mae pure umar hi nikal jaege bt finaly main budha hone se pehle dr ban gya…..
Sh: oye ab ye dialoge kisi or pr jadeo bohat style marne lga hai aaj kl.
Sa: shukar hai apne note tho kiya ki mera bhi koi style hai, colledge days mae note karte tho mare gf hote, pta nhi mayank mae tumne kya dekha (teasingly)
Sh: shut up samarat!
Sa : kyun ? look at u……u r still so charming lik before (flitingly)
Suddenly a angry voice comes from back side…..accha or main…….
Samrat turn n face towards mayank
Sa: aap aap tho abhe tak angry young man wale looks wale ho…….(jokingly)……..n they both share a hug.
M: tu baz nhi ayega na sheena se flirt karne se……..
Sa: immediately says……nhi…….n all of tryo bust out with laughing

Then both mayank n sheena cuts down d cake , dance n everyone enjoys d party….hd lots of fun……..n leaves at late night at 12pm……mayank n sheena too cames to their house.

Bedroom
Sheena is standing in front of mirror when mayank puts a diamond necklace in her neck……
Sh: wao mayank……….its so soooooooo beautiful….kb lae n party mae kyun nhi diya
M: bs le aya……or party mae kyun deta…..main nhi chahta ki koi hmare private time ko disturb kare.
Sh: bt main tho koi gift nhi lae.( sadly)
M: tho kya hoa tum muje mare marze ka gift de sakte ho.
Sh: realy….kya?
M:sheena I want to b a father. I want a little mr or miss sharma which will complete our family.
Sh: what?
M: kyun any problems (confusingly)
Sh: nhi……nt at all
Saying this she moves towards washroom to change her cloths n mayank gets happy.

After three months

Mayank sitting in his office n remembers……
flashback
sheena gets fainted n mayank calls d doctor n doctor confirms that she is pregnant n he gets so exited n feels that he is d happiest man of d world…….
Soon after one months mayank has to leave for 3 days due to a very impt meeting bt after 2 days he gets d news that sheena is in hospital as she hd fallen down from stairs. He rushes to Mumbai n when reached to hospital finds that he lost his unborn child…….sheena hd a miscourage.after this news mayank ws dam shocked n breaks down completely bt still he becomes support 4 sheena as usual n help her to over come from this troma. Now their lif again getting to normal
Flashback over

Tring tring…….phones bell rings n mayank comes out from his thoughts………
Girl: sir interview k lea ek girl aye hai apke sacratery ki post k lea bol rhe hai sheena mam ne select kiya hai
M: ok……bhej do……(after disconnecting phone) ab jb sheena ne bheja hai tho main kase reject kr sakta hoe.

A hot girl wearing high heels, short skirt, sleeveless shirt…..hihg pony…some makup……great looking coming towards mayank's office n every one is stairing at her specialy guys. They r nt able to tk off their eyes from her.
She knocks mayanks cabin n says may I come in sir……
M; plz come in n for a few sec's he also gets stun while looking at her bcoz of her such a hot look bt he avoids every thing n starts taking her interview.
First ques
M: what is ur name?
Girl: my name is Miss NUPUR BHUSHAN. ShockedShocked


I know u guys again will get some shocks bt plz do comment what ever u feel……….it will encourage me to write as its my first proper ff.
I know u guys don't lik sheena with mayank bt plz bear it….its vary impt from story point of view…..even I m a great mayur fan n wants 2 write a great story on mayur. I promise It will be a totally diff lov story.n at last I want u say again that this story is ful of twists n turn so wait n watch……..

N also I want to thks to all who read my story n commented on on it………lov u all….

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:20am | IP Logged
loved it whole update was osom
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:29am | IP Logged

nice update..

to finally nupur ki entry ho gayi...
continue soon...
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged
nice part dear..............
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:03am | IP Logged
superb update dear!
so finally Nupur ki entry ho hi gaye Big smile
waiting for the next part
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
Finalllllly......Nupur is back!!! LOL Actually its good but i dont like the sheena part lol...... But stillll its good and Samrat is a doctor....WOWOWOWOWOW Everything is sooo changed in it...And it is actually a big SHOCK 

Goooood jobbbbb!!!!!!!(Y)

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