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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arjunkidiwani
cn u clear something dear? U r sanika right ya my name is sanika...so what fanda of koyal? koyal is my friend I mean u r writing this ff or she actually she is writing d ffbut she cant post it here so i m posting it here on her behalf n also pm'ing evry1...c d first part of dis ff..or its or combine post i m nt able 2 understand kind off combined post!!😊.

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update.

i knew it.........all this sheena's plan.

intersting twist.

waiting for more twist.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanugr8fan

ok nw i got it. N combine post means ki i thought ki kuch parts tumne n kuch koyal ne likhe hai..thats y i ws asking

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey guyz....dsi tym i m not updating a new part...

actually i hav posted dis comment for 2 reasons...

1) to clear d confusion about dis ff's writer

~~ guyzz dis FF is written by my good frend koyal....n is posted by me ...as soon as she updated me wit her new part!!~~

2) wanted to share wit u all dat i jus completed my l8est vm on mayur...

so its a request to u all 2 plzzz watch it....

i hav tried to gyv my 1000%

plzz click on dis link...

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1616668&PID=39234631�

der u will find d link of my vm..!!

thnx ^_^

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Posted: 13 years ago

oh.. finally Sheena is behind all this thing.. hope Mayank comes to know early of all her plan..

nice update

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Posted: 13 years ago

wao...when r u updating next part? Plz update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arjunkidiwani
wao...when r u updating next part? Plz update soon

yup yup......wait 4 it!! d story is gonna take a twist!!😉😛😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 7
City hospital (afternoon )
Nupur is going towards a room quietly, hiding her all tears n pain''..she opens a door n says''
N:GUNJAN''..
G:di''.(sitting on a wheel chair)
N:(runs towards her n holds her as tightly as she cn)
Kase hai?(says with concern)
G:ek dam fit n f9''..dekho''.(with a small sweet smile )
N:nupur too gives a fake smile''.
G:pr tumhe kya hoa hai di'..?kitne weak lag rhi ho, yaha se tho ek dam hatte-katte gye thi''teen din mae kitne kamjoor ho gye ho tum'''.
N:nhi'.nhi tho(says with hasitation'')wo actuly itne lamba safar upar se itna sara kaam tho shayad usse ki vajah se lag rhi hoe''..
G:tho itna kaam mat kiya karu di''..
N:accha mare ma''.nhi karuge'..bus'.(closing d topic)
G:that's lik my gud di''(n both laugh''.nupur trying to show her normal)

They were talking to each other when nurse comes n ask to take gunjan with her 4 some tests n gungan makes a face bt nupur makes sure that she go for these tests''
Now nupur is alone in d room.when ever she comes in this hospital she always go into past bcoz in this hospital only she hd done a deal''.a deal of her lif''.a deal of her self respect'..a deal which changed her lif 4 ever

Flashback''..

Gunjan ws coming from colledge suddenly a car in speed come n hits her hard.
When nupur gets to know this she rush 2 d hospital'..
N:dr'dr'''.mare bahan ko kya hoa hai?
Dr:dekhia unka bohat bura accident hoa hai or abhi kuch bhi kehna mushkil hai''..
N:kya''.(totally blank)😔😔

After few hours dr come n tells nupur that gunjan is badly injured''they need 2 do operation with in two hours bt 4 that she need to arrange 5 lakh rupees which ws a very big amt 4 nupur as she even didn't hv a house of her home, her parents died long back''.it ws jst gunjan who ws her family. Strill she tried her bst 2 arrange 4 money bt no use.
Sheena came 2 hospital 4 her regular check ups as it ws jst some time ago she hd abortion''.she watched out a girl crying badly,she inquired abt d girl n got u know abt whole situation.she inquired abt nupur nt bcoz of sympathy bt bcoz of her plan. According 2 her plan she need a girl who is young,beautiful n smart as well as innocent so that she only follows d orders without any questions''..n nupur is showing all these features very well
Sh:hellooo''..nupur'..
N: ji''..sory mane apko panchna nhi''
Sh:I know''.kase panchanuge akhir hum kabhi mile hi nhi hai''..
N:dekhia main is samah bohat pareshan hoe tho''..
Sh:I know that nupur. Iselea tho main aye hoe tumhare help karne'''..
N:(confuse)
Sh:tumhe 5 lakh rupees chahea na apne sis k operation k lea''..main de sakte hoe''.😕😕
N:kya'''..bt kyun?
Sh:kyuki I want that ki tum mera ek kaam karu''..
N:(without thinking once) ha main apka koi bhi kaam karuge''.
Sh:ek baar sun tho lo''..baad mae palat nhi jana''
(And sheena takes nupur in a empty room in hospital)
N:aap mujhe yhan kyun lae hai?(so many questions into nupurs mind)
Sh: bcoz jo baat mane tumse karne hai wo vhan nhi ho sakti'''.(n she tells her abt her plan n why she want nupurs help)
N:disgusting''. (angrily)apne galat ladki ko chuna hai mam'.. main ase lalki nhi hoe''.app mujhse koi or bhi kaam kara sakti hai, main mana nhi karuge bt'.. main se nhi kr sakti''.
Sh:theak hai as u wish''..shayad tum apne bahan se pyar nhi karti😭😭''wo bechari vhan dard se tadap rhe hai or tum ho ki''.. uske jeene ya marne se tumhe koi farak nhi padta.😡😡
(d name of her sis breaking her down. She loves her lik hell. She is nt only a sis 4 gunjan bt a mother n father too bcoz from her childhood only she hd taken all d resposiblies of her ''..after a long discussion she got ready to b in sheena's plan. She knows vary well that she is destroying her whole lif bt at that point of time to save gunjan's lif ws her priority.)😭😭
Flashback over
Nupur wipe off her tears when come back from her thoughts n says'..
N: ab aage kya hoga''.kya ab koi mare maddat nhi kr sakta ? koi nhi?????(asks questioning to God)

And now a handsome doctor is show.he is busz in flirting with a nurse in his cabin 😳when another nurse knocks his door n disturbs him. He makes a cute n irritating face 4 disturbing him''
Dr: yes''.come in''
Nurse: main apke new patient ko le aye hoe sir.(n he brings gunjan)
Her name is gunjan bhushan sir''.(says to introduce her to d doctor)
Dr:hi''..miss gunjan bhushan''..i m Dr SAMRAT SHERGILL'''(says with sweet smile introducing him self) 😳😳😳😳😉

~~**so guyzzz how was d part ha??? hope u liked it....dis part was d entry part of sajan...to ab do jodiya......yanike dugna maza!!😊😊**~~

Edited by Sanugr8fan - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

FEELING VERY SAD FORR NUPUR...........

MY DEAR NUPUR .

PLEASE USKI LIFE MEIN ITNA BURA TO HO CHUKA HAI ...

PLEASE AB TO KUCH ACHA KAR DO.

PLEASE.

AB TO SAMRAT AA GYA HAI GUNJI KI LIFE MEIN .

SO SHE WILL BE FINE .

BUT AB NUPUR KI LIFE MEIN BHI MAYANK K LOVE KI ENTRY KARWA DO PLEASE....

PLEASE USSE ITNA MAT HARSH BEHAVE KARO.

PLEASE USSE ITNA DARD MAT DO.

KAM SE KAM SHEENA KI REALITY TO MAYANK K SAAMNE LE AAO PLEASE .

I AM FEELIMG VERY SAD FOR NUPUR..............

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516247

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update.👏

very well written.👏

feel sad for nupur........she was so helpless.😭

poor she.😭

aur sheeee-nahhh ne uska helplessness ka faida uthaya😡 ...damn she😡

it was nice to meet samrat.😃

i hope, their lovestory llb started soon.😃

waiting for nextt.

thanks for the pm.😊

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