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SAJAN FF-DIL KA RISHTA#2 (Page 29)

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
i like ur idea

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 6:40pm | IP Logged
Hey maisha i thnk u shud cnt dear.
nice track.
luv u
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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

hey maisha...
i thnk this idea is good...
i mean till now thier relationship is lovey-dovey but evry relationshp also has to go thru rough patches like ur idea...
its an evryday thng between couples & i wud like to see how SaJan manage thru this rough phase...
evry relation has to go thru some ups & downs & so it is necessery to show how normal people balance thier life with work & home...
it will b quite an intresting testime for SaJan...& then i wud love to see thier patch-up too...Embarrassed
i quite like this idea...from me its a Go-ahead to u...
rest all depends on u...& sorry for boring u with my Philosophy...
i was only givng my POV...plzzz Go-ahead with the track...Hug
I truly agree with Ekta! This FF needs to be shown as a realistic one!
Every relationship has to go through tough times and so should SaJan... This is an awesome trackClap I would like you to go ahead with this concept...Smile
StarYou Rock Maisha!Wink You are most welcome to continue with this track..Hug
Love Nivriti~Embarrassed

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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged
i liked dis track...u noe life is not a bed of roses...so everything cannot b goody goody...so i loved it...u can also show entry of neil as her cousin from foreign n every1 noes he's her cousin except sam coz wen he came 2 meet every1, sam was busy in his office work n den he sees gunj n neil outsde 2g8dr roaming in d mall n den shak n all...
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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged
no nt this track.. lil bit of fight is ok in every relation... bt it shuld nt create ny prob in their lyf... this is my view...
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Posted: 23 April 2011 at 2:28am | IP Logged
nyc idea..cont soon
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part-50
the next morning...a new morning..the day to return to mumbai...sun rays fell on sajans face.. both sleeping peacefully in eachothers arms...samrats hands around her waist..n shoulder..n gunjans head on his chest...samrat opened his eyes..hearing the knock on the door...he loooked at the time..
s=shitt...8 bajgayee...
it was nupur outside the room..knocking on the door..
n=samrat...gunjan...abhitak sorahehoo?? uth jaooo...subhah hogayi ha..
s=ha bhabiii...bass araheha...
n=jaldi ana.a...
s=ha..bas...dus minutee...
samrat put gunjans head on the piloow..n went to the washroom...after he came out he saw her still sleeping...he sat beside her...drying his hair..
s=gunjan..uth jao...subhah hogayi ha..
g=samrat.plzz..dont disturb..sone donaa...
she turns aroundd..
s=are...uth jaoo..late horaha ha..aj wapas jana ha..
g=ummm...yaad ha..par..plzz..mujhe sonaa ha.
s=are...nashta nahi karna ha kyaa?????
g=nahiii..tum karloo..jaoo...jab tumhara khatam hojayy...too plzz...mere liee leke ajana...samjhee..ab jaoo,..,.mujhe disturb matt karoo..
s=ok..as u wishh...
samrat comes out...n goes to the dining tablee...n sees everyone were gossiping..
s=morningg...
n=agaye..barkhurdar..
sh=akele?? gunjan kaha ha??
s=sorahiha..usne kaha ha..ke..uska nashta ma badme room me leke jauu..isiliyee...
sh=ahem ahem...akelel akeleme romancee..
s=shilpa..tujhe aur kuch sujhta nahi?? sirf tang khichtiii rehtii ha,...
ar=shilpa...samjha kar..humare rehte hue..bechare in doonone kalal sara din... ek dusreke begar bitaya ha..
sh=aree ha..ritee..sam.,.ek kaamkar..tu na room me chala ja..tera nashta bhi hum wahi bhijwa dengee.,..
s=are..
n=samrat ja./...aur jake gunjan ko ready honeko boll..nashta karke..nikalna ha na..
s=ok bhabiii..bhabii..nashta bhej dena..
n=theek ha..
samrat comes to the room..n sees gunjan still sleepingg..he sits beside her...n starts wakingg her...
s=jaanm...uth jaooo...
g=nahii..sona ha..
s=are...kitna sougii..sab uthchuke ha..humhe jana ha na... packing nahi karni ha..
gunjan turns to him..n moves the pillow from her facee...n looks at him..with a sad look..
s=are...ese udass wala chehra kyu banaya ha???
gunjan sits up..
g=kitni jaldi waqt beet gaya..kaal hi aye the...sare tensions..kaam sabse chutttii leke.. aur aj jana ha..kaalse wahi headache wala daily routinee..ma hospital me patients..surgery me busy..aur tum business me... kaalse phir..humhe hardly ek dusreka chehra dekhnekoo milegaa...
samrat smiles..he turns her towards himselff...
s=jaann..my swweeetttuu...plzz udass mat hona..u noo..ma tumhara ye udass wala chehra pasand nahi karta...givee a smilee..
gunjan smiles..
s=thatss nicee..aur ek baat jo ma humesha tumse kehta hu...jabtak hum sath ha..tabtak hum khush ha..chahee... kitna bhi kaam me busy kyu na hojayy..woh humare normall n real lifee ha.. in kaam samay mehi hum jitna time spend karenge..tum dekhna wahi paall booht yaadgar honge humare lieee..aur beech beech me ese holidayss to rahenge..to in choti chotii batosee.. apni beautifull morning ko kharab matt karoo..ok???
gunjan smiles..n pulls his cheeks..
g=u noo...tumme mane sirff ek best patii nahi..best frrendd..bestt pall.. best partner.. paya ha..jiske sath ma gham bhi bat saktii hu...khushiya bhi share karsaktii hu...jhagadd bhi saktii hu... phirr..mana bhi saktii hu..root bhi sakttii hu..aur pyaar bhi karsaktii hu...thankss..
s=well..woh kya ha na..ke duniya me ma ek hi piecee huu..
g=i noo..jo sirf aur sirff...gunjan ka ha...
s=aur rahega...
"knock knock"
g=come in..
ch=didiii...nashta..
s=rakhdooo...
ch=jiju..ap donoko sabne bahar jaldi bulaya ha..
s=hum arhaeha..
ch=theek ha..
g=chinky darwaja...
ch=theek ha didi..
s=tum ready hojaoo..ma tabtak packing karleta hu...
g=are...par tum tumhara hath to jala hua ha..
s=kuch nahi hoga..tum jaldi tayyar hojaoo.
g=theek ha...
gunjan goes to the washroom...n meanwhile samrat starts packingg...
later...all were leaving morena..
g=buuii..apna khayal rakhnaa..
bui=chupkarr...zyada dikhaya karneki zaruratt nahi ha...mumbai jake bhulhi jayegii..
g=par..
s=buii..gunjan ko rehne doo..ma hu na..ma apka harr din khayal rakhunga..theek ha???
bui=jeeta rahe...aur merii iss pagal bacchi ka khayal rakhna...
s=ji buii..aur ha...ap kab mumbai ayengee??? tab dekhna..ma apkii esii khatirdarrii karunga..ke ap wapashi nahi jana chahengii..
g=ha bui..ayiyena kabhi mumbaii..baujii bhi humesha kehte ha..
bui=jab ana hoga...bata dungiii..
n=lets go guyss..train ka time horaha ha...
m=ha chalo chalooo...
they went to the station n started for mumbai..in the train..everyone were quiet..then armaan started to say,..
ar=yaar hum sab itni chupp kyu ha????
s=koi kuch bol nahi raha ha..isiliye chupp ha...
g=mujhe wapas nahi jana ha...gosshh!! kaalse wahii rozz rozz duitess... surgeriess... ggrrr...life humesha esi simplee..aur funnfilled kyu nahi hottii haa?? kyuu harr waqqtt... ye kaammm kaam kaammm...!!
s=gunjan...relaxx...
sh=samrat abhi bakk bakk karrahiha..dekhna..kaalka din hospital me ayegii..to bacchoke sath bacchhii ban jaeygii..
g=ha...wase mane bachookoo kafii miss kiaa ha..
sh=dekhaa...
s=yeh too esehii ha...parr dont worryyy...chahee jo hojaayy.,.mane jaise tumse kaha tha.. humare beechh kuch nahi badlegaa..
g=i noo thatt...
at night..they reached mumbaii...sajan mayur came to shergill mansion...sajan came to there room...samrat opened his shoes...n sat on the bed...gunjan came to the room..n went to the washroom...she came out changing in her night clothes...
g=tum change karloo...ma tabtakk..tumhare lie...kuch khaneko latii hu..
samrat holded her hand..n brought her close..
g=kya karrahehoo???
s=kyuu?? achaa nahi lagaa?
g=mane esa kab kaha???
s=phirrr??? ese kyu kehrahihoo..ke mane kya kiaa...kuch naya to nahii ha..
g=nahii..ma..sirf..isiliye kehrahithii..aj achanakkk.see.
s=kyukii..ma apnii chashmish ko khush dekhna chahtaa huu...
g=ma to khush huu..
s=parr upset hoo..isiliye..ke kaalse...
g=ha...woh to ha...samrat...kaalse..tumhe ma sirf shamkkoo milungiii..
s=esa kyu kehtii ho?? yaad nahi..pehle..jab mera lunch me break hota ha..to ma hospital ata tha..phir hum sathme lunch kartee ha..well doo it...ok???
g=okkk..accha ab hathooo...mujhe kitchen me kaam ha...
s=parr..wohjh..ek..kiss..
g=nooo...
she pushes his..n runs from there..
the next morning..
gunjan wakes up first..as beforee...she freshes up...then takes out samrats clothes..presses them..n keeps his things...with his juice.. then makes his brekafast n tiffin..n then gets ready for her hospitalll...gunjan was brushing her hair..n luking at him throught the mirror...
g(in mind)=again the daily boringg lifeee... kassh samrat kee hum humesha bass ek dusreke sath akeleme waqqt guzaar saktee..sirf tum aur maa...
gunjan was ready to go to the hospitall..before leaving..she went to samrat..who was sleeping..she bent down..n kissed on his forhead...
g=byee lovee...
gunjan was leaving..samrat holded her anchall..n pulled her over him..
g=tum jagrahheoo??
s=well..tumhare sath rehte rehta...ab to mujhebhii..jaldi uthenkii adatt hochukii ha...
g=accha...tum tyimese ready hojana..mane tumhara nashta bana diya ha...khalena..aur ha timse lunchh...ok???
s=sab boldiyaa...par imp cheezee..
g=kyaa??
s=mera...gudmorningg kiss..iiske bina tumhe jane nahi dungaa..
g=accha theke ha...
gunjan kisses on his cheeks..
g=khush?? ab ma jauu??
s=jaooo..byee lovee u..
g=loovee u tooo...
precap: sajan busy in there daily schedules...
 
 
 
 
 

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