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SS: Freedom Hearts- Part 2-pg 3 (Page 6)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cadbery

love ur style of writting......but I thought i was reading the last part, but no, I have to wait for the nxt part now, I hate waiting...:(
pls make the nxt part as long as the last one or more..Smile

Thanks hun...Im not sure if im a big fan of my writingLOL im a harsh critique to myself. lol
it was suppose to be last but the way i ended i figured people will ask for more so ill be writing the epilogue at leastLOL

ill try to make the next part longer but can't promise...

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sshriyaa84

WOW rooj loved khanak-shaans relationship  ( wich is realy peculiar) 
 
and The end is like an art film( i mean  viewers /readers kept guesing)too good yaar..

Awww thnx Shriya...well it is mainly Khanak's POV...and its based on friendship than a relationship so maybe in the epilogue we will get something good...

awww thanks hun...my idea was to keep it like an art film type to keep the readers guessing...so yea
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by togepe30

Nice one...
I hope you work on that Epilogue !!

thanks hun...

i am working on that epilogue...

general question: how come people read my SS or FF and leave small comments but with others there are more on them?LOL just wondering.LOL
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetsute

great job rooji............. u know wat dere is a element of reality in ur narration-just suberb, dis is wat happens to half of d teenagers, i have seen wid my own eyes, not to me , but my friends

thanks hun...i think we talked bout that part already over the pm...it is true how these things exist and that is why i picked Khanak and Shaan to be in college because these things happen all the time...
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepali88

Awesome  update rooj...Hug all 2 part  was rocked and brilliantThumbs Up I wish you write a concluding part too. but overall its superbClap

awww thanks deepali...
I am thinking bout writing a concluding part...i sort of wrote this in a hurry otherwise i was going to make it into a real ff but dont have time. lol

and thanks...

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SPN_JD_Addicted

Oops sorry I am late sweetheart,but what a conclusion!!!Loved it to bits and more.And the dialogues are just so beautiful!Are you sure you don't want to continue?!Awesome hon!

it's ok Smitha...duty callsLOL
thanks so much...i figured all FF or SS have a good ending why not have something that will have the readers guessing...

ill think bout continuing it but more like an epilogue...can't make it into another FF or else people will kill meLOL

thanks.
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The_May_Rose

Nice update Rooj, I liked the bitter-sweet aspect of this lovestory....Not like the show, but a very good read and once again very well writtenClap.....

Thanks May!Hug
Thanks for the comment...honestly it is not based on a show but a real-life incident or to a real-life person...mainly a girl's POV...thanks so much...
i hope their friendship turns into love...it sort of reminds me of Pooja's Dostana...actually Pooja's Dostana has a lot of incidents that relate to this story...
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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by iluvmanar

Rooj...very good yaar...sumthing different....

Thank you Navs....it was meant to be different...

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