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SS: Freedom Hearts- Part 2-pg 3 (Page 4)

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
hi Rooj
loved the update.........Big smile
very well written ............Thumbs Up
i want more of it but as u say its last part then its ok.........Heart
i loved khanak n shaan friendship description n how she tell everything to shaan ............loved it
n thanks 4 PM............Big smile

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:34pm | IP Logged
Nice-Liked how you ended it where you did. Seems like another story. The readers can make up their own ending to the story=D

As for the story-I can somehow relate to it. I've always been upset by the selfishness of people.Someday I shall tell you my theory about levels of friendship=)
Btw-the last sentence is incomplete!

Oh and thanks for calling me an idiot=p

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
@ Shai: Thanks hun! I didn't intend to write an epilogue but I might write one...but a bit later..

@advent: these incidents are actually true. I don't know how similar they are to you but they are true...thanks tho...

@Saaz: they are written from Khanak's POV...thanks...

@ angel: thanks hun...Im glad you liked it...i sort of left the ending for people to venture on their own...I might write a concluding part...

@ Yumna: Thanks yaar...the incidents are not really detailed and they are given from Khanak's POV because it is her story not Shaan's. lol 
I left for people to make up their own story...
as for the sentence...thanks for letting me know I'll go back and change it. lol


Edited by rooj-i - 25 January 2011 at 9:50pm

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Its really nice rooj....

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
 Yes but they reminded me of some similar events in my college years, just I am missing a guy like Shantanu in my life," sighs"

 I really liked how you wrote this, amazing job!

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by adventure_gurl

 Yes but they reminded me of some similar events in my college years, just I am missing a guy like Shantanu in my life," sighs"

 I really liked how you wrote this, amazing job!

awwww....Hug

thanks hun...I didn't mean to make you nostalgic....

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
love ur style of writting......but I thought i was reading the last part, but no, I have to wait for the nxt part now, I hate waiting...:(
pls make the nxt part as long as the last one or more..Smile

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
WOW rooj loved khanak-shaans relationship  ( wich is realy peculiar) 
 
and The end is like an art film( i mean  viewers /readers kept guesing)too good yaar..

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