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hey congrats for the new thread and waitingggggg

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we are all waitingggggggggggggggggggg
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi update karna yaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrr
 
need to leave the office for the day and will take some time to reach home and to read ur update (and can't wait for long time)

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***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 12

Shila- she is dam cool. Oh I am so proud of her.... Do you know Yash asked her out billions of time over last year... And her answer was always no. Maan smirks at that thought.... She is only his cute football. Fatty.... Just one problem she wasn't over weight anymore. More like under weight.

The game was only 10 minutes in... Her enthusiasm was determined. She was the sprinting with the ball. Maan was amazed at his new geet. She was great... No.. No.. No  the best. 

Maan- woow.... He was speechless... The way she was playing... It was..was... So unexpected. The slowest runner is one of the fastest runner now... Maan smiles... She was the best in the field. Maan couldn't see anyone els then her... His eyes was glued on her... But somewhere he misses his geet.... Is this the same geet... Hmm.. He thought... Will she still behave with me like those oldens day.... He wondered..... Geet was running between people now... Saving the ball from one person to another. She is brilliant. Hardly anyone came close to her... Barley touching her. She swift from one place to another like a wind....  And then out of the bloom she scored....


Everyone screamed as Geet scored.... Everyone was running after her as she screamed in joy... In excitement... Few of other player jumped on her.. Everyone pilled on her like the rugby player.... A small smile escaped maans face, then suddenly his smile disappeared as he notched he was hugging her.... 

Maan- boyes.... What... B..b.bb.bb.bb.b.b....boys... Who,.... she is playing with boys?.... Maan asked angrily again.... He couldn't belive his eyes... Boys were jumping on her... B...b.b.bb.b.b.b.b.b.b...b.bb.b.
Shila- what's wrong with you bro?.....
MAan- this is jut great. Just great.... He spoke out in frustration. He took the frustration out in the can he was holding. Shila observed very carefully... She was understanding... Little by little... There might be something.... She smiles....

Maan was so bored of watching football... He didn't approve of her playing this at all. How could he? Geet scored few times. She was extremely good. Outstanding. She surly will make it for team A soon... Opps she was aming for B. But what the he'll she is doing? Playing with boys. Not cool.
Shila scrammed as the game finished. Maan was relived as the game finished. He slowly walks toward the pitch as everyone ran. He slides his hand in his pocket. He could here Merra and Sammera screaming. More like complaining. Her brother wasn't that good. He was giving geet Evil glare.... Geet smirking.... His football.... Shila & geet hugs one another tightly....
Geet- I made it... I made it.... I made it...... She screams....
Shila- oh I am so happy for you.... Bothe jumped on the sport.... Then suddenly Geet caught maans eyes. Who was observing her from far. Far Way from the crowed. Her eyes widens. There was a glow in her face.... Uncontrolled glow. She is seeing him after 2 long years. It's been so long.... Seems like forever.... She stood there frozen.... Just couldn't believe maan stood in front of her....
Maan smiled... A warm gentle smile. Her face wasn't cubby any more. Dam he can't pull her cheek.... Geet ran towards him and hugged him tight in front of everyone.... No one noticed as everyone was busy congratulating one another.... Geet couldn't feel her feet anymore as maan picked her up. Maans hand was round her waist while geets round his neck...... She waited every holiday just to see his glimpse... But he never came... She always sat there... In front of the khurana house... Everyday of her holiday but he never showed up.... She was on the moon today.... Her 7th heaven.... She couldn't express her happiness at all... Geet just holds him tighter and tighter with each passing second.... Geets leg was resting against maan above the ground as maan wasn't willing to let her go.... His football is back to him... Now he surly will never leave.... Never ever.....
Geet- I missed you.... I missed you.... I missed you so much......
Maan laughs....
Maan- you are not heavy anymore. I can pic you up. He mocks. Geet slaps his arm....
Geet- so... How do I look.... & I flowed everything on the list. She replied happily....
Maan- umm.....
Geet- all of it....
Maan- good. Let's go home..... Maan was still holding geet by her waist. He wasn't willing to let her go at all.... It's been two long years. He missed her so much.... But eventually he let's her down. Her top came up maan pulls it down...... Geet quickly runs in to the changing room takes a quick shower.... All the girls in the changing room was hating geet. She is the only one who made it in the B team... And boys.... Just hates her more.
Geet looks at tara- hi... You plaid amazing.
Tara ignores. Geet was confused why they hate her so much. She haven't done anything wrong.
Geet- umm... Have I done anything wrong?
Tara ignores again. Geet gets annoyed. What exactly was her fault if she gets promoted from one level to another.
Geet- hi Rina... You were amazing.. dude.
Rina- thanks.... She did managed to reply but there was certain awkwardness in her talk. One by one everyone walks out. They all talked to one another but not Geet. Geet felt upset and down. Everyone started to ignore her. Now she will be in team B and they... New people. New players. One way she was happy that she will be meeting new people and another upset because she will be leaving her so called friends who is jealous of her glory. Geet walks out in strop. She wore a short short and a sport vest. Her chest was still forming. Her body was petite. She was also growing in height. Not tall as shila. She puts her gim bag across her chest and puts her rubber band on her left wrist. One of them saying ugly duckling! One of them cool geet. Another I love maan. Her curly hair was in one pony tail along with thick sweat head band. Geet puts her sneakers on and walks out in strop. What this girls thinks of them self. She spoke and blubbered rubbish. Maan and Shila was waiting for her on the car park. Maans eyes widens as he sees he in this new avatar. Of course she wasn't young anymore. She is a bit too stylish now days. More like a Tom boy.
Shila- ignore those girls.
Geet sits at the back seat and bang shuts the door.
Maan- WhT happen?
Geet- nothing!
Shila- we should go bro. She whispers.... Maan half guessed. It must be those girls again. They always teased her.

As they arrives in khurana mansion geets moods lightens a bit. Shila runs in leaving Geet with maan. Both walks out.
Maan wasn't happy with geets cloths.
Maan- what are you wearing? He tries to pull her short down to cover her thigh. And her top up to cover her chest once then down to cover her stomach.... He kept doing that while geet stood there half confused.... Maan eventually became frustrated....
Maan- we are going shopping now. You are not wearing this cloths. Geet watches him in amuse...
Geet- did you come after two years to moan at me? She made a baby face... Maan still wasn't approving her cloths. He takes her jacket off and puts it on her.
Maan- you are not going in that party like this! He made a angry face. Both sat in the car and drove off.

next- Extreme Shopping'.Confused poor geetDay Dreaming abut maanROFL


hay you all.. thanks for all the lovely comments and the support' thanks for all the lovely comments' it motivates me so much and the like button'. pls meri liye aur thorasa comment rakh na' ;D





Part 13

now about the real epi on telly'. lol is anyone watching todays epi' i will watch it until they start there arguments. lol then come bc next week. lol' to see the full SR. LOL
xxxxxx
what u lot think what there arguments will be about' my thinking it will be about ' where she remembers dev and her SR' and she will ask something to maan without thinking which will upset maan' like maybe' "you will never leave me na maan?"'. maan will be hurt as she still can't trust him'. i am thinking something in that line' heheh
xxxxxxx



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Originally posted by vrsharma

we are all waitingggggggggggggggggggg
 
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi update karna yaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrr
 
need to leave the office for the day and will take some time to reach home and to read ur update (and can't wait for long time)


hey  vidyaaa.....how r u dear???

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Yipeee 1st to reserve....PartyDancing

Fantastic...Clap Loved the Maaneet Hug! It was adorable...Embarrassed

Aww Maan u can't tease her anymore but for u she always remain ur football!

Yeah... i agree with Maan... She can't be wearing such clothes.. She needs a wardrobe exchange!LOL

Go on Maan.. Take her shopping! Change her clothes...ROFL As in help her buy new clothes... Don't change them for her!ROFL

Continue soon Keya... Me getting addicted to this one!Embarrassed

Love u loads...Heart

Mina


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awesome update dear....!!!

OMG geet is playing so well...m very happy for her...!!!

donno wat maan is going to shop for her...lolzWink

hey keya..pls update soon yaar...!!!

r u going to update more parts????



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