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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by goodgirl5

theek hai last warning hehehe
kkk sure n pakka
n ya c.c. ki link pm kar do so woh save rahegi.....so ye galti 2nd tym ni hogi

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
savd it ....done!!!! Smile
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
mene waha pe post kiya abhi kuch der ol hu me
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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 1:18pm | IP Logged

Hey friends i am Avani's sis and she cant post the part coz she is having difficulties with her phone and laptop so i am updating for her

hope u enjoy the update

 

Hey frnds how's ew all ????? Sorry 4 late update...i was too much like hell in ma shifting and i was too much tired after it so i didn't get tym 2 cum ol...here's update hope ew all'll lyk it.......



Part 7 :-

Next morning all 5 goes 2 college together.....they complete their breakfast and goes to their class. In hotel Maan was doing his running exercise bt disturbed by call he picks up.

Maan : ha Naintara[NT] bolo
NT : Maan vir-ji aap kaha the hum aap ko kal se call kar rahe the
Maan : kya kaam hai bolo
NT : aap hamesha itni jaldi me kyun rehte ho ?
Maan : tum kaam ki baat karogi ya me phone rakh du?
NT : ok batate hai, hame aap ko 1 gud news deni hai
Maan : kyun tumne mere idiot bhai se shadi karne ka faisla badal liya ?
NT : nahi Maan vir-ji, aap hi sochiye
Maan : dekho NT mere pas sochne ka waqt nahi hai saaf saaf batao
NT : theek hai hum batate hai. Maan vir-ji hamne ek detective agent se baat ki vo use dhundhne ke liye taiyaar hai
Maan [in anger]: muje is bare me koi baat nahi karni

NT : par aap hamari baat to suniye
Maan [shout]: kya sunu ? kya sunu ha ? sab agent ready hote hai fir kehte hai k hum yeh nahi kar payenge. Ye kaam mera hai aur muje pata hai ye kaise karna hai
NT : nahi Maan vir-ji hamne inse sab kuch pehle hi bata diya aur ye aap ka kaam karne ke liye ready hai
Maan : me tumse delhi aake baat karunga tab tak me is bare me koi baat karna nahi chahta
NT : par vir-ji hamari baat toh suniye
Maan : NT mene kaha na hum baad me baat karenge. Abhi me jaa raha hu muje meeting ke liye der ho rahi hai. Aur Dadi maa kaisi hai ?
NT : theek hai hum is bare me bad me baat karenge aur Dadi maa bilkul theek hai
Maan : ok and he cuts the call.

He goes to wash-room and gets ready for meeting bt he didn't find his important file and suddenly he remembers that he forget it in college so leaves for college. Maan goes to principal's cabin.

Maan : woh me kal file bhul gaya tha
Principal : oh ha par aap ne taklif kyun ki, kisi ko bhej diya hota ya mujse keh diya hota me bejwa deta
Maan : nahi yeh file me kisi ko nahi de sakta is liye khud lene aaya hu
Principal : ha ek min abhi deta hu aap bethiye na
Maan : nahi me thora jaldi me hu
Principal : ok. ye lijiye aap ki file aur ha aap aaj sham ko aa rahe hai na party me
Maan : ha me koshish jarur karunga aane ki
Principal : ok

Samrat and Mayank about to enter principal's cabin but Maan comes out and Samrat bumps on him

Samrat : dude tum fir se yaha aa gaye ? tum subah subah yahan kyun aa gaye ?
Maan : mind ur language
Mayank : isne galat kya pucha sirf yahi pucha na k tum yahan kyun aaye toh bata do bas
Maan : me tumhare sawal ka jawab dena jaruri nahi samjta, samje tum ? hato mere raste se
Samrat : look dude ye hamari college hai tum apni had me raho nahi to [and he shows his finger to him]

Maan turns his hand and says

Maan : tum log jante nahi ho me kaun hu agar me chahu toh 5 min me tum log is college se bahar ho jaoge but kisi student ki life barbad karna Maan Singh Khurana ki fitrat nahi samje tum. kal tak toh me chup tha par ab me tum logo ki badtamizi sehne wala nahi samje tum. [and he pushes samrat's hand and leaves college in anger]

In car Maan calls some1 and says to give him all info about Samrat and Mayank. In college Samrat and Mayank both shocked by Maan's behaviour.

Samrat : what's wrong with him dude ? woh apne aap ko kya samjta hai ? [jaise tum nahi jante Maan Singh Khurana]
Mayank : choro na Samrat hame kya ?
Samrat : ye sab tumhari wajah se hua, tumhe usko kal nyt hamare sath dinner ke liye bulana nahi chahiye tha
Mayank : hum kaun sa uske sath roz rehne wale hai me to bas.....

He couldn't complete his sentence and Geet, Gunjan and Nupur comes and joins them.

Geet : hey guys tum logo ke chehre utre hue kyun hai ? koi bhoot dekh liya kya ?
Samrat : bhoot bhi usse achcha hota hai

Mayank stops him and says

Mayank : kuch nahi aise hi. Hum chalte hai apne rehearsal ke liye aaj sham ko hi party hai
Nupur : ha bahut kam waqt bacha hai hamare paas
Geet : Samrat tum jake announcement kar do jisne bhi participate kiya hai woh last time rehearsal kar le
Samrat : ok [and he leaves]

Geet : Mayank ise kya hua hai ? ye itna chup kyun hai ?
Mayank : kuch nahi Geet thodi der me apne aap theek ho jayega. Hum chalte hai rehearsal karne.
Geet : ok

Geet n Gunjan goes to music room and Mayank n Nupur goes to dance room. They starts their dance practise.

Nupur : Mayank plz thora slowly dance karo na abhi muje step me thori problem ho rahi hai
Mayank : dekho Nupur hamare pas waqt nahi hai samji, hame performance next year nahi aaj shaam ko dena hai
Nupur : ye muje bhi pata hai itna bhadkte kyun ho ? [n murmurs "sadu kahi ka"]
Mayank : kya kaha tumne ? [sadu kaha]

Nupur : mene toh kuch nahi kaha. Par tum hamesha mujse is tarah baat kyun karte ho ?
Mayank : dekho Nupur mere paas tumhare faltu sawal k jawab dene ka waqt nahi hai samji
Nupur : kya kaha tumne ? mere sawal faltu hai ?
Mayank : hum ye baate baad me bhi kar sakte hai pehle dance practise kar le ?
Nupur : nahi
Mayank : nahi ? par kyun ?
Nupur : jab tak tum mujse sidhe tarike se baat nahi karoge me dance nahi karne wali.
Mayank : Nupur ye bachkani harkate bandh karo.
Nupur : bachkani hai toh bachkani hi sahi par jab tak tum mere dost nahi bante aur mujse sidhe se baat nahi karte me dance nahi karne wali
Mayank : hum dost toh hai
Nupur : nahi jab tak tum sidhe se nahi kahoge me nahi manungi.
Mayank : theek hai meri Maa hum dost hai ab khush ab chale ?
Nupur : nahi

Mayank : tum chahti kya ho ?
Nupur : by god Mayank tum bhi na, abhi abhi toh mene kaha tumse k hum achche frnd nahi banege tab tak me dance nahi karungi
Mayank : hum frnds toh hai ab aur kya hai ?
Nupur : aise nahi
Mayank : toh kaise ?
Nupur raise her hand toward him for handshake and asks "Friends?" Mayank accept it and shakes his hand n smile "Friends"

Nupur : by god Mayank tum haste bhi ho ?
Mayank : dekho Nupur [Nupur cuts]
Nupur : ok sorry
Mayank : ab chale practise karne ?
Nupur : ha

They continues their practise. In music room Gunjan starts her practise but she can't concentrate Geet notice that and asks

Geet : kya hua Gunjan ? tum ghabhrayi hui kyun ho ?
Gunjan : kuch nahi Geet woh bas muje thoda dar lag raha hai ?
Geet : dar ? par kis baat ka ?
Gunjan : woh me pehli baar stage par perform karungi na toh bas thodi ghabhrahat ho rahi hai
Geet : dun't worry Gunjan hum sab bhi toh perform karne wale hai na.
Gunjan : ha Geet par di Mayank ke sath aur tum Samrat ke sath perform karoge par me toh akeli hu na, 1 toh pehli baar stage pe perform karungi wo bhi akeli
Geet : bas itni si baat koi baat nahi hum tumhe akele perform nahi karne denge
Gunjan : matlab ?
Geet : matlab kuch nahi tum apni practise start karo ok?
Gunjan : ok

Samrat comes to music room and says

Samrat : hey Geet, hey Gunjan
Geet and Gunjan : hey
Samrat : Gunjan tumhari song practise ho gayi ?
Gunjan : nahi woh me kar rahi hu
Samrat : koi baat nahi kar lo aur ab toh tumhe dar nahi lag raha hai na ?
Gunjan : nahi Samrat
Samrat : ok aur Geet hamara performance ready hai na
Geet : ha samrat but mene kuch aur bhi socha hai
Samrat : kya batao
Geet : ruko pehle Mayank and Nupur ko bula lo
Samrat : ok

Samrat goes to call Mayank and Nupur and they all comes to music room. Geet tells her plan to everyone and all agrees with her plan. They complete their performance and goes to changing room. On other side Maan got every information about Mayank and Samrat. Maan in his mind "Mr. Samrat Shergill so it's u....bt remember 1 thing u r nuthing infront of MAAN SINGH KHURANA" and smiles. He comes to college and takes his seat. Principal comes and says thnx for coming. They talk for some time and Principal introduce him with whole staff and some other guest.
Meanwhile anchor comes and starts announcement.
All performer comes 1 by 1 and gives their performance.

Now just four performance left and it's non another then colleage's best group. Maan was about to leave but he stops hearing Geet's group name.

Precap :
Mayur dance
Gunjan sings
Samrat and Geet's performance
Wht geet told 2 every1?



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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
hey sis thnx 4 updating ...
thnx a lot

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Posted: 08 March 2011 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
awesome update
Wonda wy Maan needs an agent
Atleast mayur r frends now
Samrat betta watch out cuz MSK is behind him
Wonda hu'z gunna win da talent show
Cont soon Xx.,,
Thx 4 the PM

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