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Posted: 08 February 2011 at 12:39pm | IP Logged
tht was sooooooooo awesomeeeeeeee

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Posted: 09 February 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
hey plzzz update soon

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lovely update dear
please update soon
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nice part.....
do cont soon.......
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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
This is dedicate to ma luv, ma lyf, ma everything.

yupe "Raj" this is specially 4 u. hope u ll lyk it


7 days of xtreme luv



days sheet



7 feb - rose day
























8 feb - propose day














9 feb - chocolate day












10 feb - teddy day












11 feb - promise day










12 feb - kiss day










13 feb - hug day








14 feb - valentine day









































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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:19pm | IP Logged



Part 5 :-

 

Maan tries to find Geet bt he can't find her. He walked outside of college n called his driver to pick him bt driver says dat he is stuck in traffic and he'll reach may b after 2 hrs. Meanwhile a bike-rider comes there and stops bike near Maan. Maan jumps coz bike-rider near about to hit him. He was about to shout at bike-rider bt he stops when bike-rider removes helmet.

 

 

Maan shouts : tum ? Tumhe dikhta nahi hai kya ? abhi tum muj pe bike chalane wali thi

Geet : chalayi nahi na bas now come on betho

Maan : kya ? kya kaha tumne ? bethu vo b tumhare piche is bike pe ?

Geet : tumhe sunayi nahi deta mene wahi kaha ab betho m getting late mere pas tumhare liye pura din nahi hai

Maan : nahi muje hospital jane ka koi shauk nahi hai aur mene tumse nahi kaha meri help k liye samji tum

Geet : dun't show me ur attitude aaj Mumbai me kuch prob ki vajah se main roads block kar di gayi hai sham tak b ghar nahi pahuchoge samje bike se andar k raste se pahuch jayenge now come on betho

 

Principal comes

 

Principal (2 Maan) : are aap abhi tak yahi hai ? (2 geet) Geet tum inhe drop karne nahi gayi ?

Geet : Sir me to keh rahi hu bt attitude dikha rahe hain

Principal : Mr. Khurana mene hi Geet se kaha tha k vo aap ko drop kar de aap ko problem hogi q ki sare raste block hain

Maan : ok bt r u sure k ye bike chala sakti hai ?

Principal : ye aap kya keh rahe hain Geet to bike champ hai.

Maan shocked : kya ? ye aur bike champ ?

Geet : Sir, inse kahiye mere paas pura din nahi hai bahut sare kaam hai.

 

Peon calls Principal n he leaves.

 

Geet : now come on m getting late.

Maan : let me drive tum mere piche beth jana

Geet : no ways n dunt argue ok if u want 2 go home then come on and sit.

 

Maan sits behind Geet coz he dunt want 2 argue with her n his hand also paining. Geet drives to his hotel Maan couldn't believe himself that Geet can drive bike so well after all she's bike champ (Maan smiles). Geet stops bike at red signal with sudden break Maan looses his balance and landed on Geet's back.

 

Geet : pakad k betho varna gir jaoge

Maan : mene piche pakda hua tha bt tum aise suddenly break lagaogi toh yahi hoga

Geet : Idiot mene piche nahi muje pakadne k liye kaha n it's 4 ur safety otherwise it's ur choice.

Maan : kya ? tumne muje idiot kaha ?

Geet : aur nahi toh kya kahu ? break lagti hai toh insan piche nahi aage ki aur hi girta hai itni toh c.s. honi chaiye

Maan : c.s ? ab ye c.s. kya hai ?

Geet : lo tumhe toh commen sense hi nahi pata, toh hogi kaha se.

 

They stops their fight when horn disturb them. She looked up it's green signal

 

In college Mayank and Nupur finished their dance practice and Gunjan finished her singing practice. Samrat is worried now he's trying to find Geet. He's sure that she must be gone 4 bike-ride bt it's too late it's 7pm she didn't came 4 her lunch too n her cell is also switched off. Mayank asks Samrat that y he is worried wht happened ? Samrat tells everything n they try to find Geet. All students left n even principal too. They stay in parking she must be on the way n she will reach nytime at college.

 

On other side Geet getting restless even on the bike they stuck in traffic. She's hungry now she finds coffee shop n stops. Maan asks her.

 

Maan : tumne bike q roki hotel kafi dur hai.

Geet : muje pata hai samje kuch khaya nahi tumhari wajah se now m getting hungry ok aur tumhe jana hai toh tum jao m very tired.

Maan : theek hai itna bhadkti q ho ?

Geet : me tumhare sath argue karna nahi chahti let's go

 

They went in coffee shop. Geet charge her mobile and switch on it n she shocked countless missed call from Samrat and Mayank. She immediately calls Samrat.

 

Geet : hey

Samrat : thnk god yaar tumne call kiya agar agle 15 min me tumse baat ni hoti to hum tumhare ghar call karne wale the. Par tum ho kaha ? aur tumhara cell switch off q aa raha tha ? tum theek toh ho na ? tumne lunch kiya ya nahi ?

Geet : come on yaar saans toh le lo itne sare sawal 1 saath q puch rahe ho ?

Samrat : tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na tum pura din college me nahi thi upar se tumhara cell switch off ab batao tum ho kaha

Geet : oh Samrat vo me traffic me fas chuki hu yaar

Samrat : par kaise ? pehle ye batao tumne lunch kiya ya nahi ?

Geet : kaha yaar abhi juz coffee shop me aayi hu coffee aur sandwich kha lungi tumne aur Mayank ne khaya ?

Samrat : aaa....wo..wo..ha Geet humne lunch kar liya.

Geet : dunt lie Samrat, I kno it okkkk tum dono muje chor ke kabhi lunch nahi karte aur tum mujse juth bol b nahi sakte

 

Mayank snatches the phone

 

Mayank : Geet tum theek toh ho na ? tumne apna cell switch off q kar rakha tha ? tumhe pata hai hamne kitni bar tumhe call kiya ? tum atleast hame batakar toh jaa sakti thi na. tum abhi kaha ho hum abhi aa rahe hai.

Geet : yaar Mayank 1 hi baat kitni bar kahu. ha me theek hu dun't worry, me bas traffic me fas gayi hu aur kuch nahi, me bilkul theek hu muje kuch nahi hua abhi me 1 coffee shop me hu aur thodi der bad me hotel pahuch rahi hu

Mayank : kya ? hotel par q ? kis liye ?

 

Samrat snatches the phone

 

Samrat : Geet ye kya hai yaar ? tum hotel q jaa rahi ho ?

Geet : r yaar koi 1 baat karo me dono ko 1 hi baat ni bataungi. Samrat me vo (in low voice dusht danva ko drop karne aayi hu)

Samrat : ab yeh dusht danav kaun hai Geet ?

Geet : r vahi jo subah mila tha

Samrat : kya ? par q Geet ? aur usne tumhe jo subah kaha uske baad b tumne uski help q ki ?

Geet : kya karu yaar Princi ne bola toh mana nahi kar payi muje koi shauk nahi hai uski help karne ki

 

(Maan was listening her convo with full interest bt didn't here dat she called him dusht danav coz her voice was too slow)

 

Samrat : hum tumhe uske sath 1 pal b nahi rukne denge tum address batao aur waise b ab traffic kafi clear ho chuka hai so hum waha aa rahe hai

Geet : ok me msg karti hu n ya meri car ki key mene tumhe hi di thi

Samrat : wht ? agar tumhare car ki key mere pas hai to tum kaise gayi ? chal k gayi kya ?

Geet : oye nahi yaar vo me Mayank ki bike leke aayi hu

Samrat : Geet tum nahi badlogi

Geet : ya ryt me nahi badlungi ab phone rakho me tumhe address msg karti hu

Samrat : ok bt plz jab tak hum na aaye tum coffee shop se hilna mat ok hum jaldi aayenge

Geet : ok bye

Samrat : bye

 

They hangs up. Geet looks at Maan who was staring at her non stop.

 

Geet : ab tumhe kya hua ?

 

Maan didn't reply as he was too much busy in staring at her. Geet tapped on his shoulder n he came back to his sense.

 

Geet : Wht happen ?

Maan : nahi woh me........wo actually wo me

Geet : is se aage bhi kuch bologe ya nahi ?

Maan : wo me actually tumse kehna chahta tha ki I m so (he couldn't complete his sentence and disturb by waiter. He give them coffee and went)

Maan murmurs : ise b abhi aana tha badi mushkil se sorry and thnx bolne jaa raha tha

Geet : kya keh rahe the tum ?

Maan : wo me Geet

Geet : tumhe mera naam kaise pata ?

Maan : wo Principal ne tumhe tumhare naam se bulaya to pata hai

Geet : ok aage bolo

Maan : aage ? aage kya bolu ?

Geet : wahi jo tum keh rahe the kab se wo me,,,wo me,,,wo me kar rahe ho kuch bologe ya nahi ?

Maan : ha wo me actually tumse kehna chahta hu k

Geet : off ohh tum bol rahe ho ya nahi last 15 min se tum yahi bol rahe ho now last tym agar bolna hai toh 1 baar me bol do

Maan (slowly) : sorry and thank you

Geet shocked : wht ? wht u told I didn't heard it

Maan (bit louder) : sorry and thank you

Geet : babaji wht I m listening ? is he really telling me sorry and thanks ?

 

She pinched her self n screams "ouch n murmurs ya m not dreaming"

 

Maan : wht happen ? 1 toh me tumhe sorry aur thnx bol raha hoon aur tum muje tewar dikha rahi ho ?

Geet : nahi vo bas tum sorry n thnx b bol sakte ho that's gr8

Maan : so u r making fun of me.

Geet : no I was juz telling that u can also say sorry n thnx n it's gr8

 

In clg Mayank takes Geet's car n sits. Nupur sits in front seat. Gunjan opens back door bt Samrat closed it n he says

 

Samrat : Gunjan tum mere sath bike pe chalo

Gunjan : par me vo di k sath

Nupur : koi baat nahi Gunjan tum jao waise b Samrat bechara bike pe akela rahega so tum uske sath jao

 

 

Gunjan went n sits behind Samrat. They drives toward coffee shop. Samrat and Gunjan talks and in Car Mayank and Nupur talks n fights.

 


 

They reached coffee shop and then Samrat and Mayank hugs Geet. Maan didn't like it. Geet went to Gunjan and Nupur and hug them too. They decided to went restaurant 4 dinner. Mayank asks Maan 4 dinner n he agrees. Samrat didn't lyk it and looks at Geet. Geet understands and whisper in his ear "me bhi nahi chahti k vo hame join kare bt Mayank ne kaha toh kya kar sakte hai bt dun't worry he told me sorry and thnx also." Samrat smiles weakly and they left 4 dinner.

 

Precap :-

Dinner

 

Sorry frnds 4 lt update n can't update dinner part it's too long part ll update it in nxt part hope u all lyk it

 

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Edited by avani_9 - 10 February 2011 at 3:28pm

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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 3:48pm | IP Logged
gr8 awesum amazing update
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