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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
please continue

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coooooooooooooooooooool story dear!!!!!
w8ing for teh next update :)

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 6:36am | IP Logged

Part 4 :-

 

Geet was still upset with Maan's fight she want to divert her mind frm that thought n goes to basketball court.

Maan left principal office n moved toward main door his cell rang he stops to pick up call. Suddenly he saw a girl who was playing baskeball he tries to catch a glimpse of her n when he saw her he was totally shocked to see Geet playing basketball slightly smile comes on his face. He forget that where he was n where he's going suddenly he come out from his thought when his hand got injured by glass of window.

 

He screams in pain "aaawww" Geet turned 2 see dat who's screaming ? Geet shocked 2 see Maan then she walked toward him bt she stopped she thought about morning accident which made her stop. She was about 2 walk toward basketball court bt she immediately turned back n looked down at floor n shocked 2 see blood. She run toward him n took his hand in her hand she was near about 2 cry bt she stops.

She dragged him 2 medical room n made him sit. She took 1st add-kit box and took cotton and clean the cut from dettol and apply medicine on it and asked him.

 

Geet :- it's hurting ?

[Maan was too much busy in staring Geet. He can see pain in her eyes bt didn't understand y so much pain in her eyes]

Geet (louder) :- is it hurting u ?

 

Maan come back 2 his sense and nodes. Maan thinks that he told too much 2 Geet in the morning. He shuldn't use that such a cheap word 2 her.

 

Geet :- r u going 2 tell me dat it's hurting u or not ? I m little bit worried

Maan wondered :- y r u worried about me ?

Geet :- m nt worried abt u, m worried abt my dressing.

Maan shocked :- kya ? kya kaha tumne ? tumhe meri nahi tumhari dressing ki fikar hai ? aur me jaan sakta hu kyun ?

Geet :- q ki mene isse pahle kabhi kisi ki dressing nahi ki na so I dun't kno kaise karte hai ?

Maan more shocked :- kya ? aur tumne pehla experiment muj pe kiya ? tum ye bat muje pehle nahi bata sakti thi ?

Geet :- 1 toh mene tumhari help ki aur tum thnx kehne k wajah muje tewar dikha rahe ho u r juz disgusting.

Muje tumhari help karni hi nahi chahiye thi.

Maan :- ha toh q ki ? mene toh nahi kaha tha tumhe help k liye.

Geet left the room in anger without saying a word. She was already disturbed about morning fight and his words and now he's behaving lyk this.

Geet murmurs : if he can't say thnx or sorry den can't he just shut his mouth.

 

After Geet left, maan murmurs : oh shit Maan wht u done u want to apologize to her bt u, u create more prob n now she is more angry n sad too coz of my behaviour.

 

On other side Samrat tries to find Geet. He checks every room he thought that may b she's in Music room. He went 2 music room he doesn't find Geet bt he sees Gunjan who was little bit scared and worried. He went toward her and asked

 

Samrat :- hey Gunjan kya hua ? sab theek toh hain na ?

Gunjan :- ha sab theek hai

Samrat :- toh fir tum itni pareshaan q dikh rahi ho ?

Gunjan :- nahi vo me bas aise hi

Samrat :- dekho tumhe darne ki jarur nahi hai tum muje bata sakti ho ? tumhe muj pe yakin hai na ?

Gunjan :- nahi vo aisi baat nahi hai

Samrat :- matlab tumhe muj pe yakin nahi hai ? tum muje apna dost nahi manti ?

Gunjan :- nahi Samrat mene aisa kab kaha tum mere dost ho.

Samrat smiles :- toh fir batao kya bat hai ?

Gunjan :- vo Samrat kal muje song gana hai aur me decide nahi kar paa rahi hoon to me bas

Samrat :- are itni si baat k liye itna dar rahi thi. Dun't worry i'll help u. muje tumhare songs k list do

 

Samrat reads all songs and then select 1 and asked Gunjan that if she's comfortable with that song or what ? She agreed bt she was scared coz she hvn't perform in college or anywhere. Samrat understood her restlessness n told her not to worry



In dance room Mayank n Nupur r doing their dance practice. Nupur forget some steps.

Mayank :- Nupur ye tum kya kar rahi ho ?

Nupur :- dance kar rahi hu tumhe dikhta nahi hai kya ?

Mayank :- dance kar rahi ho vo to muje b pata hai par ye kaun se step hai ?

Nupur :- jo tumne sikhaye hai vahi hai

Mayank :- mene tumhe aise koi step nahi sikhaye tum bhul gayi aur apni galti b nahi manti.

Nupur :- to me kya karu tumne aise hard step jo bataye hai.

Mayank :- ye kuch hard nahi hai, tumhare bahane hai dance na karne k.

Nupur :- tum apne aap ko kya Michael Jackson samjte ho kya ? agar me bhul gayi to dubara nahi sikha sakte ?

Mayank :- sikha sakta hu par tum aise bhulti rahogi na to hum next year ki party me apna dance jarur kar lenge samji.

Nupur murmurs : sadu kahi ka

Mayank :- kya ? kya kaha tumne ?

Nupur :- kuch nahi kaha

Mayank :- nahi tumne kuch to kaha vo b muje

Nupur :- tumhe aisa q lagta hai k mene kuch kaha vo b tumhe ? by god!! Mayank tum bhi na

Mayank :- dekho tumne kuch to kaha hai aur mene suna b

 

Gunjan n Samrat enters.

 

Samrat :- dude ye kya hai ? tum dono fir lad rahe ho ?

Mayank :- me nahi ye

Nupur :- juth q bol rahe ho ?

Mayank :- me nahi tum juth bol rahi ho.

Samrat shouts :- stop !!! bas bahut ho gaya ab tum bina lade practice karoge. Kal hame performance dena hai, tum dono ka fight drama nahi dikhana hai

Mayank :- ha vahi to par ye dance step hi bhul rahi hai

Samrat :- dekho tum dono 1 dusre ko co-operate karo, Mayank ise dubara sikha do aur Nupur tum is bar yad rakhna ok ?

Nupur :- ok Samrat

Mayank :- meri baat toh man hi nahi rahi thi

Nupur :- tumne kaha tum dubara nahi sikhaoge

Samrat :- tum dono practice kar rahe ho ya tum dono ka naam cancel kardu ?

Mayank n Nupur :- nahi. hum practice kar rahe hai.

 

On otherside Maan tries to find Geet bt he can't find her. He walked outside of college n called his driver to pick him bt driver says dat he is stuck in traffic and he'll reach may b after 2 hrs. Meanwhile a bike-rider comes there and stops bike near Maan. Maan jumps coz bike-rider near about to hit him. He was about to shout at bike-rider bt he stops when bike-rider removes helmet.

 

Precap :-

Bike-rider ?????

Sajan, Mayur n Geet's dinner



Prev :- PART 3


Next :-PART 5




Edited by avani_9 - 10 February 2011 at 3:55pm

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged
dont tell me  Bike-rider is geet!!!!... loved it........

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i think d bike rider is none other thn Geet

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 7:23am | IP Logged
the bike rider is 100% geet only the precap is also nice

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditiwalia56

dont tell me  Bike-rider is geet!!!!... loved it........



aditi i also dun't kno who is bike-rider LOLWink

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Posted: 05 February 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
wait who is the bike rider... Hmmm lets guess Oh gosh is it Geet...Maan si somehow already flatered..now total...gone i think if it  is Geet

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