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FF-Tum Kaun Ho? (Chapters1-23) (Page 88)

MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:29am | IP Logged
hey that was a very cool part..i'am seriously enjoying the way the story is maan is unable to tell dadi the truth...& dadi is happy in her own it is so obvious that neither geet nor maan would want to break dadi's this leaves maan, geet in a fix....but to tell you the truth i'am liking it very much to see maan geet in this situation where they are caught it is Christmas & a welcoming change has come...maan has accompanied his family to the Mass prayer.....well though by force but it is nice to see maan behave as a part of his family...i was laughing my life put at jd's questions, maan geet's embarrassment....bechare maan maan does not remember geet from his uni..but if i'am not wrong they both were in the same class right? do tell me if i'am the story is moving forward it is getting clear that there is some mystery in maan, geet's relationship... which maan is not aware of....anyway good going...the last scene were maan kisses geet....hmmm....i'am sure soon these kisses, hugs would not be just a show off,  when they pretend  to be boyfriend, girlfriend for the coming months....i'am kinda  sure that is dikhave ke rishthe mein, bohat jaldi they will develop feelings & attachment towards one another...very well written...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapdo continue soon.....Smile

Edited by Surya.Ravi - 12 February 2011 at 12:30am

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pop77 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
nice part..Maan still don't remember that Geet study with her,,
Water. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
He he......EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Maan.......lolz....he was thinking he would not mind another kiss with Geet...n lolz...he was just looking at an opportunity.
N Geet...hugging and holding hands...but no kissing....hehehe........LOLLOLLOL
Loved the update....
Thanks so much.
Dhara_s IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Lovely ! The messier the situation, the story is gonna get more lovely...literally !
doosheeka Goldie

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
maan is going to kiss geet on every occasion that he can.............
smj1977.shruti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:26am | IP Logged
"That may be, but a bit of hugging and hand holding is enough. No kisses."
how can Maan resist kissing you darlingLOL
when all he was doing was dreamingSleepy about it the whole nightLOL
well Lakshmi when are you planning to make Maan realize
who this Geet is?
aamirkhanfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!awesome update..............
--aarthi-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 February 2011 at 1:48am | IP Logged
wow second kiss...all i did was laughing today reading ur FF...dnt ask y i itself dnt knw...

If the circumstances were different, he might admit that the kiss was actually enjoyable and he wouldn't mind a repeat opportunity.

after reading this line i rolled out and the only  thing tat came in ma mind as im tamil is ada pavi

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