Originally posted by: deniacreserved...me first.... yipeeee 😆
wow laxmi... now i hv started to get a hang of ur story.... so Maan and Geet are of same age...26 as of now...were lab partners and used to get along well.... Naintara n Dev are married and Vicky and Meera.... Vicky n Meera have a son named JD..... JD calls Geet GT....but what's T in GT??Geet actually drops of JD to school n all so she does lot of personal work at Khuranas ..... hmmm...n her character in college looks like Pinky's character today...chubby n always eating.....Nice nice..... will wait for more chapters to unfold....
90% of what you have here is correct, but if I explain the 10% that is not correct, that will give away parts of the story that I do not want to give away. However, you have done a great job pulling out the details from the story, and you should see your conclusions confirmed as I continue to update.
Originally posted by: zahra15nice update....bt i fink i have 2 read it once more cz its a bit confusing right nw..........
....zahra....
I think perhaps, what is confusing is the jumping back and forth between different dates? This story is not a linear story, well at least not the way I intend to tell it. Pay very close attention to the years, that should help you keep track of where you are in the story. Parts that have dates before 2010 can be thought like flash backs, and parts that are 2010 or later would be like the present. I think that I will go back through the updates and change the dating format to make them stand out more. Most updates will not have this much going back and forth.
Let me guess....somewhere along the way have Geet and Maan gotten married too.,..there is no other reason for Vicky's son to call Geet Tayee...I am assuming the T in GT stands for tayee.....interesting.....Geet has always carried a torch for Maan...doubly interesting!!!
This story is much too complicated- Every time you post a part I have to go back and read the other parts too just to make sure I caught everything.
Interesting update....Cant wait for the next part!
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