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Agar Tum Miljao AK FF ||New! Part 2|| Page 3|| (Page 2)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 3:02pm | IP Logged
Hey great start.. continue sooon..

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:31am | IP Logged

I know the starting is kinda of like other ffs but it will go its own way. 

Part 1

It was a wedding house, each and every corner of the house after all THE ANGAD KHANNA was getting married and not only that, he was getting married to a middle class girl.

The media was surrounding the house to find out why a middle class girl. The Khanna's are a rich, powerful family. They have always been big and successful. And Khanna Industries has been in running in the Khanna family for generations. This is why everyone infront his house, to find out what does middle class KRIPA SHARMA have that  one of the most powerful families of the city decided to take her in as her bahu.

The mansion was filled with happiness that the great Angad Khanna was finally getting married. People danced and enjoyed but upstairs in the bedroom a whole new drama was taking place.

Angad was pushed into his room by his cousins. Immature! He thought. He went to the washroom and he failed to notice the bride sitting on his bed.

She was staring him the whole time, how can he not notice a person sitting here, she thought. Its okay, he will notice me when he comes out..She thought.

She looked down at herself and saw her in a red, beautiful langha. It suddenly dawned to her that she was married.Oh My God! I'm married to him, I'm married to THE Angad Khanna! What now? Stupid Kripa it's your Suhaag raat what do you think. She started to think to herself, even though she was exited that she was married she didn't want to do 'THAT'. She bit her lip in nervousness. I mean you need love right? Well that what they show in movies..Her thoughts broke when she heard him come out of the washroom. She moved a little, trying to relax herself, her bangles made a soft noise.

His eyes snapped up immediately and flared in anger as soon as he saw her.

"What are you doing here in MY room?" He said. It was clear that he was trying to control his anger.

"Woh , Hamari shaadi-"

"Mein ne dadi se kaha tha, ke I want you in another room"

"What?"

"Look this is MY room, so just GET OUT!"  He roared.

She flinched when he yelled. She hadn't expected this...

"Dadi ne khaha, to go in your room..."She said softly.

Uff Dadi! He thought.

"Get off MY bed first" He said, Okay so was a little temperamental when people touched his things, so what?

She got off at once, not wanting him to get angrier.

"Sofa, you're going to sleep there" She looked at him big eyes, shocked that he is going make her sleep on the sofa.

"Badi, badi aankho se mat dekho or ye lo" he threw her a blanket. "Go!"

"By the way listen, this marriage doesn't mean anything to me, so no commitments. I don't expect anything from you and you and expect anything from me" He said. He wanted get things clear, just because he married her doesn't mean she can interfere in his life.

 "Too Late "She said in a whisper so low he couldn't even hear that.

"I need to get back to work, I have important work to finish. This shaadi business slowed me down a lot already. " He said as he sat on the bed with his laptop.

Shocked as shell she went and lied down on the sofa while he went back to his laptop. Silent tears ran down her face while she was still trying to figure out what just happened...So this is why he wouldn't talk to her on the day they met. This answers so many questions. But why her? What had she done to deserve such a fate? All her life she has always wanted a husband who would love her and make her feel special and this is what she gets...And the biggest thing of all, no one had even warned her about this. She sniffed, a little too loud and she look up to see if he noticed but her so called husband was too preoccupied with his laptop...

Kripa woke up from the sun in the morning, She looked around and he wasn't there. She got dressed and went down stairs looking from Angad. Maybe he was in a bad mood yesterday? She knew it wasn't true but she was trying to convince herself that everything was okay, and that her marriage could still mean something.

"Beta, kya hua, kisse dundh rahi ho?" Dadi asked her when she saw Kripa looking like a lost puppy in their mansion.

"Dadi woh Anagd..." And she broke down right there.

Dadi understood what must have happened at their suhaag raat. Yeh Angad kabhi nahi sudherega! She thought angrily.

"Beta ro mat. Kya kaha Angad ne tuhme?"

"Dadi *Hiccup* woh *Hiccup*..." She narrated the whole incident. She didn't know why but she felt as if she can trust her. Something just clicked between them.

Dadi had her eyes lowered in shame listening to Angad's behaviour and she knew why. After Angad and Simi's engagement broke he had started acting like this. After a while Angad didn't bother to change, he liked the new him. He let no one near so no one ever hurt him after that.

"Beta I am so sorry for his behaviour"

"Ab mein kya karoon Dadi? Mera kya? He doesn't care at all" She said as she wiped her tears.

"Beta shyaad tum use badal sako, I know he is a little temperamental-"

"A little, A LITTLE! He is not a little temperamental, he has temper issues. Dadi have you ever thought so sending him the coaching classes? Maybe they will help. Actually no not classes, sedhe asylum bhj dejiye inhe. Who does that? On their wedding night and you know he made me sleep on the couch too!" She whined and made a pouting face.

Dadi smiled, she is perfect, the perfect bride for him and bahu for this house. I guess she just needs a little encouragement Dadi thought.

"Beta, why don't you try? Why don't you show Angad that you are his wife and its going to stay that way"

"App pagal ho gayi hai dadi, woh muhje kachha chabba jayenge, And after knowing him for a day I don't think I want to get closer. Aur mein apse bhi gussa hu" And she turned her face away from dadi.

"Humne kya kiya?"

"Apne muhje inse shaadi kyun karayi? Woh toh muhse nafrat karte hai" She replied

"Beta, I am so sorry, I saw you and I liked you, because you are the exact opposite of him. You are what he needs in his life. You are his wife, please beta someone needs help him. He lives in a shell, someone needs to break him out of it" Dadi started at Kripa but Kripa didn't reply.

"Oh ho beta, If you don't try than you will have to live with this temperamental Angad. Ab soch lo, Do you want to repeat yesterday night. And now your his wife nothing can be done right, So do you want yours and Angad's relations ship to be like this for the rest of your life?

"Nahi..."

"Aur tuhme Angad pasand hai?"

"Yes" She said shyly. She like him but she likes him even better when he doesn't talk.

"Toh fir theek hai ajj tum uske favourite khana banogi, Chinese food" Dadi said with a big smile, she could already imagine it, this is perfect.

"Mein woh... I can make tea and eggs and stuff but not main meals" She said embarrassed

"Koi baat nahi uski favourite restaurant se manga lenge or bol denge tumne banaya" Dadi replied. Kripa smiled

"So does that smile mean I'm forgiven?"

"No, I am still mad" And she turned her face again.

Next Chap: Angad reaction to food :D

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Here it is Comments, Critisism all welcome :P


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Edited by starasdf - 27 January 2011 at 6:14pm

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Hey great part.. continue soon..

Thanks for the pm..

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by AKForever

Hey great part.. continue soon..

Thanks for the pm..

Thanks and Np (:

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:33pm | IP Logged
Amazing update! I loved it. Angad's not nice. But wow, i hope Angad doesn't figure out that Kripa didn't make the food cause he'll be really pissed off.

Cont soon and thanks for the PM!

-Jot. 
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:59pm | IP Logged
wowow!  awesome update! i love how dadi has so much faith in kripa...so im wondering what she does now to get angad's love....

do continue soon and thanks for the pm!

~Naina

ps. there's like 2 parts where it says Geet instead of krpa....just thought of letting you know :)
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
RUJJU!!!!
 i am glad you posted it!! You already know my veiws on it! i feel honured
to have read it first haha!! I wanna read more!! ;)
and I don't think I have to tell you that you I want a pm for the updates!!
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
Anagd is too bad i want to kick him...awesome part i hope kripa teach him lesson with help of dadi..

why he is so mean dil nahi hai usske paas ..please update soon so want to see him hurt also

Thank you for pm.

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