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.:Poem - It was all but a dream:. (Page 2)

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Mugdha aww this is just amazing!, a bit sad though..i loved it..it suits their currant situation 

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
wow!!! I could feel that exactly!!
 
beautiful poem!
 
 

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:06pm | IP Logged
Mugdha! Mugdha! Mugdha! Wonderful! I cannot call you cutemug anymore..that's for li'l kids, and you are clearly not a kidSmile! Very maturely and sensitively written.

Well done. Very melancholic. I loved the imagery this part conveyed:

"The slight graze of his fingers against mine..I grope into the dark endlessly"

Very nice dear! Impressed!


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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 3:09pm | IP Logged
OMG ! It was sooo good ! Like seriously !! I'm really impressed. So beautiful, sincere and well-written..  very touchingSmile loved it !!!!!Hug


Edited by yoyolo - 24 January 2011 at 3:09pm

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged

Simply, wow!

I really can't find the words to express what I felt while reading this wonderful poem of yours!
...Not only did it touch my heart, it completely got me, hit me in the chest. The magnitude of emotions!
 
I'm real glad that you sent a PM. Please, continue to do so in the future! (:
 
It was all but a dream...
Or was it?
 
At the end of the day, we still hope. One of our strengths! This belief is what keeps us going!
 
Once again, amazing job done!
 
=]

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
cutieeeeeeeeeee
awesum work......Clap

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:34am | IP Logged
it is beautiful Clap

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged

@ Mayadika, Matwamango, Rosinha, Superkool, Sanabest, Saphira, Sab2778, Chakku, Ritz93, Mari, Sugaryanu,Aisho, all of you...

M soo glad and super happy that all of you liked my poem,

Thank you sooo much!!
Hug


Edited by cutemug - 25 January 2011 at 8:44am

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