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.:Poem - It was all but a dream:.

cutemug Senior Member
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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Heya all,Big smile

Posting another poem of mine which again isn't exactly written about Abhiya,
I had a totally different context in my mind when I wrote it,

But anyway after seeing Abhay-Piya's last rendezvous today,
I felt like posting it...

Please do comment and criticize everyone,

Love,

MugdhaBig smile

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It was all but a dream...

I really am desperate to let it out,
Tell him and tell him out loud that "I love him",


The time comes,

It does, but when I am just about to leave,

Go far away to some other place, far from the one where he is,


We meet, the moment of the final rendezvous arrives,

Bringing in the disquietude, ending the eternal wait,


I had anticipated it, for too long,

Like the earth, parched and lifeless,

Awaits the arrival of the Rain,


Like the peacock, who dances madly,

When he senses the moment,


Our eyes meet, a shooting star flashes by somewhere...


Can't look away from those conniving eyes,

Deep and magical as a dark mysterious night,

They lure me into the land of bliss,

They trap me, torture me, even make me blush to the deepest red,


But I see a tinge of sadness in them today,

Or is it wishful thinking on my part?

Like this moment should never end, that we never part ways, ever...


I give that little gift into his hands, which I spent hours designing,

Gently weaving into it dreams that I dreamt, the unrequited love which I actually lived,

When I tremendously loved him, Hoped and wished so badly, that he be mine someday,


Despite knowing that it is not meant to be...

Still, waiting for an answer, which I know will break my heart eventually...


The slight graze of his fingers against mine,

Like a sudden, unexpected bolt of lightning through the inert but restless sky,

Leaving behind an illusion that it still exists, the connection, but where is it?

I grope into the dark helplessly...


Hoping, holding out my hand nervously,

Wishing that he might grab it,

 
and that raindrops will wet my hand,

that it will rain so heavily, dampening my own voice,

Blinding my vision and giving me a sense of well being like never before,


And then, a fog engulfs me out of nowhere,


Its fuzzy and disconcerting...

All of sudden I wake up,

and realize that it was all but a dream,

Seemed so real, didn't it?


But wish however I may,

Can't escape from the fact that,

 
It was all but a dream...

Or was it?






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Edited by cutemug - 24 January 2011 at 10:51am

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Good Job cutemeg. Loved the words it went straight to my heart

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Love ur poem

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Bravo,fantastic,superb.....ClapWe have a lot of talent on this forum...Embarrassedway to go...Thumbs Up

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
aww....love it

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged
wonderfully written...amazingClapStar ur poem moved me...hats off to uSmile

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Mugdha, it was amazing!! I loved it!! So Pia! Wishful thinking? After today's episode, I don't think soApprove

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